Talk:Life Hacks/Timeline

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One concern I have about the Angel situation with her period. Having been around many households that have mostly female members, normally their periods cycle around the same time, literally within days of each other, in some cases hours. This is true of the first period as well, if a girl was to have her first period it would normally start in the middle of, the start of, the family cycle, which means in Xanders household at least one if not two of the three females old enough to have periods would have started theirs, and the rest would start that day or the day after. So to keep true to biology, Mom, Britney or both would have started their period that day or the day before, and whoever had not would start it the next day, unless something happened to interrupt that cycle. This interruption would raise alarm bells with at least mom as to why her daughters appear to be missing their period. --Telgar (talk) 16:00, 22 April 2019 (PST)


One thing about that, Brittany has been out at college. This is her just popping back for a visit. So, Brittany at least should not have her cycle synced with the other women. That means it's only Inga and Charity to sync with each other, or for Angel to align her's with.

Going by events as they've gone so far, Charity has not started hers yet, so she should be a day or hours away from it. In the route where Xander has sex with her, he uses the hack to set her to hyperfertile (which immediately resets her cycle since her fertility was raised to max,) which gets her pregnant. Jemini (talk) 03:27, 24 April 2019 (CEST)


Okay nice, just thought I'd bring that up so that other authors could keep it in mind, it would seem very weird for Angel to be the only one in the family having a period, without some sort of augmentation/interference on the part of Xander.

As for Brittany and college, that would also depend on if she was living with female roommates, or on her own in a dorm room. Some dorms have roommates some do not, and how long she has been away. If she is living on her own or only been away a few months, then her cycle shouldn't have changed, If she has roommates and has been gone for a while then her cycle could have changed depending on the dynamics of the house. The Alpha female tends to set the cycle. If Brit has a more dominant personality the other girls may have synced with her cycle. --Telgar (talk) 09:34, 23 April 2019 (PST)


Looking at the timeline for the 0900 part at the park, there are actually two groups of boys, the 10-12-year-olds hanging around the playground, and then another group who is nearby but not in the playground group. Those three are brought into the story during the rape of Blond-girl on the beach while Liz and charity watch, they hear blond-girl scream and come investigate, They are Brett/Betty 8, Tommy/Tammy 7, and Kyle/Kelly 5. It is never established where exactly they are when they hear blong-girl scream but they are nearby. --Telgar (talk) 09:34, 23 April 2019 (PST)


Yeah, that one in the park was referring to those three. The 10-12-year-olds are considered in the playground. They will not be attracted toward the ravine. Brett, Tommy, and Kyle though will be attracted to anything significant enough going on in either the playground or the ravine. (Was planning on having them come in on the current very public "tagging" of the blond girl on the sandbox.) Jemini (talk) 14:36, 24 April 2019 (CEST)


Okay changed the reference to Brett, Tommy and Kyle from Tween-Age to Pre-Teen-Age Boys as Tween is usually in reference to kids 10-12 and they fit more in the pre-teen age group. --Telgar (talk) 21:03, 24 April 2019 (PST)