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Sounds good, but also add in any child birthed by Samantha as well, as she to will be eventually bread. And make it clear that Ashton will be going to jail for kidnapping, and that his punishment for his involvement in this infraction will be being transferred to Samantha as she is his closet female relative, not already being punished for this infraction. [[User: Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 19:20, 24 February 2020 (PST)
Sounds good, but also add in any child birthed by Samantha as well, as she to will be eventually bread. And make it clear that Ashton will be going to jail for kidnapping, and that his punishment for his involvement in this infraction will be being transferred to Samantha as she is his closet female relative, not already being punished for this infraction. [[User: Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 19:20, 24 February 2020 (PST)
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Telgar seems to have messed up my pathing/choices here... My above wall of text was on: ask Kellie first, then Julie.
I had then added '''ask Julie if she read the note''' as a choice. There'd be 2 smaller pages that wouldn't change any parts of the story and are for storytelling sake and would end with the same result
*'''no she didn't read it'''
*'''Yes, she did read it'''
They would both only have one choice of ''Tell the girls their punishment''
--[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 05:27, 27 February 2020 (CET)

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Let's pretend that we've already discovered that Daniela has read the original punishment note and we asked Mrs. Varano what level of infraction that'd be, but just in case, and for Julie's sake, we ask Julie if she read the note.

  • No, her husband looked it over... Proceed to page explaining exactly what the punishment is.

Yes, she's aware of what Kellie's punishment is. (Call Mrs varano in, ask her to read highlighted sentences aloud "children can't read this." And "17 and under are kids". And then ask Mrs varano what the punishment is.) Then proceed to the page detailing both of (or all 3 of) their punishments.

Register Julie with the school, call Mr and Mrs. Bens in to complete her registration and then go ahead and explain that Ashton will be going to jail and Julie will be finishing school as Julie Bens and not as Julie McGregor, and for that reason, any child born throughout her punishment will be treated as if it were birthed by Mr. and Mrs. Bens. Julie's punishment will end when she graduates.

Any child birthed by Kellie would be treated as if they were birthed by Julie.


Sounds good, but also add in any child birthed by Samantha as well, as she to will be eventually bread. And make it clear that Ashton will be going to jail for kidnapping, and that his punishment for his involvement in this infraction will be being transferred to Samantha as she is his closet female relative, not already being punished for this infraction. Telgar (talk) 19:20, 24 February 2020 (PST)


Telgar seems to have messed up my pathing/choices here... My above wall of text was on: ask Kellie first, then Julie.

I had then added ask Julie if she read the note as a choice. There'd be 2 smaller pages that wouldn't change any parts of the story and are for storytelling sake and would end with the same result

  • no she didn't read it
  • Yes, she did read it

They would both only have one choice of Tell the girls their punishment --MrPib (talk) 05:27, 27 February 2020 (CET)