Difference between revisions of "Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter"
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Since we have so many different rules now I think it would be helpful for a rules page, showing all the different variations, and when those rules come into effect. --[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 15:00, 10 May 2018 (PST) | Since we have so many different rules now I think it would be helpful for a rules page, showing all the different variations, and when those rules come into effect. --[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 15:00, 10 May 2018 (PST) | ||
Can you '''''PLEASE''''' structure the page better? You have the "Franklin girls" (Deacon's punishment) and "cheer squad" (strange letter) in the same category in the middle of the page, and their establishing scenes at the very bottom of the page. Maybe have the categories be things like '''1st week of Quarter''' '''5th week of Quarter''' ECT. So that I know what happens when so that I don't suggest a punishment that has yet to be implemented --[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 05:58, 31 October 2019 (UTC) (not trying to be rude) | |||
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I still have lots to write for the first week before even thinking about continuing to this part of the story, but since Jemini is blazing through his own parts of the story, it would be unfair to slow him down just because I can't keep up. Therefore I'm posting this new node, in case some paths advance enough to merit go here.
As an aside, after this node I'm not sure if I should just add a final node with the remaining two quarters, or if there will be enough material so that each new quarter requires it's own node (I personally think a single node for the last two quarters is enough). The story will end during the summer vacations, a year after the program started. We'll have to wait to see the state of the school and town by them. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 09:58, 29 September 2017 (CEST)
I removed Ms. Varnor's children from "Three kinder garden girls and two third grade boys, were caught playing "Doctor"" as they are already involved in plot lines where Ms. Varnor offers relations with her daughter to the MC, that conflict with this choice. Why would she offer to help with getting her daughter an infraction that may require sex, if her daughter was already involved in that type of infraction. --Telgar (talk) 15:00, 10 May 2018 (PST)
Since we have so many different rules now I think it would be helpful for a rules page, showing all the different variations, and when those rules come into effect. --Telgar (talk) 15:00, 10 May 2018 (PST)
Can you PLEASE structure the page better? You have the "Franklin girls" (Deacon's punishment) and "cheer squad" (strange letter) in the same category in the middle of the page, and their establishing scenes at the very bottom of the page. Maybe have the categories be things like 1st week of Quarter 5th week of Quarter ECT. So that I know what happens when so that I don't suggest a punishment that has yet to be implemented --MrPib (talk) 05:58, 31 October 2019 (UTC) (not trying to be rude)