User talk:Hgcollins
It's always good to see new contributors on the site. Two of your recent contributions aren't properly formatted for the site, however. Pedo Romp/Go all out: with her cute body, you just can't help yourself and Pedo Romp/Teach her how to give you a blow job are both missing the category on the page. It is important that every story page on the site has a category. Please refer to the Format Rules to learn how to format contributions to the site. If you could add the category to the pages I mentioned, I would appreciate it. If you need any help, or have any questions feel free to contact me on my talk page. --Elerneron (talk) 14:28, 16 June 2020 (CEST)
I took the liberty of removing "My Story" from the front of your links and moving the page that already had it in the title. While it isn't "wrong" to have it in the links, it is unnecessary extra work that doesn't really help keep everything separate. Simply starting the links with the story name is sufficient. If you want "My Story" in front of your links, let me know and I will change them back. --Elerneron (talk) 14:45, 8 September 2020 (CEST)
Innocent Ruin
Thank you for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I still have plenty of stuff to write to write about, and a whole bunch of stuff waiting proofreading. Like you said, fact-checking details and sticking to lore can be a little time-consuming. There's so much grey area in the lore, history and what really is true and what isn't. I probably have missed some details in previous updates, but I'll get to fixing stuff eventually. Feel free to contribute in any way you want. It's free format, free for all. Looking forward to seeing what you write about. Innocent Ruin (talk) 23:26, 7 October 2020 (CEST)
Estrus Chaurus coupled with the Spider addon and Kyne's Blessing definetily adds a nice touch if you're into that sort of things. Bugs are kind of bland and way too easy otherwise, so for only increased difficulty's sake I like to run with them. I personally had no problem finding the requirements for LE, unless there's some requirements from older versions that aren't uploaded anywhere anymore. Not sure if that's the case for SE, not sure even which one you're running. I'm unlikely to take a direct approach when it comes to potential corrections. I don't like meddling with people's edits, so I'll stick to talk section if necessary. One thing I noticed is that you've forgotten to categorize your contribution. Just add this code somewhere in the pages you contribute so it'll adhere to site rules. Innocent Ruin (talk) 14:14, 8 October 2020 (CEST)
[[Category:Journals of Skyrim]]
Good to see you contributing again. In case you didn't notice I recently added page-counts for each individual set of journals, which will work in the same way as page-count in stories page by counting the number of pages a certain category is put under. This is completely optional, but if you want to, I can add these categories to your contributions as well, or you can do it yourself. Or not, it's completely optional like I said.
Also, do you permit edits to your contributions in general, or do you prefer to do quality checks and proofreading yourself? I ran across a few typos (nothing major) while re-reading the first chapter. Innocent Ruin (talk) 17:42, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Yes, Ravencrone is kinda underrated, (I have no strong opinion of Benor personally,) and cut content, in general, feels like a problem with the base game. So many missed opportunities, like the Great Collapse, the Silver Hand, and whatever the fuck's up with Rorikstead's soil. At the same time, I feel like Bethesda likes having these characters and storylines where the player isn't told everything, and stuff is left for us to figure out... I guess it works in some areas too.
Regarding the plot point you mentioned, it's funny because I didn't even intend to include it to begin with, and I'm still unsure where to go with it... But since it is part of the story now, I kinda have to stick with it! I still have the whole Solsteim to play around with before I get to that, but considering I don't intend to continue the journals for too much further (it's maybe two-thirds of the way through, unless I change my mind?) we should see some continuation to that sooner rather than later. --Innocent Ruin (talk) 13:06, 17 December 2021 (CET)
I tried it, but at this point I'm just waiting for the full release, no matter how long it'll take. And morrowind is definitely one to try, although its mechanics have aged horribly. Pickpocketing straight up doesn't work, and hit chance takes a while to get used to. If you're patient, you can wait for Skywind, though. 😉 --Innocent Ruin (talk) 17:19, 17 December 2021 (CET)
User Rights
You have been granted rights as a Trusted Contributor. This will allow you to do a bit more on the site, including moving pages without creating redirects and deleting pages among others. I hope this little powerup is helpful. --Elerneron (talk) 11:48, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Notsooldpervert
Just browsing the Recent Changes page and stumbled across April's Punishment. I can only assume the parents already know how they're punished at school. You've just finished Part 4, with the implication being she'll be punished more at home. I hope we get to see her take a grown up cock in her tiny pussy. Maybe her punishments for a while could be training with increasingly bigger toys until she can take it. Too bad she's a habitual offender, let's see her spend half the year being sent to class naked with cum leaking from her pussy. Forgot her homework, sent to the office, sent back naked with a creampie. Called to the front of the class to read, they all watch a huge glob of cum drop out to the floor, so she's sent back at lunch for a refill for making a mess. Goes to collect her clothes after school, instead there's a contrived excuse to fuck her again, send her home naked and leaking. Oh, no! She leaked onto the seat of Daddy's car! Spends the rest of the afternoon draining dad repeatedly. Class the next morning, "I was being punished when I got home and didn't get to do my homework." By the end of the year, she has to turn her clothes in when she arrives to school (assuming she's allowed to wear them to school), and any boy who wants to can fuck her. Maybe she doesn't even get to go to class anymore, her "in school suspension" is to go to the middle and high school and help boys concentrate better by being a free use cocksleeve lol.... shame she'll have to repeat 1st grade. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:14, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Hmmm... Mom is the one who trains her pussy. If Daddy's going to punish her at home, April has to do it right which means pussy full of cum. Every day (whether she gets punished or not) Mommy spends an hour fucking her with a toy. Maybe something like a butt plug but a dildo she has to hold inside of her until bedtime (or get punished), then another hour of fucking her with toys before bed. Love the idea of her being naked all the time at school, usually the only one who is. Never allowed to say no when people cop a feel. Also love the idea of her getting fucked by the teacher in front of her classmates, maybe for something Tiffany did. Ooohh I like that! She really is a good girl for the most part, but keeps getting blamed when other people do stuff. After all, she's got a reputation as a troublemaker now. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:40, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Honestly, I'm neutral on the whole punishment aspect. To me it's about fucking the loli (repeatedly and preferably in public lol) and the punishment is really just a plot device to let it happen. Just love the idea of stripping a loli and doing lewd things to her in front of other kids, or even adults. She's naked and in stocks in the main courtyard of the mall with any passerby who wants to taking a turn. Why? Someone accused her of shoplifting (too bad Tiffany got away and April took the blame), so the adults just shake their heads at a troublemaker girl, and it's a shame she started so young. Oh well, time to go. After you watch three guys cum inside her, it just kinda blurs together, come along kids. No son, we don't have time for you to take a turn. Oh fine, your older sister can watch you while I head to the store. lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:26, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Awesome! I see Masterdebator is still writing, though sadly not Dan and His Boys. Or rather was still writing back in April, anyway. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:34, 10 December 2021 (CET)
If you're in touch with any of those other authors, maybe they'd like ATF as a new venue to post, now that Lasiter is throwing in the towel. Don't burn yourself out, slow and steady wins the day. Though I do look forward to seeing April's next predicament lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:55, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Like I said, I loved the story enough to try and base an RP off of it lol I just never made the connection with your handle since it had been so long since I'd read it. Hopefully the other authors from Lasiter will come over here. I really want Masterdebator to finish Dan and His Boys. The only thing close to as hot as turning a loli into the family fuck toy, is a MILF turning herself into one for shotas lol What's next for Naomi, now that her little pussy is open for business? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:31, 13 December 2021 (CET)
I think you caught it pretty close with Naomi. And she's learning little girls don't get a choice and just what they're for lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:14, 13 December 2021 (CET)
Hmmm... destroying her gifts might upset those who gave them. Maybe her punishment should be loss of clothes, instead of destroying them. Take them away, and make her go naked in public lol Obviously their treatment of her is accepted enough that the Members of the Board used her like that at the dinner party, perhaps making her go naked in public is frowned on but no one objects. Let strangers play with her body and force her to orgasm in public places. Dads who wish they could play with their daughters can touch or fuck her right in front of said daughters using Naomi as a surrogate. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:25, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Nothing says the board members she'll be "entertaining" don't have kids. A family vacation where Mom entertains the kids while they watch daddy repeatedly fuck a girl their age. Mommies undressing the girls and having them spread their legs for Daddy to look at while he uses his new cocksleeve. Though I do like the random strangers doing it, too. Maybe a neighbor catches on to what's happening, and when his wife leaves for several hours he "borrows" Naomi, strips his toddler naked and stares at her while fucking Naomi, after which he has Naomi feed the tot Daddy's cum out of her pussy. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:23, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Keep the daughter naked too, to "inspire him" to fuck Naomi more often. Use Naomi to teach the girl all the ways there are to get fucked: hard and mean, soft and gentle, girl on top, doggy style etc. Make the girl suck all of Daddy's cum out of Naomi to get used to the taste? Maybe her mother doesn't mind him using Naomi, and gently pets and strokes the naked daughter while they watch, sad that her little girl will end up like that but knowing it's "necessary" (which she assures the girl it is necessary). Maybe bring Naomi to that girls "debut" and have Naomi lick her clean between fucks? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:50, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Hadn't read the updated version. I hate ass to mouth. Naomi should have puked on him lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:18, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Maybe instead of a dinner party, it's poker night or something and the girls "get" to serve while naked and used by whoever wants to? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:56, 29 December 2021 (CET)
Had another idea for Naomi. A reluctant husband who doesn't want to have sex with young girls, but his mercenary/controlling wife insists the only way to get promoted is to do what the big wigs do and forces him to have sex with Naomi all weekend. Maybe he even comes to like Naomi more than his wife so when she suggests he take her away for a weekend he does it but it's fun for the both of them lol. Maybe Naomi has to show the lady the cum dripping from her pussy to prove he used her body or something. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:08, 9 January 2022 (CET)
True! That also sets up situations where it's the wife that's a perv, not the hubby, making him do all the things she wishes she had a dick to do, or that she fantasizes were done to her as a kid. Meanwhile hubby's balls deep in Naomi thinking "is this the woman I married?" Too late to get a divorce now, because she's seen him doing this to a young girl lol
I was just reading April's Punishment part 14, and a thought occurred to me. What if pictures and video of the girls was legal as long as it happens during their punishments (or as part of the punishment). Have photos of the girls stuffed with cock, gushing spunk from their tiny pussies or covered like they bathed in it posted all over the schools. Not just their school, but the junior high and high schools too (especially pictures taken while serving detentions at the older schools). I remember having a CCTV system when I was is Junior High and High School, and a couple of times a week they'd have a "news" show for kids. Every morning they could show a video of kids that were punished the day before as a "deterrent" for bad behavior, so every morning April and Tiffany would get to have a video of them cumming like sluts as they get filled up. April's treatment made me think of all of her classmates watching a video of her triple penetration lol Of course, copies of all pictures and video are sent to the parents (for legal purposes of course). April becomes the literal poster girl for the initiative and she can't go anywhere in town without seeing poster size photos of her naked, cum soaked and/or cock filled body (maybe even a billboard or two lol). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:24, 2 February 2022 (CET)
Wassersaeufer
Happy to read that you enjoy "Making the Team" and thank you for your kind words and that you have taken time to leave a comment on my talk-page. If you want to add to "Making the Team", just go for it. If you have read it, I am pretty confident you know what would fit and what wouldn't. --Wassersaeufer (talk) 00:12, 12 December 2021 (CET)
Josepadilla
Thank you for your words, they motivate me to continue writing, I read a bit of your story of the punishment of April and I think it is very good, when I finish reading it I will give my final opinion. --Josepadilla (talk) 01:38, 22 December 2021 (CET)
PrincessKittens
I haven't done much for that story (Siblings) in a little while, I might add some more tomorrow or something... Glad you are enjoying it though! --PrincessKittens (talk) 08:53, 29 December 2021 (CET)
I added two more pages to my story (Siblings), more coming soon! Just thought I should tell you! :D --PrincessKittens (talk) 13:00, 31 December 2021 (CET)
My most recent chapter ends kind of in the middle of the story, I apologize, I will probably add the next one today! --PrincessKittens (talk) 11:13, 2 January 2022 (CET)
Why don't you tell me some of your ideas :) I am curious to see what you come up with.
I am just going to say, all of those are wrong... XD anyway, but keep guessing... maybe you will land on the truth... I will say this... The whole raping little girls thing... That is something I have fantasized over for about 10 years... And Kate is a real person, she was sort of the center of all that, she was around 8-10 when I started fantasizing... (by the way, I have never acted on these fantasies, everything has stayed in my head XD I wouldn't actually do most of the stuff I write about IRL, especially not to someone so young.)--PrincessKittens (talk) 00:27, 12 January 2022 (CET)
I will give you a hint... It is more personal. - You can decide what that means - also I worded my above message wrong it should have been more vague, it is currently misleading it should say -
I am just going to say, all of those are wrong... XD anyway, but keep guessing... maybe you will land on the truth... I will say this... The whole little girls being raped thing... That is something I have fantasized over for about 10 years... And Kate is a real person, she was sort of the center of all that, she was around 8-10 when I started fantasizing... (by the way, I have never acted on these fantasies, everything has stayed in my head XD I wouldn't actually want to do most of the stuff I write about IRL.)
Just some small changes in wording... --PrincessKittens (talk) 01:30, 13 January 2022 (CET)
I noticed in your stories list on your User page, it is a little bit cluttered, it is organized, but too big. If you want to shrink it a little, you could use a collapsible table, like I do on my User page, like this for example:
| Story name | |
| Story codes: | -STORY CODES- |
| Plot Summary: | -PLOT SUMMARY- |
| You can easily | Add more stuff |
| If you need to | XD |
JayneDeviant
Thanks so much for the kind words, still getting the hang of it! --JayneDeviant (talk) 04:03, 30 December 2021 (CET)