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If she likes trying on clothes, might I suggest a couple of different swimsuits? Perhaps the bikini if she's just going to have fun, or in a fit of nostalgia (or serious swimming without the frills to "slow her down") an old one piece. The inner lining can be worn out (without her knowing) so it's fairly transparent when wet, and otherwise to small so her nips are barely covered and it shows a brilliant little camel toe? Strapless bikini for accidental removal (diving board) or unknowingly transparent too small one piece for constant display lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:21, 21 January 2020 (CET)
If she likes trying on clothes, might I suggest a couple of different swimsuits? Perhaps the bikini if she's just going to have fun, or in a fit of nostalgia (or serious swimming without the frills to "slow her down") an old one piece. The inner lining can be worn out (without her knowing) so it's fairly transparent when wet, and otherwise to small so her nips are barely covered and it shows a brilliant little camel toe? Strapless bikini for accidental removal (diving board) or unknowingly transparent too small one piece for constant display lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:21, 21 January 2020 (CET)
As much as I love it when the girl doesn't realize she's naked, and despite how viable an option that is with Sally's bad luck, I don't want to spend ''too'' much time on that front, at least not without a change of pace. The 'E' in ENF does stand for 'Embarrassed' after all, and as much as I like delayed gratification I don't want to drag things out to where the basis of the story is forgotten. Although I will say that you have a good idea there. --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:36, 21 January 2020 (CET)
Who's to say someone doesn't comment the first time she climbs out of the water, and calls her attention to it? Then (since she forgot her towel) she has to trek back to the apartment in a transparent suit lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:38, 21 January 2020 (CET)
The simple solutions always evade me. I already have the squeal option underway but I'll keep your idea in mind as I write the options out. --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:43, 21 January 2020 (CET)
I'll be the first to admit, I'm new to the ENF genre. Not really sure how it's supposed to work since it's not really my kink. I tend to look for the story lines that lead to sex lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 07:49, 21 January 2020 (CET)
Well first off thank you for reading my story even though it's not up your alley. As for ENF, it is rather niche compared to other kinks out there, so hopefully the next chapter might help show the appeal a little. --[[User:NoGo45|NoGo45]] ([[User talk:NoGo45|talk]]) 07:55, 21 January 2020 (CET)

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If she likes trying on clothes, might I suggest a couple of different swimsuits? Perhaps the bikini if she's just going to have fun, or in a fit of nostalgia (or serious swimming without the frills to "slow her down") an old one piece. The inner lining can be worn out (without her knowing) so it's fairly transparent when wet, and otherwise to small so her nips are barely covered and it shows a brilliant little camel toe? Strapless bikini for accidental removal (diving board) or unknowingly transparent too small one piece for constant display lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:21, 21 January 2020 (CET)

As much as I love it when the girl doesn't realize she's naked, and despite how viable an option that is with Sally's bad luck, I don't want to spend too much time on that front, at least not without a change of pace. The 'E' in ENF does stand for 'Embarrassed' after all, and as much as I like delayed gratification I don't want to drag things out to where the basis of the story is forgotten. Although I will say that you have a good idea there. --NoGo45 (talk) 07:36, 21 January 2020 (CET)

Who's to say someone doesn't comment the first time she climbs out of the water, and calls her attention to it? Then (since she forgot her towel) she has to trek back to the apartment in a transparent suit lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:38, 21 January 2020 (CET)

The simple solutions always evade me. I already have the squeal option underway but I'll keep your idea in mind as I write the options out. --NoGo45 (talk) 07:43, 21 January 2020 (CET)

I'll be the first to admit, I'm new to the ENF genre. Not really sure how it's supposed to work since it's not really my kink. I tend to look for the story lines that lead to sex lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:49, 21 January 2020 (CET)

Well first off thank you for reading my story even though it's not up your alley. As for ENF, it is rather niche compared to other kinks out there, so hopefully the next chapter might help show the appeal a little. --NoGo45 (talk) 07:55, 21 January 2020 (CET)