Talk:PIP/Shunned/Testing

Well, it's going in a direction where something sexual tonight is probably a lot less avoidable than it was in the previous page. He would have to completely chicken out right now, and the way it is written makes him chickening out now something that doesn't make much sense.

That said, probably don't go straight for sex with the mom. Maybe mess with the dad a bit first. Start by stripping, since he does have sex on the brain and is already thinking in that direction. However, once he gets his dick out, he decides to start messing with his dad. First, wagging his dick in his face, then plopping it down right in the middle of his book. After that he urinates on the top-blankets right where his dad's crotch is to make it look like his dad had peed. (Revealing in the process that the results of his actions are noticeable. Also, not really into adult woman encounters in my stories, so it's a good excuse to draw back from him wanting to fuck his mother specifically when the both of them are getting all excited about the mess in his father's lap.) Jemini (talk) 17:41, 23 December 2019 (UTC)

You got it. That's actually a pretty good direction to take things anyway. I like the "vengeance on dad" aspect of the scenario. I'll probably be changing the composition of the family shortly, the large gap in ages between Lathan and Hannah compared to the small gap between Hannah and Leah seems rather artificial; not to mention limiting in diversity of sexual activity. After I have re-composed the family, I'll likely write the next page just as you have described. --Elerneron (talk) 08:44, 24 December 2019 (UTC)