User talk:NoGo45

Welcome to the site. It's always good to have new writers here. Please familiarize yourself with the Format Rules. Your entry for Public Nudity was missing the category. I corrected the issue on that page, but please be sure to add the category to any future entries. Thanks. --Elerneron (talk) 02:19, 18 August 2018 (CEST)

Yeah, I figured, with the age of the group, the boys probably wouldn't have sex with her. Oh well, at least they'll be groping and exposing her like she's their personal little plaything lol. Perhaps after the camping trip, you'll take a crack at a different path, or maybe pick up the one where the 18 yo is in the theater with a middle school class. For that matter, I like all three of the girls that have been started already lol. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:18, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

Not sure how embarrassed the budding exhibitionists are going to be when they're nude, but that's a fun angle. I do hope there's lots of sex, and not just groping and fondling. That can be a big part of it, but I'd still like to see those pussies dripping cum. Like the 12 yo on the sunbathing in the backyard path, for instance. Someone's picked up the plot where she gets locked out and the postman shows up, which has potential. There's also the one where the boy next door watches her masturbate, and he runs off. I'd love to see her run into the lad's mother, who gets a kick out of the girl's adventurous spirit, and plays with her a little before talking her into boosting her son's confidence by spending the day with him naked. Works better if he's not home sick though, like home schooled (since it's already established school is still in session). Oooh, talk her into being the model for his sex-ed, with hands on practical experience! For the 18 yo, I like the one where she's in the theater with the middle school kids and they gang bang her, but I'd prefer the one where the boys take the initiative and she just lets them do what they want (the more boys join in, the more eager the other boys are to join in). The path where she gets the Nudist License making it legal for her to go wherever she wants naked has a lot of potential. For the 24 yo that hasn't been started yet... Obviously the side characters will often be the young ones. Maybe she's a single mom (had a kid in her teens so the boy is old enough to show interest?)? Or maybe she's a teacher who has a new Nudist License? I dunno, there's potential there, but I like the lolis better so I haven't given it much thought. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:33, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

For the 24 yo, I was going to suggest she had the kid at like 14-15 so it would be about 10 now. The other option would be the younger sibling. My sister has a 25 yo, a 14 yo and a 12 yo. Obviously she's not 24, but if the oldest had to take in the youngest... another option would be Aunt/Nephew. Something happened to the mom and he had to go live with her, or at least stay the summer. Maybe mom got a new job overseas and will be gone a year so he's staying with Aunt who has been a nudist for years and keeps "forgetting" she has company now. I look forward to your depiction of their embarrassed nudity exciting and arousing them so much they eagerly dive into their own lust lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:13, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

They were just suggestions; write the story your way (; As for incest, I'm all for it. One of my favorite stories on here is Incest Seduction by Villenia. Brother, or Dad. My only idea for the brother is to be naked and masturbating on his bed when he walks in lol. Keep an eye on those discussion pages, I tend to drop suggestions there. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:48, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

The best thing about "Open" stories is collaboration. So feel free to edit my entries as well. There's always room for improvement and different ideas. If I ever do anything you really dislike you can always just revert to an earlier version. But yeah I felt that scene needed to be expanded and tweaked a little. I'll always try to keep your writing style intact whenever I do edit something. Villenia (talk) 23:38, 29 December 2019 (UTC)