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I saw that you want Xander to ask Loki some questions.  I have a small list from Jemini on questions that Xander might want answered by Loki, but it would be helpful if you listed any questions that you feel that Xander should try to get the answer to from a reader's perspective.  It's harder for me to come up with those type of questions with the concept so firmly formed in my head.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 06:57, 2 November 2016 (CET)
I saw that you want Xander to ask Loki some questions.  I have a small list from Jemini on questions that Xander might want answered by Loki, but it would be helpful if you listed any questions that you feel that Xander should try to get the answer to from a reader's perspective.  It's harder for me to come up with those type of questions with the concept so firmly formed in my head.  --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 06:57, 2 November 2016 (CET)
I have plans for the story up to a certain point and once I reach that I will make it Open. [[User: ImBatman|ImBatman]] ([[User Talk:ImBatman|talk]]) 22 November 2016

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Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. --Elerneron (talk) 09:03, 11 October 2015 (CEST)

Some help, if you are using an effect tag, such as the heading I asked for in my talk page for votes, you need to put the tag on both sides. So, in the case of the heading with the equals signs, you would put the equal on both sides of the word, =like this, except with 2 equals instead of 1=

Also, if you are creating a link effect other than just putting in the address, such as linking to your profile, you need to put it in double square brackets. You can hit the edit button to see an example when I add my signature. Jemini


Yeah, I WILL resume 2T4U at some point. I just seem to have experienced a massive freaking burn-out on it. (well, I have contributed about 250 pages out of 300 to it, so I was really indulging in that thing.) As for the new story, yeah, I thought the premise the other guy, ExistenceCreator, came up with was pretty good. The only issue was that, like most newer writers, he REALLY rushed the introduction. And, also like most new writers, he fizzled fast due to not having a firm foundation to work from. So, I decided to re-boot the story using the same premise but a far more flushed out introduction. That premise definitely has some serious promise. I thought it should be done some proper justice. Jemini (talk) 01:08, 17 April 2016 (CEST)


I see no harm in asking, though I can't guarantee I'll fulfill the request. What did you have in mind? -- Gisèle de Rais (talk) 02:02, 30 May 2016 (CEST)

I'll pick one of those up next, I think. I already know how I want to do the scene with the box, as there's an event that has to happen during the time she's toying with it. I'm still not sure about the selfies branch. I have an idea how I want to do it, but I may wait until I can provide illustrations, as I intend to do with other parts of the story as well.

But I want to provide my own artwork or art made for the story, so that may take a while because I can't draw right now beyond some pixel art. I lack the means to go over my sketches digitally. -- Gisèle de Rais (talk) 03:10, 1 June 2016 (CEST)


LOL, you would request one of the most complicated paths I had planned. The game begins. --Elerneron (talk) 07:30, 1 June 2016 (CEST)

You edited Gisèle de Rais's User Page instead of her User Talk Page. User Pages are just for the user to modify. Please move your question to her talk page. --Elerneron (talk) 11:03, 23 September 2016 (CEST)

Hey I am open to suggestions on the Zoologists story. Let me know what you are wanting and I will see if I can add it. --Ploxs (talk) 13:02, 23 September 2016 (CEST)


If you would like to make some requests for Life Hacks things are going along at a good pace. I have a feeling that this one is going somewhere with both Jemini and myself working on it at the same time. If you aren't ready yet, that's fine too. --Elerneron (talk) 14:55, 10 October 2016 (CEST)


The interface was described in the story. The top bar is Like/Dislike, the second bar is Dominance/Submission, the third is Trust/Fear, the last is Platonic/Romantic Love . . . so you had most of them. --Elerneron (talk) 20:14, 15 October 2016 (CEST)


The tally is up on my part of the story. I'll be making a formalized way to add it today to make everything nice and uniform. --Elerneron (talk) 12:26, 16 October 2016 (CEST)

I'm sorry, it seems that some weird server lag issues resulted in me accidentally deleting your request. I only caught it because I looked back in the editing history after seeing the recent changes stating you had made a change to that page. Anyway, feel free to put it back up if you are still interested, just know that I am mostly just re-tracing the events as they would happen if Roni went to the park without panties on, witch will mostly be similar enough to use identical options tags up until around the same point the panties on version is up to now. Jemini (talk) 20:59, 16 October 2016 (CEST)


If you are comparing the world to a Star Trek holodeck, it's more like everyone is self-aware like Moriarty, but only a few individuals know the true nature of the universe as a simulation like Moriarty. So everyone is an alive, self-aware, sentient person; but only a few know that they are in a simulation. So everyone is a little like Moriarty, but only Xander and perhaps a select few others are fully aware of the situation like Moriarty. (Edit: It should also be noted that very few Players are aware that the lifies are alive, self-aware, sentient people.) --Elerneron (talk) 00:16, 18 October 2016 (CEST)

Well, I did DM for D&D for a while, so that sort of thing is really right up my ally. Jemini (talk) 20:20, 19 October 2016 (CEST)

-- I've never thought about adding anything like that (since i thought no one read my story) but I'll definitely think of adding a way to tell people that I accept requests. I haven't been writing as much as I used to since then, but if you'd like to request a specific path, I'd happily write it for you. Which path were you thinking of? -- Kitkatevermore (talk) 02:58, 24 October 2016 (CEST)

-- The plan for Ella's suspension was actually something along the lines of that. The path was supposed to have her constantly being seduced by her father (more or less forceful). I hadn't thought much about it though (oops). I love pregnancies too and have been meaning to start the routes with the other children. It was either the one with four or five kids that I planned to have all girls, a couple already pregnant. You've given me the motivation to write more today, so thanks for that. I'll try to add more to Ella's path soon -- Kitkatevermore (talk) 03:18, 24 October 2016 (CEST)

-- Ooh, I like how you think -- Kitkatevermore (talk) 03:34, 24 October 2016 (CEST)

-- Notsooldpervert You accidently posted something about Incest seduction on my talk page. I am not the author of that story Villenia is. DrAlithe (Talk) -- I see the mistake now I did go and edit the grammar of the story. I also like Incest seduction. DrAlithe (Talk)

-- Hmm. Maybe. I didn't like how I set the story up, so I'm going to try again with something similar. I'm thinking about a demigod thing, like what you said about Percy Jackson. I just need to figure out the general direction I want things to flow in, then I'll try to rewrite it Kitkatevermore (talk) 00:18, 31 October 2016 (CET)

Wound up having to eliminate the option you chose on the calling March decision point because I didn't have enough writing material before the next split point. So, I turned the "call after dinner" option into a heading with 3 more options under it. Jemini (talk) 06:01, 31 October 2016 (CET)


I saw that you want Xander to ask Loki some questions. I have a small list from Jemini on questions that Xander might want answered by Loki, but it would be helpful if you listed any questions that you feel that Xander should try to get the answer to from a reader's perspective. It's harder for me to come up with those type of questions with the concept so firmly formed in my head. --Elerneron (talk) 06:57, 2 November 2016 (CET)


I have plans for the story up to a certain point and once I reach that I will make it Open. ImBatman (talk) 22 November 2016