Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Perl

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You might want to ask how many times the teacher has called her down for it before sending her to you. When she changes, she should have to stay in view (assuming you don't "help" her change), and maybe give her one a couple sizes too small first so she has to strip down an extra time. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:55, 13 October 2017 (CEST)

This reminds me of what attracted me to write for this story in the first place. Except for a few conjugation errors that speak to English being your second language, it is very well written, shows a lot of good application of character traits, and holds an excellent level of both restraint and indication of consequences in action. Good entry, can't wait to see where it goes. Jemini (talk) 08:04, 13 October 2017 (CEST)

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