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When I was writing this I feared it was getting too long, and that I should cut it somewhere, perhaps even add some options for the reader, but I never did find a good place to do that. What do you think? After posting it, it doesn't feel ''that'' long, so perhaps it's Ok? --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 08:44, 18 November 2017 (CET) | When I was writing this I feared it was getting too long, and that I should cut it somewhere, perhaps even add some options for the reader, but I never did find a good place to do that. What do you think? After posting it, it doesn't feel ''that'' long, so perhaps it's Ok? --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 08:44, 18 November 2017 (CET) | ||
It works as is. While the option to take her bra too would have been nice, it's unneccessary. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 22:12, 18 November 2017 (CET) | |||
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When I was writing this I feared it was getting too long, and that I should cut it somewhere, perhaps even add some options for the reader, but I never did find a good place to do that. What do you think? After posting it, it doesn't feel that long, so perhaps it's Ok? --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:44, 18 November 2017 (CET)
It works as is. While the option to take her bra too would have been nice, it's unneccessary. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:12, 18 November 2017 (CET)