User talk:Twinklestar

I understand what you mean about not knowing if anyone is active. I am likely the most prolific writer on this site and it is only on rare occasion I am confronted with evidence people are reading my work, but there really are a lot of people reading even if it is only a small handful that give any feedback. I am certain if you write something someone will see it, I can't imagine I am the only person people read in any significant number, it is just that you have to write as frequently as I do in order to find out people are reading your stuff. Jemini (talk) 06:48, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

My general approach on the drop-outs from closed stories so far has been to ignore it, as frustrating as that may be. Also, I certainly know what you mean on wanting to collaborate with someone. I definitely get a boost to my creative energy if there is someone else working on the same story as I am. In fact, I really wouldn't mind working on something together with you if that's what you want to do.

As for a forum, there is no forum dedicated to working along side this story site. The closest thing we have to a forum is the mother site to this one, All The Fallen, which you can find over on the left under the "friends" label. If you got here without going through there though, I have to say I am somewhat surprised. It might be possible to open a thread under "writing discussion" specifically referencing the stories on this site.Jemini (talk) 15:51, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

FYI: The actual admins for this site are Elerneron and Iratu, I am not ACTUALLY any kind of official on this site other than the fact I am a Mod on ATF and the biggest contributor here. You probably had the right idea talking to me anyway though since being such a frequent contributor means I would respond a lot faster than Elerneron. (Also, Iratu just plain doesn't come over here unless Elerneron tells him he is needed beings he has owner privileges, Elerneron does the real admin work.)Jemini (talk) 15:58, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

I just took another read of your work. I gather English is probably not your first language? Your writing does look pretty fun in terms of the concepts you push, which shows you have some writing experience, so that is the only way I can see you messing up on the grammar and word-flow the way you do. In fact, the fact grammar and word-flow are your ONLY mistakes of note really cements in the concept you have some writing experience in another language. I can probably help with that.

If you are into lesbians, you could work on the female gender-switch angle of Life Hacks, the story I'm putting the most effort into right now. It was originally thought up by Elerneron, but I wound up making most of the contributions. The permissions are "open" on that one, and I have made a start into writing character bios on all the characters. (I do get a little overly technical with throwing out numbers and stuff though, which may explain why a lot of people don't like writing for that one, but I can catch you up to speed on it while also possibly simplifying the system at the same time. I never meant for it to be something that scares away outside contributions.)Jemini (talk) 16:14, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Notsooldpervert

I'm not a profficient enough writer to feel comfortable contributing, but most of Jemini's feedback seems to come from me. I've read just about everything that gets posted here, and i make requests and suggestions where it's plain that it's welcome. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:43, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

I like your story plot on Jemini's talk page. I like the idea of a 9 yo girl, former frat boy bully, getting gang banged and impregnated by a group of frat boy bullies (preferably the same ones he used to call friends).

Also, there are a LOT of unfinished stories here lol. Jemini and especially Elerneron have a tendency to start a great plot, then get bored and move on to another plot (kinda like the way I create new characters in RPG's cause that part is really fun for me). Take a look through the older stories. There's one called (I think) The End Of The World As We Know It where God gets fed up and hands the reigns to someone else who can make all the changes he wants. One line of change included underage public sex is encouraged, incest is encouraged, girls always get pregnant when semen hits their womb, bestiality is ok, and can knock a girl up (seriously, this girl got knocked up so many times that special provisions had to be made that a girl could only get pregnant the first day she was pregnant, and all babies would be born safely [for mother and children] regardless of species lol) She had just gotten knocked up with puppies (after a gangbang on the schoolbus) and was about to be found/fucked by her dad when Elerneron moved on to another story lol. Very disappointing, I must say, since I really wanted to shift views and see the single mom become a fuck toy for her sons lol or that same farm family wind up in a big incestuous orgy. (I REALLY want to see the look on dads face when the oldest daughter gives birth to over a dozen kids, then puppies, then whatever other animals she fucks that day since it was only lunch) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:05, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Tod Natürlich

Just a quick tip, you can put your signature automatically by entering "~~~~" (four consecutive tildes), or pressing the second to last button on top of the edit box, that's easier than writing your username yourself, and it automatically puts a link to your talk page, as well as the date and time of your post. Hope this help you. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 22:41, 14 July 2017 (UTC)