Talk:Life Hacks/Hallomod(gp-pre/pres-inf-im-cr'pay)/Tell August a convenient half-truth

Well well, I think this is hypothesis demonstrated. It seems to me that people write sex scenes a lot better when they are writing for stories someone else came up with. I notice you are very slow to write sex scenes in your own stories, and the one story I started on the site, God's Compensation, is nearing 100 pages with no sex scene yet in the entire story. Meanwhile, when I am contributing to other people's stories, the sex scenes just keep rolling out, and here you just started contributing to this leg and it is already getting pretty hot and heavy. (Well, it was kind of a given it was going to go there with August, but it is also moving toward the sisters pretty fast.) Jemini (talk) 17:31, 23 January 2017 (CET)

EDIT: You don't mind if I tweak the opening line there a little though, do you? Jemini (talk) 17:41, 23 January 2017 (CET) After Ok, I only made a few text edits, I think I edited about 2 lines. The rest of it was formatting edits for readability. Kind of tough to read a bunch of short lines one after another, so I combined them into paragraphs wherever there was only one speaker followed by actions. You can actually do that, even if the actions are by different people, so long as the speaker doesn't change. Jemini (talk) 17:55, 23 January 2017 (CET)