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Well you read quite a bit of our stuff. It has been my experience that that reading happens to improve your work a lot more than you would think. I think you are going to do a lot better than even you are realizing right now. (My advice, read some works you think are bad and try to avoid writing like that. Try and write more like the work you think is good.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:50, 11 January 2017 (CET) | Well you read quite a bit of our stuff. It has been my experience that that reading happens to improve your work a lot more than you would think. I think you are going to do a lot better than even you are realizing right now. (My advice, read some works you think are bad and try to avoid writing like that. Try and write more like the work you think is good.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:50, 11 January 2017 (CET) | ||
There's a big difference between reading a lot, and writing. I can spot mistakes fairly easily, but coming up with story material is altogether different. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 10:02, 11 January 2017 (CET) | |||
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Hmm... I'm thinking of chipping in, but you've done so much development on Chad and family that I hate to mess it up. I assume the two doctors at the bottom of the page are co-workers of Jill? Do you already have plans for them? I was thinking of adding a 13 yo son for one of them and starting a separate branch. Gary is too stupid, and it's pretty easy for girls to get most things they want already. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:45, 10 January 2017 (CET)
Yes, they are listed as her co-workers on her character sheet in fact. Take a look at the category page, I already have pictures for the characters. Kelly Redmond is Jill's Boss, Dani Preston is a sexual target of Gary's mom Leah. If you want, you can come up with your own family and I will help you get them set up. That way you don't have to worry about relationships I already have in planning. We can then work them into the current character relationships as we need to. --Elerneron (talk) 20:03, 10 January 2017 (CET)
Ah! I didn't see that. Had no idea that Gary's slutty mom worked with Jill. What is it they do at work? I'm envisioning something like women's fertility drugs or something that exposure to might affect male hormone levels. You have plans for those 3, so i may come up with a new family altogether. That means a bit more work though lol I've never contibuted more than comments on here, so i'll probably be hitting you and Jemini up for some help at some point --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:15, 10 January 2017 (CET)
I'm always willing to lend a hand. --Elerneron (talk) 20:45, 10 January 2017 (CET)
Well you read quite a bit of our stuff. It has been my experience that that reading happens to improve your work a lot more than you would think. I think you are going to do a lot better than even you are realizing right now. (My advice, read some works you think are bad and try to avoid writing like that. Try and write more like the work you think is good.) Jemini (talk) 04:50, 11 January 2017 (CET)
There's a big difference between reading a lot, and writing. I can spot mistakes fairly easily, but coming up with story material is altogether different. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 10:02, 11 January 2017 (CET)