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He's got two younger, more impressionable sisters. He'd be borderline kicking her out from the gangbang, add in getting fucked by a dog (and obviously liking it, not to mention in public) and she'd be gone. His family duty brought him back, giving up an education that would get him out of manual labor, and it's bad enough his sister is selfish enough to manipulate him into spoiling her, behavior like that (which might get picked up by the younger two) would be too much for anyone. Send her to live with Gary and his slutty mom. One (or all, for all he knows) of those babies might be his, after all. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:59, 9 January 2017 (CET) | He's got two younger, more impressionable sisters. He'd be borderline kicking her out from the gangbang, add in getting fucked by a dog (and obviously liking it, not to mention in public) and she'd be gone. His family duty brought him back, giving up an education that would get him out of manual labor, and it's bad enough his sister is selfish enough to manipulate him into spoiling her, behavior like that (which might get picked up by the younger two) would be too much for anyone. Send her to live with Gary and his slutty mom. One (or all, for all he knows) of those babies might be his, after all. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:59, 9 January 2017 (CET) | ||
I see Mitch trying to get Dana help rather than kicking her out. Unless Chad uses the ring's power that is. (Oh, and Mitch was only a few courses short of his degree, which he finished online while working, so he is a college graduate. His still works his ass off to provide a cushy life for his siblings.) --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 02:13, 9 January 2017 (CET) | |||
Also, it might make an interesting story to have Dana as a main character option. The kinds of things that she would do with the ring are ''very'' different than what Chad is doing with it. Not something I'm personally interested in writing, but definitely an interesting concept. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 02:18, 9 January 2017 (CET) | |||
I was wonderig about that. You set it up so Chad is the main character, but why would you want to "play" ad someone who didn't get the ring. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 02:58, 9 January 2017 (CET) | |||
I meant for the reader to choose who finds the ring on the first page. Chad is meant to be only ''one'' of the options. Others can be added, but that pretty much creates a separate story with the same history. That's also the reason that I went back and added Chad's name before all the entries, to lighten up on crossover when/if another main character is chosen/written about. I've actually thought about introducing a different storyline with a younger male protagonist, but felt a teenage boy would be more appealing as a main character for a certain skilled writer *cough* [[User:ArthurKung|Arthur Kung]] *cough* to write for if they were so predisposed. I may revisit my original idea at some point providing a second option (or third or more depending on if someone else starts a new character in the interim) for the main character. '''Edit:''' Actually, Gwen's best friend Maria's little brother Marco could work for that, but I really put him in as a potential trap/sissy. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 03:08, 9 January 2017 (CET) |
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I stand stand by my punishment suggestion: public creampie gangbang. Add to that make her ovulate 4 times so that each baby from the same pregnancy has a different father, none of them being Gary's (if he's capable after all the 'roid abuse) or Chad's (obviously). Maybe end the debauchery with her being publicly fucked, knotted, and tied with a dog (not frosty) and mayby have someone call her brother to come get her, so that he arrives just in time to see the dog cum inside her then try futiley to disengage from her. If she cums once or twice while tbe dog tugs away feom her then it will probably end her manipulatuon of the brother as well. He might even kick her out to limit her influence on their younger sisters. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:27, 8 January 2017 (CET)
I personally like the idea of Chad keeping her as a "pet" and humiliating her for he rest of her life, but I don't suppose the two are mutually exclusive. --Elerneron (talk) 22:50, 8 January 2017 (CET)
Well, if he's gonna keep her, then the babies would definitely have to be put up for adoption. I do kinda like the idea of keeping her as a humiliation pet, and use her just for entertainment purposes. She never gets to have Chad, but can't be happy unless he's happy. Maybe use her as a fluffer on occasion, but she can only cum if more than 3 people other than Chad can witness it. She could willingly fuck anyone (or anything) Chad wants. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:30, 8 January 2017 (CET)
Well if the brother has that kind of a sense of family duty, he is not likely to kick her out of the house even for that (unless there is some magical influence pushing him in that direction.) It would certainly break the manipulation she has on him though. Jemini (talk) 01:44, 9 January 2017 (CET)
He's got two younger, more impressionable sisters. He'd be borderline kicking her out from the gangbang, add in getting fucked by a dog (and obviously liking it, not to mention in public) and she'd be gone. His family duty brought him back, giving up an education that would get him out of manual labor, and it's bad enough his sister is selfish enough to manipulate him into spoiling her, behavior like that (which might get picked up by the younger two) would be too much for anyone. Send her to live with Gary and his slutty mom. One (or all, for all he knows) of those babies might be his, after all. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:59, 9 January 2017 (CET)
I see Mitch trying to get Dana help rather than kicking her out. Unless Chad uses the ring's power that is. (Oh, and Mitch was only a few courses short of his degree, which he finished online while working, so he is a college graduate. His still works his ass off to provide a cushy life for his siblings.) --Elerneron (talk) 02:13, 9 January 2017 (CET)
Also, it might make an interesting story to have Dana as a main character option. The kinds of things that she would do with the ring are very different than what Chad is doing with it. Not something I'm personally interested in writing, but definitely an interesting concept. --Elerneron (talk) 02:18, 9 January 2017 (CET)
I was wonderig about that. You set it up so Chad is the main character, but why would you want to "play" ad someone who didn't get the ring. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:58, 9 January 2017 (CET)
I meant for the reader to choose who finds the ring on the first page. Chad is meant to be only one of the options. Others can be added, but that pretty much creates a separate story with the same history. That's also the reason that I went back and added Chad's name before all the entries, to lighten up on crossover when/if another main character is chosen/written about. I've actually thought about introducing a different storyline with a younger male protagonist, but felt a teenage boy would be more appealing as a main character for a certain skilled writer *cough* Arthur Kung *cough* to write for if they were so predisposed. I may revisit my original idea at some point providing a second option (or third or more depending on if someone else starts a new character in the interim) for the main character. Edit: Actually, Gwen's best friend Maria's little brother Marco could work for that, but I really put him in as a potential trap/sissy. --Elerneron (talk) 03:08, 9 January 2017 (CET)