Talk:Yes/Tom & Tash/D-1(G1) Br3, H-C, GT/Create a group of four

You wanted feedback, so here it is. I found that this entry flowed nicely. It is a slow build-up which is very fitting given the situation. It also does a good job of establishing the nature of some of the minor characters, which is good. I personally prefer straight or lesbian couplings, yaoi shota isn't a turn on for me, but it isn't a turn off either so I still enjoyed the passage. Get some yuri or three/foursome action and I'll be fine. Good job. --Elerneron (talk) 15:46, 28 February 2017 (CET)

Thank you that really helps with motivation! I deliberately didn't want to rush into the orgy, particularly with Matt. Katie already looks up to and trusts Tash, and stayed because of her,, so it made sense that she would be ok with her will being unwittingly changed for her. Matt stayed out of ignorance (he was distracted on his phone so wasn't paying attention!), and has been fairly freaked out by this whole ordeal. Even with the power of the ring, it just didn't feel right to make him perfectly happy with what he was doing, even though he knew he wanted to be doing it. But having him, as an eleven year old boy, being talked it to it by and older boy he can look up to and even admire just felt la lot more like he would be willing to relax about it all. Gender combinations don't really determine anything for me so I like yaoi, yuri and straight couplings; I also quite like the interaction dynamic between boys (that goes with or as part of the sex). (That said, I also like that between girls and between mixed couplings too!) But don't worry, there is definitely both some yuri and some three/four/plus-some action coming! --Jackmaster (talk) 16:12, 28 February 2017 (CET)