Talk:CF/Kevin/Second Day/Breakfast/School

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A suggestion for a semen power somewhat later on. (It would be a stronger power, definitely for later.) We have already seen someone suggest mind controlling cum, which has to be one of the last ones offered long after the ones Eurel has mentioned. Something else that can appear much later from now, but way before mind controlling cum, would be amnesia inducing cum. Basically, allows him to have sex with someone and then they forget about the fact he just had sex with them. (Although, I did say later, but at the rate Kevin is going right now it is entirely possible he could get it by the end of the day.) Jemini (talk) 12:52, 21 October 2019 (UTC)

How about as a prelude to the (too) powerful mind control cum, have a cum power that would mimic a "love potion". Not really mind control, but more of a brainwashing or emotional influence, perhaps? Too much Harry Potter fanfiction recently lol, so many plots involve evil/manipulative Dumbledore and/or Weaslys trying to snare Harry (and sometimes Hermione) with loyalty, trust, and love potions. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:59, 21 October 2019 (UTC)

The problem with amnesia, brainwashing and Aphrodisiac cum, is that it would also affect Elruel and the amnesia one could be exploited.

Fuck girl, get power while fucking Elruel. Elruel forgets you fucked her, and would also forget that she gave you a power. --MrPib (talk) 19:39, 21 October 2019 (UTC)


Except that she is fundamentally linked to you, and therefore knows all the powers that you have at any one time. Amnesia would be a very temporary state for her as your own thoughts and the state of your reproductive system would give her the truth quickly. --Elerneron (talk) 00:13, 22 October 2019 (UTC)

It also hasn't been documented yet, whether or not Elruel is even affected by the cum powers. Since she grants them, it's also likely that she is immune to any effect she doesn't wish to be subjected to. As for "Aphrodisiac" cum, I was referring more to the devotion and complicity involved with love. Even if it's just "puppy love" staring out and taking repeated exposure to build up, it would still be effective in gaining loyal supporters. Of course it could also backfire if they're the jealous type lol. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:01, 22 October 2019 (UTC)


Sorry for the delay continuing this. Work has been very active recently, with the threat of a VERY slow January; so I have been taking advantage of the overtime now with the expectation of little to no work at the beginning of the year. Unfortunately, the distance from the story has drained me of my inspiration for the moment (same with Vault 69). I had an idea for the Risky option when I wrote the passage originally, and developed an idea for the requested Elruel scene . . . but I just have no muse right now. Maybe tossing them out there for discussion could help me get the motivation to continue the story quicker. So here are the ideas:

  • Play with Elruel in the bathroom. - My idea here was that while Elruel body-fucks you, you are interrupted. Since it's the boy's bathroom, you are interrupted by a kindergarten boy. Kevin then gets the option to "get gay" with the boy, make him watch, give up, or what have you. Any ideas?
  • Or maybe something a bit more risky? - My ideas for this option were that Kevin knows a certain vent in the maintenance area under the gym that has a pinhole allowing him to see into the girl's changing room. While using it to jack off to the girls who don't want to come to school in their uniforms as they change, he gets caught by the coach just as he cums and sent to the principals office (both of whom are MILFs). Thoughts?
  • Any other suggestions on how I should proceed?

Any help would be appreciated coming out of my funk. --Elerneron (talk) 14:11, 3 November 2019 (UTC) Bump --Elerneron (talk) 12:52, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

After reading over those two ideas, it makes me wonder about playing with Kat in the bathroom. Would the kindergarten boy still wander in? I don't see why he shouldn't assuming you take her into the boy's bathroom and don't go into the girl's bathroom. On that route, you could just feed the kid your cum after Kat gets it out, considering she already got a load inside her and the new load could count toward the kid in order to get you a power. That option also nicely straddles the line so those who are not into gay stuff can still be Ok with it if the kid is only eating your cum (which is already delicious anyway.) Jemini (talk) 17:17, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Actually that would work rather nicely, especially if Kat was the one that fed the boy the cum. She has it on her hand, and just sticks her finger in the kid's mouth on impulse. In fact, you could combine it with the getting caught and taken to the principal as well, if the coach caught you and your sister coming out of the boy's bathroom with cum stuck to her lip or something. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:40, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

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