User talk:Hgcollins
It's always good to see new contributors on the site. Two of your recent contributions aren't properly formatted for the site, however. Pedo Romp/Go all out: with her cute body, you just can't help yourself and Pedo Romp/Teach her how to give you a blow job are both missing the category on the page. It is important that every story page on the site has a category. Please refer to the Format Rules to learn how to format contributions to the site. If you could add the category to the pages I mentioned, I would appreciate it. If you need any help, or have any questions feel free to contact me on my talk page. --Elerneron (talk) 14:28, 16 June 2020 (CEST)
I took the liberty of removing "My Story" from the front of your links and moving the page that already had it in the title. While it isn't "wrong" to have it in the links, it is unnecessary extra work that doesn't really help keep everything separate. Simply starting the links with the story name is sufficient. If you want "My Story" in front of your links, let me know and I will change them back. --Elerneron (talk) 14:45, 8 September 2020 (CEST)
Innocent Ruin
Thank you for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I still have plenty of stuff to write to write about, and a whole bunch of stuff waiting proofreading. Like you said, fact-checking details and sticking to lore can be a little time-consuming. There's so much grey area in the lore, history and what really is true and what isn't. I probably have missed some details in previous updates, but I'll get to fixing stuff eventually. Feel free to contribute in any way you want. It's free format, free for all. Looking forward to seeing what you write about. Innocent Ruin (talk) 23:26, 7 October 2020 (CEST)
Estrus Chaurus coupled with the Spider addon and Kyne's Blessing definetily adds a nice touch if you're into that sort of things. Bugs are kind of bland and way too easy otherwise, so for only increased difficulty's sake I like to run with them. I personally had no problem finding the requirements for LE, unless there's some requirements from older versions that aren't uploaded anywhere anymore. Not sure if that's the case for SE, not sure even which one you're running. I'm unlikely to take a direct approach when it comes to potential corrections. I don't like meddling with people's edits, so I'll stick to talk section if necessary. One thing I noticed is that you've forgotten to categorize your contribution. Just add this code somewhere in the pages you contribute so it'll adhere to site rules. Innocent Ruin (talk) 14:14, 8 October 2020 (CEST)
[[Category:Journals of Skyrim]]
Good to see you contributing again. In case you didn't notice I recently added page-counts for each individual set of journals, which will work in the same way as page-count in stories page by counting the number of pages a certain category is put under. This is completely optional, but if you want to, I can add these categories to your contributions as well, or you can do it yourself. Or not, it's completely optional like I said.
Also, do you permit edits to your contributions in general, or do you prefer to do quality checks and proofreading yourself? I ran across a few typos (nothing major) while re-reading the first chapter. Innocent Ruin (talk) 17:42, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Yes, Ravencrone is kinda underrated, (I have no strong opinion of Benor personally,) and cut content, in general, feels like a problem with the base game. So many missed opportunities, like the Great Collapse, the Silver Hand, and whatever the fuck's up with Rorikstead's soil. At the same time, I feel like Bethesda likes having these characters and storylines where the player isn't told everything, and stuff is left for us to figure out... I guess it works in some areas too.
Regarding the plot point you mentioned, it's funny because I didn't even intend to include it to begin with, and I'm still unsure where to go with it... But since it is part of the story now, I kinda have to stick with it! I still have the whole Solsteim to play around with before I get to that, but considering I don't intend to continue the journals for too much further (it's maybe two-thirds of the way through, unless I change my mind?) we should see some continuation to that sooner rather than later. --Innocent Ruin (talk) 13:06, 17 December 2021 (CET)
I tried it, but at this point I'm just waiting for the full release, no matter how long it'll take. And morrowind is definitely one to try, although its mechanics have aged horribly. Pickpocketing straight up doesn't work, and hit chance takes a while to get used to. If you're patient, you can wait for Skywind, though. 😉 --Innocent Ruin (talk) 17:19, 17 December 2021 (CET)
User Rights
You have been granted rights as a Trusted Contributor. This will allow you to do a bit more on the site, including moving pages without creating redirects and deleting pages among others. I hope this little powerup is helpful. --Elerneron (talk) 11:48, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Notsooldpervert
Just browsing the Recent Changes page and stumbled across April's Punishment. I can only assume the parents already know how they're punished at school. You've just finished Part 4, with the implication being she'll be punished more at home. I hope we get to see her take a grown up cock in her tiny pussy. Maybe her punishments for a while could be training with increasingly bigger toys until she can take it. Too bad she's a habitual offender, let's see her spend half the year being sent to class naked with cum leaking from her pussy. Forgot her homework, sent to the office, sent back naked with a creampie. Called to the front of the class to read, they all watch a huge glob of cum drop out to the floor, so she's sent back at lunch for a refill for making a mess. Goes to collect her clothes after school, instead there's a contrived excuse to fuck her again, send her home naked and leaking. Oh, no! She leaked onto the seat of Daddy's car! Spends the rest of the afternoon draining dad repeatedly. Class the next morning, "I was being punished when I got home and didn't get to do my homework." By the end of the year, she has to turn her clothes in when she arrives to school (assuming she's allowed to wear them to school), and any boy who wants to can fuck her. Maybe she doesn't even get to go to class anymore, her "in school suspension" is to go to the middle and high school and help boys concentrate better by being a free use cocksleeve lol.... shame she'll have to repeat 1st grade. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:14, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Hmmm... Mom is the one who trains her pussy. If Daddy's going to punish her at home, April has to do it right which means pussy full of cum. Every day (whether she gets punished or not) Mommy spends an hour fucking her with a toy. Maybe something like a butt plug but a dildo she has to hold inside of her until bedtime (or get punished), then another hour of fucking her with toys before bed. Love the idea of her being naked all the time at school, usually the only one who is. Never allowed to say no when people cop a feel. Also love the idea of her getting fucked by the teacher in front of her classmates, maybe for something Tiffany did. Ooohh I like that! She really is a good girl for the most part, but keeps getting blamed when other people do stuff. After all, she's got a reputation as a troublemaker now. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:40, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Honestly, I'm neutral on the whole punishment aspect. To me it's about fucking the loli (repeatedly and preferably in public lol) and the punishment is really just a plot device to let it happen. Just love the idea of stripping a loli and doing lewd things to her in front of other kids, or even adults. She's naked and in stocks in the main courtyard of the mall with any passerby who wants to taking a turn. Why? Someone accused her of shoplifting (too bad Tiffany got away and April took the blame), so the adults just shake their heads at a troublemaker girl, and it's a shame she started so young. Oh well, time to go. After you watch three guys cum inside her, it just kinda blurs together, come along kids. No son, we don't have time for you to take a turn. Oh fine, your older sister can watch you while I head to the store. lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:26, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Awesome! I see Masterdebator is still writing, though sadly not Dan and His Boys. Or rather was still writing back in April, anyway. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:34, 10 December 2021 (CET)
If you're in touch with any of those other authors, maybe they'd like ATF as a new venue to post, now that Lasiter is throwing in the towel. Don't burn yourself out, slow and steady wins the day. Though I do look forward to seeing April's next predicament lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:55, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Like I said, I loved the story enough to try and base an RP off of it lol I just never made the connection with your handle since it had been so long since I'd read it. Hopefully the other authors from Lasiter will come over here. I really want Masterdebator to finish Dan and His Boys. The only thing close to as hot as turning a loli into the family fuck toy, is a MILF turning herself into one for shotas lol What's next for Naomi, now that her little pussy is open for business? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:31, 13 December 2021 (CET)
I think you caught it pretty close with Naomi. And she's learning little girls don't get a choice and just what they're for lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:14, 13 December 2021 (CET)
Hmmm... destroying her gifts might upset those who gave them. Maybe her punishment should be loss of clothes, instead of destroying them. Take them away, and make her go naked in public lol Obviously their treatment of her is accepted enough that the Members of the Board used her like that at the dinner party, perhaps making her go naked in public is frowned on but no one objects. Let strangers play with her body and force her to orgasm in public places. Dads who wish they could play with their daughters can touch or fuck her right in front of said daughters using Naomi as a surrogate. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:25, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Nothing says the board members she'll be "entertaining" don't have kids. A family vacation where Mom entertains the kids while they watch daddy repeatedly fuck a girl their age. Mommies undressing the girls and having them spread their legs for Daddy to look at while he uses his new cocksleeve. Though I do like the random strangers doing it, too. Maybe a neighbor catches on to what's happening, and when his wife leaves for several hours he "borrows" Naomi, strips his toddler naked and stares at her while fucking Naomi, after which he has Naomi feed the tot Daddy's cum out of her pussy. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:23, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Keep the daughter naked too, to "inspire him" to fuck Naomi more often. Use Naomi to teach the girl all the ways there are to get fucked: hard and mean, soft and gentle, girl on top, doggy style etc. Make the girl suck all of Daddy's cum out of Naomi to get used to the taste? Maybe her mother doesn't mind him using Naomi, and gently pets and strokes the naked daughter while they watch, sad that her little girl will end up like that but knowing it's "necessary" (which she assures the girl it is necessary). Maybe bring Naomi to that girls "debut" and have Naomi lick her clean between fucks? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:50, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Hadn't read the updated version. I hate ass to mouth. Naomi should have puked on him lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:18, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Maybe instead of a dinner party, it's poker night or something and the girls "get" to serve while naked and used by whoever wants to? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:56, 29 December 2021 (CET)
Had another idea for Naomi. A reluctant husband who doesn't want to have sex with young girls, but his mercenary/controlling wife insists the only way to get promoted is to do what the big wigs do and forces him to have sex with Naomi all weekend. Maybe he even comes to like Naomi more than his wife so when she suggests he take her away for a weekend he does it but it's fun for the both of them lol. Maybe Naomi has to show the lady the cum dripping from her pussy to prove he used her body or something. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:08, 9 January 2022 (CET)
True! That also sets up situations where it's the wife that's a perv, not the hubby, making him do all the things she wishes she had a dick to do, or that she fantasizes were done to her as a kid. Meanwhile hubby's balls deep in Naomi thinking "is this the woman I married?" Too late to get a divorce now, because she's seen him doing this to a young girl lol
I was just reading April's Punishment part 14, and a thought occurred to me. What if pictures and video of the girls was legal as long as it happens during their punishments (or as part of the punishment). Have photos of the girls stuffed with cock, gushing spunk from their tiny pussies or covered like they bathed in it posted all over the schools. Not just their school, but the junior high and high schools too (especially pictures taken while serving detentions at the older schools). I remember having a CCTV system when I was is Junior High and High School, and a couple of times a week they'd have a "news" show for kids. Every morning they could show a video of kids that were punished the day before as a "deterrent" for bad behavior, so every morning April and Tiffany would get to have a video of them cumming like sluts as they get filled up. April's treatment made me think of all of her classmates watching a video of her triple penetration lol Of course, copies of all pictures and video are sent to the parents (for legal purposes of course). April becomes the literal poster girl for the initiative and she can't go anywhere in town without seeing poster size photos of her naked, cum soaked and/or cock filled body (maybe even a billboard or two lol). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:24, 2 February 2022 (CET)
Nice! Too bad the poor thing didn't just say she couldn't find her homework. Then she could have said she found it placed in the wrong folder or something. Oh well, more punishments mean getting her more and more addicted to multiple daily orgasms lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:32, 24 April 2022 (CEST)
Well... it is "April's Punishment". I wouldn't be offended if you glossed over Tiffany's weekend with the fat guy lol. Not exactly arousing to picture. Maybe Tiffany's turn with a dog since fucking is too much like exercise? lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:49, 2 May 2022 (CEST)
Maybe he's trying to impress friends and has a poker night or something with her as the entertainment... or a lavish weekend long party. When she turns up in the same dress, turns out she's not wearing panties (because they were taken by someone over the weekend) which is in violation of the school dress code, thus another punishment for poor Tif! --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:29, 2 May 2022 (CEST)
Wassersaeufer
Happy to read that you enjoy "Making the Team" and thank you for your kind words and that you have taken time to leave a comment on my talk-page. If you want to add to "Making the Team", just go for it. If you have read it, I am pretty confident you know what would fit and what wouldn't. --Wassersaeufer (talk) 00:12, 12 December 2021 (CET)
Josepadilla
Thank you for your words, they motivate me to continue writing, I read a bit of your story of the punishment of April and I think it is very good, when I finish reading it I will give my final opinion. --Josepadilla (talk) 01:38, 22 December 2021 (CET)
PrincessKittens
I haven't done much for that story (Siblings) in a little while, I might add some more tomorrow or something... Glad you are enjoying it though! --PrincessKittens (talk) 08:53, 29 December 2021 (CET)
I added two more pages to my story (Siblings), more coming soon! Just thought I should tell you! :D --PrincessKittens (talk) 13:00, 31 December 2021 (CET)
My most recent chapter ends kind of in the middle of the story, I apologize, I will probably add the next one today! --PrincessKittens (talk) 11:13, 2 January 2022 (CET)
Why don't you tell me some of your ideas :) I am curious to see what you come up with.
I am just going to say, all of those are wrong... XD anyway, but keep guessing... maybe you will land on the truth... I will say this... The whole raping little girls thing... That is something I have fantasized over for about 10 years... And Kate is a real person, she was sort of the center of all that, she was around 8-10 when I started fantasizing... (by the way, I have never acted on these fantasies, everything has stayed in my head XD I wouldn't actually do most of the stuff I write about IRL, especially not to someone so young.)--PrincessKittens (talk) 00:27, 12 January 2022 (CET)
I will give you a hint... It is more personal. - You can decide what that means - also I worded my above message wrong it should have been more vague, it is currently misleading it should say -
I am just going to say, all of those are wrong... XD anyway, but keep guessing... maybe you will land on the truth... I will say this... The whole little girls being raped thing... That is something I have fantasized over for about 10 years... And Kate is a real person, she was sort of the center of all that, she was around 8-10 when I started fantasizing... (by the way, I have never acted on these fantasies, everything has stayed in my head XD I wouldn't actually want to do most of the stuff I write about IRL.)
Just some small changes in wording... --PrincessKittens (talk) 01:30, 13 January 2022 (CET)
I noticed in your stories list on your User page, it is a little bit cluttered, it is organized, but too big. If you want to shrink it a little, you could use a collapsible table, like I do on my User page, like this for example:
| Story name | |
| Story codes: | -STORY CODES- |
| Plot Summary: | -PLOT SUMMARY- |
| You can easily | Add more stuff |
| If you need to | XD |
Thanks! --PrincessKittens (talk) 18:33, 23 February 2022 (CET)
I am so so so so sorry, I accidentally deleted your page Sexual Research Commission/Sorensen/1 - I tried to undo it, but I couldn't figure out how to do it, I will keep trying though. --PrincessKittens (talk) 10:28, 26 February 2022 (CET)
Alright, I am extremely sorry though, I will definitely write that story! --PrincessKittens (talk) 12:06, 26 February 2022 (CET)
I wrote the first page of the Naomi Wildman story NW --PrincessKittens (talk) 09:48, 27 February 2022 (CET)
Hgcollins, you now have all rights to all my stories, templates, categories, and even, my user page. (For more information, go to my user page and look at the "News".) --PrincessKittens (talk) 20:03, 28 February 2022 (CET) edit: please allow me to write one more page on NW (Page 5) edit 2: this is not a prank or joke, I am serious, it is all yours now.
Thanks, I will still write one more page on Naomi Wildman, but after that, I am leaving for good! I will miss you all! --PrincessKittens (talk) 20:11, 28 February 2022 (CET)
I said that I was gonna write 1 more page, well, I ended up writing like 10 XD anyway, I finished the Naomi Wildman story, but I set it up so that you could continue it if you wanted to. I am finally leaving, I will miss you all! 🖖 Live long and prosper! --PrincessKittens (talk) 10:15, 4 March 2022 (CET)
-Ship... Out of danger?
-Yes!
...
-Don't grieve admiral... it is logical... the needs of the many... outway...
-The needs of the few.
-Or the one...
...
I have been... and always shall be... your friend...
🖖 Live long... and prosper!🖖
--PrincessKittens (talk) 10:29, 4 March 2022 (CET)
JayneDeviant
Thanks so much for the kind words, still getting the hang of it! --JayneDeviant (talk) 04:03, 30 December 2021 (CET)
RonaldMcDonald
| Old messages |
| I don't know if you would be interested, or how this would really work, but I am interested in writing a collaborative story with someone, and you seem like the kind of person to do such a thing with. By the way, I don't have a plot in mind, so if you agree, either you can make a plot and tell me about it, or I can think of something, but I won't waste my time thinking of a plot if we aren't even gonna write it, so let me know what you think! (I feel like I talk a lot, I could probably shorten this message a LOT) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:09, 1 May 2022 (CEST)
First, what is 'nepi' (I feel stupid for not knowing it, but I don't lol, I tried looking it up and came short XD) I am mostly the same as you as far as what you said in your message, as far as beastiality goes, it depends on my mood, sometimes I like it and sometimes it grosses me out XD As far as formatting, I think the easiest thing to do would be, for example: I write chapter 1, you write chapter 2, I write chapter 3, etc. Lol, so maybe we should do that Also, if we are going to be collaborating on a story, and talking about ideas for plot or whatever and stuff - should we find an easier place to communicate, cuz this system is not the best lol, let me know what you think about that RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:27, 1 May 2022 (CEST) Ok, I will email you the following message so that you know it is me, "Hello, I am RonaldMcDonald, from AllTheFallen Stories 1234567890." --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:38, 1 May 2022 (CEST) Did it work? Or are you just offline? Lol --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:46, 1 May 2022 (CEST) So, do you ever check your email XD (Hope that didn't sound rude, I meant it as funny, not rude lol) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:22, 2 May 2022 (CEST) I just read the entire story (so far) of April's Punishment. I AM SO ENJOYING IT! Keep up the great work, HG Collins! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:49, 4 May 2022 (CEST) Should we go ahead and create the title page for our story? If so, should I create it, or do you want to? Also an idea I had, instead of having a link to character profiles, we could use my Profile Template for them instead, it doesn't take that much space, and might be the easiest thing to do. --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:04, 14 May 2022 (CEST) Just so you know, starting on the 24th of May, until like the end of May, I probably won't be on very much, or at all. I will go ahead and create the title page(IA), but I will let you fill out your character's profile, then you can start writing. - I am super excited to finally be writing this. --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:36, 19 May 2022 (CEST) Check email before writing page 1 :) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:27, 23 May 2022 (CEST) Sorry for the late reply, life has been busy, though it seems it has for you as well, XD, well, I'll read the chapter you wrote, then write the next one soon, thanks for your patience --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:11, 12 July 2022 (CEST) Please fill in more information about Ethan in Incestuous Affairs whenever you get a chance, or if you don't want to bother, I can do it, but it looks empty right now, LOL. --RonaldMcDonald (forgot to add signatue) I added the next chapter, Chapter 2, to IA, so you can start writing the next one whenever you are ready. --RonaldMcDonald—talk 12:12, 14 July 2022 (CEST) I might be ok with a "Darker turn of events..." Depending on what that means, email me and elaborate please XD --RonaldMcDonald—talk 13:27, 26 July 2022 (CEST) Ok, sounds good! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 22:47, 27 July 2022 (CEST) So, I don't want to sound rude or anything, but, how long does it take you to write? I have been on the edge of my seat for a little over a week now, with the whole "darker turn of events" thing, XD. Anyway, I know that sounded kind of rude, I didn't really mean to be rude, just curious as to what is taking so long, lol. --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:01, 5 August 2022 (CEST) Oh, ok,no problem, just wondering what was taking so long, :) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 19:28, 5 August 2022 (CEST) Umm, Who is Jessie, XD, by context I am assuming you meant Ethan... Anyway, I like the idea, but yeah, I agree, maybe it should wait a little. Depending on what happens in your chapter, I might write it next chapter, anyway, have fun writing! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:43, 8 August 2022 (CEST)
...where are you? Lol, I emailed you as well, are you ok? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 22:35, 18 August 2022 (CEST) Ok, glad to hear that, for some reason I was legit worried about you, lol - anyway, can't wait to read it! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 14:24, 21 August 2022 (CEST) Great! Can't wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:14, 22 August 2022 (CEST) Lol, yeah --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:44, 23 August 2022 (CEST) I definitely enjoyed that, that turned out a lot better than I expected, also, I as far as Jessie goes, no, I didn't have any plans for her specifically, I don't make many plans for this, mainly because it is a collab, and my plans could just be ripped apart with one small plot point, lol --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:42, 25 August 2022 (CEST) The thing we planned in the emails for the birthday, didn't end up happening, which is fine, I don't really care that much, but when should it happen? Should I write it in my next chapter? Lol or do you wanna wait a little longer?--RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:36, 25 August 2022 (CEST) Oh, and you should fill out the profile in the main page ([IA]) for Ethan --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:38, 25 August 2022 (CEST) Yeah! I can't seem to find it either! I thought I was just not seeing it, I wonder what happened? Oh well, anyway, check email, I have a question.... I just posted chapter 4 (IA/4), hope you enjoy, it is a bit long, about double the length of the one you just did (my biggest edit yet on this site!) +35,600 bytes!!! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 14:49, 27 August 2022 (CEST) I don't mind if you skip to summer, I don't think I had anything planned for the near future... Anyway, glad you enjoyed! Hope you don't take too long this time XD (take as much time as you need, I am mostly joking-mostly! XD don't take too long!) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 13:34, 29 August 2022 (CEST) How's it coming? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 12:26, 3 September 2022 (CEST) Nice, can't wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:29, 5 September 2022 (CEST) I enjoyed that a lot! And you also set up a start to my next chapter, less work for me! XD --RonaldMcDonald—talk 14:44, 6 September 2022 (CEST) I am not gonna make it this chapter, unless you are okay with me skipping to august, but I wanna write Ethan's birthday, I have an idea for it. If you are ok with skipping to august, I am too, so I can make it this chapter if you want :) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 16:48, 6 September 2022 (CEST) Where do you think they live? I would assumed the United States, but where in the US? (Talking about Ethan and Lilly from IA) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 15:16, 10 September 2022 (CEST) Oh, and also, this coming chapter is very long... I said this not that long ago:
But I will be doubling, maybe even tripling that number in this coming chapter, not exaggerating! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 18:21, 10 September 2022 (CEST) I have been very busy with real life lately, but I should have it up today or tomorrow hopefully. --RonaldMcDonald—talk 18:00, 11 September 2022 (CEST)
IA/6 is up (IA/6/1 IA/6/2 IA/6/3) Even with splitting it up into parts, the second and third part exceeded IA/4 lol--RonaldMcDonald—talk 14:55, 12 September 2022 (CEST) I don't have any particular opinion on where they live, though I did mention New Jersey in the chapter, though we can change it, though probably not Florida, given the chapter I just wrote., so if you wanted them to be close to one of the disney things, it would have to be california, but its up to you where they live, I don't care -- -- though, one unrelated thought, we probably should slow down on time jumps for a while, don't want her to grow up too fast, at our current pace, next thing you know, by chapter 20, she is gonna be like 14-15 years old XD (No, I didn't do the math, I just guessed) Though, after writing this, I decided to do the math (I need a life) and counting the first two chapters, which contain the most time skips, we average around a year every 3-4 chapters, so she wouldn't be older than 12 by the 20th chapter she would be 10.9 (10 years 11 months) to 12.1 (12 years 1 month) (3.5 (3 years 6 months) to 4.7 years (4 years 8 months) older than she currently is, which is around 7.4 (7 years 5 months)) LOL why did I waste my time doing that math? -- -- -- after thought: (Though this is incorrect, it is more like 2-3chapters per year if we count the first two, but I am not doing the math for that, it hurts) Well, hope you enjoyed seeing me suffer and waste my time doing math, and I forget how I did the math, so it is possible those numbers are not accurate, but whatever -- hope this wasn't too confusing, if it was, just ignore it, point is, we should slow down a little on the time jumps, and they don't live in florida, and that's all I care --RonaldMcDonald—talk 12:21, 13 September 2022 (CEST) How's it coming? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:49, 17 September 2022 (CEST) Ooh, "little things and seeing if I use them?" Sounds fun XD can't wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 00:46, 19 September 2022 (CEST) Oh? I won't see this twist coming? Yeah, right! I can see it from a mile away!... Ok, you're probably right, I probably won't see it coming.... Can't wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 08:54, 21 September 2022 (CEST) I am impatient... that's all I am gonna say, lol --RonaldMcDonald—talk 07:08, 23 September 2022 (CEST) Ugh, the suspense is killing me! XD --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:45, 24 September 2022 (CEST) So, how long do you think it will take you? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 06:26, 25 September 2022 (CEST) ...hmm, where is that collins, I wonder? Where has he gone off to this time? Hmm... Hope he'll be back for supper... --RonaldMcDonald—talk 08:00, 27 September 2022 (CEST) Glad you finally got it up, I will read it as soon as I have the time! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:14, 28 September 2022 (CEST) I read it, and I enjoyed it, I am starting to write my chapter --RonaldMcDonald—talk 19:14, 28 September 2022 (CEST) I have just written a major plot twist, and the best part, is that you get to decide the outcome of the twist... And by "major", I mean... "MAJOR"! Hehehe, anyway, I should have it up tomorrow or the next day, I don't know. Maybe today? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 11:23, 29 September 2022 (CEST) It's up! Can't wait to see where you take this... Lol --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:35, 30 September 2022 (CEST) Yeah, that's why I made you decide, because I couldn't, XD --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:30, 3 October 2022 (CEST) How's it coming? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:11, 5 October 2022 (CEST) Alright! Can't wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:16, 7 October 2022 (CEST) Ugh! The suspense! XD --RonaldMcDonald—talk 08:00, 9 October 2022 (CEST) Oof, you disappeared again? You have a seriously busy life, don't you? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:14, 11 October 2022 (CEST) Well, hope you don't take too long, it has been two weeks since I posted my chapter, lol, just don't disappear again, XD --RonaldMcDonald—talk 09:53, 13 October 2022 (CEST) Hmm, sounds interesting, can't wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 08:39, 15 October 2022 (CEST) Alright, sounds good, how long until you're done with your chapter, you think? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 07:38, 18 October 2022 (CEST) This is a joke, I am not mad at you: You have lied to me! You said in the next 12 hours or so! But it has been said time! And there is no published chapter! Explain yourself!!! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 08:49, 21 October 2022 (CEST) 12 hours you say? --RonaldMcDonald—talk 16:42, 22 October 2022 (CEST) Hmm, I wonder where he is this time?... --RonaldMcDonald—talk 08:25, 24 October 2022 (CEST) Yeah, given your track record, it's probably best not to make promises, can't wait, though! I hope you're right about it being worth the wait! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:46, 25 October 2022 (CEST) |
Great! I'll read it as soon as I get some free time! --RonaldMcDonald—talk 13:19, 26 October 2022 (CEST)
I have read it, interesting turn of events, I was certainly not expecting that! I have been correcting a few errors and typos, and formatting, and I realized, mom comes home long after dinnertime, and she asked "what do you kids want for dinner?"... and then they proceeded to have dessert and watch a movie, no doubt, by the time the movie was over, they should be waking up... XD
Should I fix that, just rewrite a few paragraphs, keep all the plot the same, should be an easy fix. Or should I leave it? Up to you. --RonaldMcDonald—talk 10:02, 27 October 2022 (CEST)
SodaPopSweet
Aw, thanks for reading. Your comments were very sweet. I’m definitely trying to provide a bit of elevated smut compared to most of the garbage written out there. :) SodaPopSweet (talk) 08:09, 3 May 2022 (CEST)
Abadman
Hey, so I understand Princess Kittens has left her stories in your care. I've done a little writing contributions recently in 2T4U, but I'd really like to do some for for 10 days to live. Feel free to check my contributions to see if they're up to snuff. Since all her stories are requested to not edit without permission but I'd like to add further days to the story I figured I'd put the request to you. Lmk.--Abadman (talk) 05:42, 7 June 2022 (CEST)