Talk:Life Hacks/rp-sld, "roses" (sensory-)/perfect/non-compete (town)/Lure them both to the creek

I had to re-write this. I had plans to introduce this Elizabeth character in the next post in the sequence, but all the ways that I could think of still didn't make anywhere near as much sense as just having her join from the start, so I just went back and wrote her in. I'm gonna have to update the next two pages as well to include her before progressing any further. Jemini (talk) 09:26, 10 March 2018 (CET)

Not a problem, I was a little shocked that what I wrote had been so extensively re-written. It would probably be a good idea, in the future, if we have plans for one of the choices, we claim it, to avoid this again. To be honest, I think it makes the future scenes much hotter, that her older sister is not only enjoying watching her little sister get raped. but encouraging it. Telgar (talk) 23:02, 10 March 2018 (PST)

Problem is, I actually DIDN'T have a plan. It came together after I got 2 posts ahead of this scene. (Although, actually, I very well might have thought of it had I been the one to write this scene in the first place, this really does sound like something I really would set up from the get-go going by my past writing.) That's just how my writing works, I rarely if every plan something out even a single scene in advance. Inspiration just strikes me while I am in the middle of writing. Jemini (talk) 11:00, 11 March 2018 (CET)