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I must admit I never thought things would get this crazy when I first imagined the story, but it does makes sense, especially if the guilt that the Deacon has over his own actions has reached the level of mental illness. Well, there are now lots of characters to choose from to get his sex slaves. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 06:58, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
I must admit I never thought things would get this crazy when I first imagined the story, but it does makes sense, especially if the guilt that the Deacon has over his own actions has reached the level of mental illness. Well, there are now lots of characters to choose from to get his sex slaves. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 06:58, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
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On that subject, there are still a lot of profiles that have not been filled out with details. While I am decent at coming up with a personality and back-story for a character, a lot of that actually depends on me having some kind of inspiration. In the case of the McGreggors, it was the inspiration of trying to fill in on the girl forced to marry her rapist scenario alluded to in the introductory page. That's a little bit of an uncommon source of inspiration though, normally what I get inspired by is the pictures on the character's profile. So, if you could find some images for the characters who have "details missing," I might be able to draw inspiration from some of those pictures in order to fill out some profiles. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:28, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
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Ok, I'll to get some. I would love to be able to add to my character generator script some way to give me sample images of anime models that fit the gender and age of the character, that would make it easier to simply choose an image instead of having to look for it on my own. Well, I assume sooner or later I'll have to study Google's search API, it might be simpler than I'm considering. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 07:37, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
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I've added images for the [[Disciplinary_Action/Characters#Banko Family|Banko Family]] members. I hope they help you gain inspiration. I'll try to add more images as time allows. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 19:41, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
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Well, I take it you have some ideas of your own already given the image you selected for Vernon. Anyway, I've got some good seeds for the profiles of Veron and the two daughters just from looking through those pictures. Still working on the wife and son of the family. I don't have time to start on them now though, gotta run to class. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 22:19, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
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Not really, I just looked for "anime man 40", and choose the first one that actually looked over 20. It was afterwards that I realised he was a doctor. The town must have a doctor, so I'm guessing that's him, but I have no other idea about him. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 22:50, 9 May 2018 (CEST)
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This opens a huge can of worms and a lot of questions. Is there an age of majority where male family members are trusted to be unsupervised with female family members, many cultures have this, especially ones who require females to be in the presence of a male at all times to keep their purity. Also babysitting becomes confusing an difficult. Under these new rules females have to watch females, and males have to watch males. since most families are multi gendered then the male child needs to go somewhere else where other males children and a responsible adult are. Also if a female babysitter gets caught hving her Boyfriend visiting, do all the females in the house get punished for being unsupervised with a male minor? [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 15:00, 10 May 2018 (PST)
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In my mind, the ill-defined nature of this new rule was actually the point. It's supposed to be a chaotic and easily abused new addition to the rules, and the player gets to decide how far they want to push it. Of course, as to whether or not there is backlash form it being pushed too far, that's up to the writer at the time to determine. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:17, 11 May 2018 (CEST)
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Another thing to consider is the boys punishment. Under the shared punishment and punishment transferal rules if a boy and girl are caught breaking the same rules, they both get the same punishment, since the boy can't get pregnant then the boys punishment would transfer to a female family member for friend, or even the boy has to impregnate a female family member of friend. [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 20:47, 10 May 2018 (PST)

Latest revision as of 03:47, 11 May 2018

I must admit I never thought things would get this crazy when I first imagined the story, but it does makes sense, especially if the guilt that the Deacon has over his own actions has reached the level of mental illness. Well, there are now lots of characters to choose from to get his sex slaves. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 06:58, 9 May 2018 (CEST)


On that subject, there are still a lot of profiles that have not been filled out with details. While I am decent at coming up with a personality and back-story for a character, a lot of that actually depends on me having some kind of inspiration. In the case of the McGreggors, it was the inspiration of trying to fill in on the girl forced to marry her rapist scenario alluded to in the introductory page. That's a little bit of an uncommon source of inspiration though, normally what I get inspired by is the pictures on the character's profile. So, if you could find some images for the characters who have "details missing," I might be able to draw inspiration from some of those pictures in order to fill out some profiles. Jemini (talk) 07:28, 9 May 2018 (CEST)


Ok, I'll to get some. I would love to be able to add to my character generator script some way to give me sample images of anime models that fit the gender and age of the character, that would make it easier to simply choose an image instead of having to look for it on my own. Well, I assume sooner or later I'll have to study Google's search API, it might be simpler than I'm considering. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 07:37, 9 May 2018 (CEST)


I've added images for the Banko Family members. I hope they help you gain inspiration. I'll try to add more images as time allows. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 19:41, 9 May 2018 (CEST)


Well, I take it you have some ideas of your own already given the image you selected for Vernon. Anyway, I've got some good seeds for the profiles of Veron and the two daughters just from looking through those pictures. Still working on the wife and son of the family. I don't have time to start on them now though, gotta run to class. Jemini (talk) 22:19, 9 May 2018 (CEST)


Not really, I just looked for "anime man 40", and choose the first one that actually looked over 20. It was afterwards that I realised he was a doctor. The town must have a doctor, so I'm guessing that's him, but I have no other idea about him. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 22:50, 9 May 2018 (CEST)


This opens a huge can of worms and a lot of questions. Is there an age of majority where male family members are trusted to be unsupervised with female family members, many cultures have this, especially ones who require females to be in the presence of a male at all times to keep their purity. Also babysitting becomes confusing an difficult. Under these new rules females have to watch females, and males have to watch males. since most families are multi gendered then the male child needs to go somewhere else where other males children and a responsible adult are. Also if a female babysitter gets caught hving her Boyfriend visiting, do all the females in the house get punished for being unsupervised with a male minor? Telgar (talk) 15:00, 10 May 2018 (PST)


In my mind, the ill-defined nature of this new rule was actually the point. It's supposed to be a chaotic and easily abused new addition to the rules, and the player gets to decide how far they want to push it. Of course, as to whether or not there is backlash form it being pushed too far, that's up to the writer at the time to determine. Jemini (talk) 04:17, 11 May 2018 (CEST)


Another thing to consider is the boys punishment. Under the shared punishment and punishment transferal rules if a boy and girl are caught breaking the same rules, they both get the same punishment, since the boy can't get pregnant then the boys punishment would transfer to a female family member for friend, or even the boy has to impregnate a female family member of friend. Telgar (talk) 20:47, 10 May 2018 (PST)