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So the original "OMG" path was supposed to be more like "Holy shit! She actually did that?" --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 18:14, 7 October 2017 (CEST)
So the original "OMG" path was supposed to be more like "Holy shit! She actually did that?" --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 18:14, 7 October 2017 (CEST)
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Pretty much. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 18:52, 7 October 2017 (CEST)

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Well, that last bit would be another example of spontaneous writing. I thought it kinda made sense with how they were acting before. I figure, beings Beatriz is so against the sexual repression of the town, she wanted the exact opposite in every conceivable way for her daughters. (This also explains the home-schooling as well.) Jemini (talk) 15:48, 5 October 2017 (CEST)


What can I say, it makes sense and it made me laugh. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 16:10, 5 October 2017 (CEST)


Can we get a third option? Unaware, but not surprised and somewhat amused. I can imagine young Triz basking in the afterglow of a good birthday present waxing eloquent about never wearing clothes at home. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:34, 7 October 2017 (CEST)


I really like that image, Notsooldpervert, but I think it can be incorporated into the path where he already knows she's a nudist. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 06:46, 7 October 2017 (CEST)


Lol too late. Jemini added it. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:53, 7 October 2017 (CEST)


Actually, I technically added a path where he has a more extreme reaction, since I wasn't actually planning to have his reaction be anywhere near as extreme as Notsooldpervert seemed to have imagined. However, now that I've added that 3rd option, I think that one's going to be the reaction I had originally imagined where as the OMG route might have him really freaked out now where I wasn't planning on having him have all that big a reaction before. Jemini (talk) 07:05, 7 October 2017 (CEST)


So the original "OMG" path was supposed to be more like "Holy shit! She actually did that?" --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:14, 7 October 2017 (CEST)


Pretty much. Jemini (talk) 18:52, 7 October 2017 (CEST)