Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Church/New Extreme/Private

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Having trouble wrapping this up, all of the important stuff is there though, now I just need to come up with something to transition out of here. It just went a bit too long for me and my brain got too tired to think up an ending. Jemini (talk) 05:23, 17 January 2018 (CET)

With such extreme measures, I fear some parents decide to simple remove their girls from the school. And that probably would be well received by the religious leaders, saying school is not a place for women anyway. I think we should have an option for John actually refusing this escalation, even if he's overruled, he'll probably feel better with himself after saying so.

Also, John only left town 10 years ago, the Deacon and the headmaster were already quite powerful then. I kinda expected the deacon to say something like: "Welcome back, young Gardner, I trust I didn't bore you with my speech today like last time you were here" or something.--Tod Naturlich (talk) 07:59, 17 January 2018 (CET)

Well, still plenty of time to make alterations like that. Jemini (talk) 13:01, 17 January 2018 (CET)

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