Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Visit1/Love/Answer/Vaginal/Wait

I feel bad about doubting you. I can confess now that I've been worried about this leg of the story for a while, thinking John was taking things way too fast with his daughters in front of Beatriz. I thought about asking you to reel it back a little, but stopped since I decided a while ago this was not my story, but anyone's that decided to write for it, and I would accept any direction they would took it.

Now I'm happy I didn't say anything, since it's clear you have a great grasp on Beatriz position on things, and there was no need for me to worry about it. So, once more, sorry for doubting you. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:47, 26 December 2017 (CET)

Honestly, my plan for this route is to mainly keep the reader off-balance with what they expect to happen Vs. what actually happens. I haven't really decided yet what's going to happen if you decide to actually push it, but for every route except #3 off this track it's mostly going to be kids acting like kids and mom acting concerned operating together to keep up a sense of cock-blocking and sexual frustration due to either ADD, jealous temper tantrums, fussy kids, or parental concern all throwing up road-blocks. If you've been keeping up with Telgar's "Hot Summer Job," I completely agree with the notion that you don't always want to give the player what they want and I also think his latest post makes sense 100% for the characters, but it also has the disadvantage of killing possibilities. Granted, a skilled writer can take something like that in interesting directions as well, but for this leg I don't plan to go quite that direction with this. Jemini (talk) 10:19, 26 December 2017 (CET)