User talk:ArthurKung

Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. --Elerneron (talk) 00:57, 23 March 2016 (CET)

I have no problem at all with you writing for Jaedyn Farmer in Generations.

As far as realms are concerned, I began with feudal Europe because it was the most familiar for readers and writers alike. If writers are interested in other regions, I can add them. I intended to actually make maps of the various kingdoms to keep things consistent, but that turned out to be a lot more work than I can handle right now. I will probably get it done at some point in the future however.

As far as technology goes, there is a huge disparity of technology throughout the world. Older technology still flourishes, primarily due to the advantages of magically enhanced items (guns have a lot more trouble with magical armor than with normal armor). The most advanced technology that most people will encounter would be that of the Renaissance, but the gnomes are at the level of the Early Industrial Age. Occasional examples of extreme technology can exist, but this is always the result of a skilled use of cutting edge magitech (the enhancement of technological devices with magical properties). Unfortunately, while the dwarves are the most skilled at magitech, they aren't very advanced technologically. The gnomes are very skilled at technology, but have little interest in magitech. This means that advanced technological items like automatic guns and power armor are very rare indeed.

I'll see to adding harpies. I'm not certain where to put them, but my gut says to make them a Beastkin race; so I'm putting them there for now. I've actually been considering finding a partner or two to help me flesh out the lore a bit. If you're interested in helping out, we can discuss it further. --Elerneron (talk) 07:04, 26 March 2016 (CET)

I made a few modifications to the first part of the story to reflect the fact that you keep the memories of the chosen when you take them over. I also corrected the template by adding a year/month/day age and adding the Divine Spark ability that should always be present. --Elerneron (talk) 08:47, 26 March 2016 (CET)

You may want to check out Generations/Lore/Realms/Garia as I have expanded it greatly. This should give you a better idea of how things are laid out. The city of Blackcliff may be of particular interest to you. It hosts a significant number of cliff-side harpy nests. I'm just saying that if you want to get Jaedyn with a harpy he may wish to travel west ;) --Elerneron (talk) 03:55, 30 March 2016 (CEST)

You have no way of knowing this (because I haven't written it up yet), but normal pixie dust is either gold (vaginal secretions) or silver (semen). Since your fairy dust was enchanted however, green is fine. I also haven't written up anything on fey magic yet, but invisibility is definitely in the skillset of fey magic. It's fine if Xila is a sorceress, and used sorcery to turn her pixie dust into dust of invisibility . . . I was just letting you know that she could also use fey magic to turn Jaedyn invisible. It actually makes sense to make invisibility dust for regular use, freeing up her fey magic for other purposes. So everything's fine with what you've written. I just wanted to give you some more info that I hadn't written up yet. I did think I saw a discrepancy with the Time Passed (adding a extra day when a day hasn't passed; and without Jaedyn aging a day). Is this something you're doing intentionally due to Xila's intervention? I noticed you went back to the Generations/Sleep until morning‎ passage again. Unless some time bending magic is being used we can't really do that (passing the midnight threshold multiple times in a loop) since we are tracking the passage of time. If he's actually caught in a magical time loop, no problem. --Elerneron (talk) 00:30, 2 April 2016 (CEST)

Notsooldpervert

Do you accept requests or are you just working on the story you want to read? If you do take requests, do you want them here, or on the story page like elerneron prefers? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:11, 2 January 2017 (CET)

Hmmm... not sure which i find more odd: you don't want to write scenes of under 15 yo on a site dedicated to lolies, or you consider yourself vanilla but the path you've chosen to write leads to sex with a dog lol. How do you want your requests? I'll start with here, and request

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Ask_what_Fiona_has_in_mind (Reluctantly agree to fuck Michelle) [maybe bargain with her and she helps/watches you knock up Samantha (i think that's the grandaughter's name, and she's 14-15)

Another path that might interest you if you're into the beastiality aspect is to have the ghost dad posess the family dog lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:26, 2 January 2017 (CET)

Well that's fine. I like staight shota as well so bring on the MILFs. Life Hacks has several that are being neglected lol They've got a pretty complicated system though. Too bad about Samantha, but there's still Mom  ;) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:01, 2 January 2017 (CET)

Fuck her agressively. Dogs are used to that, and it would make Fiona hotter. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:28, 3 January 2017 (CET)

She seems to think she's in charge. You should refuse. (As an aside, medium size dogs are usually euqal to or bigger than average human. Unless Michelle was a toy poodle, she wouldn't have had such a hard time of it)

No worries. I've only taken a passing interest in it myself. Judging from the pics/videos I've seen Jack's about the size of a healthy german shepherd or rotweiller. I don't recall the breed of their family dog, but i want to say border collie size which would be smaller than Jack. Standard poodle should accomodate him easily, but the scene works as is. If you do the gentle path you can show it completely different and chalk it up to the different approach. :) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:35, 3 January 2017 (CET)

Jemini

Yeah, in reference to the conversation with Notsooldpervert, I really appreciate you filling in the MILF and bestiality routes, and your writing is pretty darn good too. I am pretty sure a lot of the readers here will want to see some loli routes stemming from any path though, and this one is just ripe for that possibility. I can write those routes in order to keep those options alive. The only thing is, you seem to be setting the pace for Fiona's personality, so the question is to whether or not she wants you fucking Samantha. The direction I had it is that she imagines in her wild F-ed up mind that Samantha is already a little whore with no boundaries, and this is resulting in her acting in such a way that makes things look more like that, such as throwing all of her underwear in the wash leaving her none to wear to bed. Jemini (talk) 22:18, 2 January 2017 (CET)

In my case, stories that I am the soul contributor to start to grow stale after a little while. I tend to get a lot more excited about writing for stories in witch I am not the only contributor, the things the other writer adds keeps it fresh. That's the main reason I stopped writing in 2T4U, but with you writing in there now I very well might get back into it. (Well, it is mostly your writing skill why I am getting excited. If it was a writer who wrote so poorly that I felt every single thing they wrote had to be scrapped and re-written then that would be a different story. In your case, you write well and make every bit the same level of effort I do to honor the character as laid out by previous authors who handled them. That's good stuff.) Jemini (talk) 04:41, 3 January 2017 (CET)

Whichever of those two paths you take, do you think you could keep the progress short both physical movement and time passing wise? (not necessarily in terms of conversation or post length, those can be as long as you want.) I am just seeing an opportunity to bring Samantha back into this, but I am a little too busy for that at the moment. Don't want to go ahead and claim both routes for myself, it is still completely possible for you to write up to another hour or so of story time passing without messing up what I have in mind so long as he does not wind up leaving and making it a lot farther than just getting out the door. Jemini (talk) 23:17, 3 January 2017 (CET)