Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Diya purpose/Marriage/Both/Talk/Secretary

Ok, the bottom three on this part will need some requests. Still going to fill the rest from the 1st page regardless of what's voted on. Jemini (talk) 21:40, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Well, you're going to need to ask Mrs.Varano for the phone numbers on the other page anyways (the fist paragraph would be different. You asking Mrs. Varano in person, vs paging her)--MrPib (talk) 00:53, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

The route I'd go is,

• Talk with Diya's mom (done)
• Talk with the Franklin girls
• Talk with the headmaster (Franklin girls and the deacon)
• Talk with the Deacon (he may be able to pull strings in regards to the Franklin girls)
• Talk with Luana and your sister
• Lastly I'd talk with Mrs. Franklin (she's a hot head, best save for until all your ducks are in a row)

--MrPib (talk) 01:06, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

Telling Her More

I'm mildly surprised he didn't also tell Mrs Varano the real reason Mary came to him. Whether the homosexuality is fact or not, she should probably know as a fellow administrator that Mary's mother might be abusing the younger sisters in some way and likely to put them at risk of disciplinary action or other dangers. The other reason I'm surprised is that she's shown in other paths that she isn't exactly opposed to tweaking a few facts or taking advantage of actual ones if she gets to watch - but I'm still a bit confused by the reorganization of the story, so I suppose those paths might not have happened yet. Claws61821 (talk) 11:44, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

I asked Jem to restructure it to how it is now, because I tend to assume that the stuff higher on the page happens first, and should be read first. Originally, the punishments were at the top of the page

School events were at the top, then there were punishments next to each other, Franklin girls (Deacon's suggestion) and Cheer squad (strange letter). And the establishing scenes were at the bottom (deacon, and strange letter)

You may be right, Mrs. Varano should be made aware; the headmaster, your sister and Ms. Styles will be made aware, so why shouldn't Mrs. Varano? --MrPib (talk) 17:47, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

I just write how it comes out. You all are right she should be informed. Not certain whether that's going to be immediately (edit the scene) or eventually (in a later scene in the sequence.) I think what was running through my mind at the time is that the MC was afraid the whole true story would make them against the wedding once it comes out the girls lied about being lesbians, so he planned to make it out as though the abuse came up later as something Mary told him after the wedding. Not certain whether or not I'm sticking to that plan. Jemini (talk) 19:32, 6 November 2019 (UTC)