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If you're in touch with any of those other authors, maybe they'd like ATF as a new venue to post, now that Lasiter is throwing in the towel. Don't burn yourself out, slow and steady wins the day. Though I do look forward to seeing April's next predicament lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 22:55, 10 December 2021 (CET)
If you're in touch with any of those other authors, maybe they'd like ATF as a new venue to post, now that Lasiter is throwing in the towel. Don't burn yourself out, slow and steady wins the day. Though I do look forward to seeing April's next predicament lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 22:55, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Happy to read that you enjoy "Making the Team" and thank you for your kind words and that you have taken time to leave a comment on my talk-page. If you want to add to "Making the Team", just go for it. If you have read it, I am pretty confident you know what would fit and what wouldn't. --[[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] ([[User talk:Wassersaeufer|talk]]) 00:12, 12 December 2021 (CET)

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It's always good to see new contributors on the site. Two of your recent contributions aren't properly formatted for the site, however. Pedo Romp/Go all out: with her cute body, you just can't help yourself and Pedo Romp/Teach her how to give you a blow job are both missing the category on the page. It is important that every story page on the site has a category. Please refer to the Format Rules to learn how to format contributions to the site. If you could add the category to the pages I mentioned, I would appreciate it. If you need any help, or have any questions feel free to contact me on my talk page. --Elerneron (talk) 14:28, 16 June 2020 (CEST)


I took the liberty of removing "My Story" from the front of your links and moving the page that already had it in the title. While it isn't "wrong" to have it in the links, it is unnecessary extra work that doesn't really help keep everything separate. Simply starting the links with the story name is sufficient. If you want "My Story" in front of your links, let me know and I will change them back. --Elerneron (talk) 14:45, 8 September 2020 (CEST)


Innocent Ruin

Thank you for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I still have plenty of stuff to write to write about, and a whole bunch of stuff waiting proofreading. Like you said, fact-checking details and sticking to lore can be a little time-consuming. There's so much grey area in the lore, history and what really is true and what isn't. I probably have missed some details in previous updates, but I'll get to fixing stuff eventually. Feel free to contribute in any way you want. It's free format, free for all. Looking forward to seeing what you write about. Innocent Ruin (talk) 23:26, 7 October 2020 (CEST)


Estrus Chaurus coupled with the Spider addon and Kyne's Blessing definetily adds a nice touch if you're into that sort of things. Bugs are kind of bland and way too easy otherwise, so for only increased difficulty's sake I like to run with them. I personally had no problem finding the requirements for LE, unless there's some requirements from older versions that aren't uploaded anywhere anymore. Not sure if that's the case for SE, not sure even which one you're running. I'm unlikely to take a direct approach when it comes to potential corrections. I don't like meddling with people's edits, so I'll stick to talk section if necessary. One thing I noticed is that you've forgotten to categorize your contribution. Just add this code somewhere in the pages you contribute so it'll adhere to site rules. Innocent Ruin (talk) 14:14, 8 October 2020 (CEST)

[[Category:Journals of Skyrim]]


Good to see you contributing again. In case you didn't notice I recently added page-counts for each individual set of journals, which will work in the same way as page-count in stories page by counting the number of pages a certain category is put under. This is completely optional, but if you want to, I can add these categories to your contributions as well, or you can do it yourself. Or not, it's completely optional like I said.

Also, do you permit edits to your contributions in general, or do you prefer to do quality checks and proofreading yourself? I ran across a few typos (nothing major) while re-reading the first chapter. Innocent Ruin (talk) 17:42, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

User Rights

You have been granted rights as a Trusted Contributor. This will allow you to do a bit more on the site, including moving pages without creating redirects and deleting pages among others. I hope this little powerup is helpful. --Elerneron (talk) 11:48, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Notsooldpervert

Just browsing the Recent Changes page and stumbled across April's Punishment. I can only assume the parents already know how they're punished at school. You've just finished Part 4, with the implication being she'll be punished more at home. I hope we get to see her take a grown up cock in her tiny pussy. Maybe her punishments for a while could be training with increasingly bigger toys until she can take it. Too bad she's a habitual offender, let's see her spend half the year being sent to class naked with cum leaking from her pussy. Forgot her homework, sent to the office, sent back naked with a creampie. Called to the front of the class to read, they all watch a huge glob of cum drop out to the floor, so she's sent back at lunch for a refill for making a mess. Goes to collect her clothes after school, instead there's a contrived excuse to fuck her again, send her home naked and leaking. Oh, no! She leaked onto the seat of Daddy's car! Spends the rest of the afternoon draining dad repeatedly. Class the next morning, "I was being punished when I got home and didn't get to do my homework." By the end of the year, she has to turn her clothes in when she arrives to school (assuming she's allowed to wear them to school), and any boy who wants to can fuck her. Maybe she doesn't even get to go to class anymore, her "in school suspension" is to go to the middle and high school and help boys concentrate better by being a free use cocksleeve lol.... shame she'll have to repeat 1st grade. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:14, 6 December 2021 (CET)

Hmmm... Mom is the one who trains her pussy. If Daddy's going to punish her at home, April has to do it right which means pussy full of cum. Every day (whether she gets punished or not) Mommy spends an hour fucking her with a toy. Maybe something like a butt plug but a dildo she has to hold inside of her until bedtime (or get punished), then another hour of fucking her with toys before bed. Love the idea of her being naked all the time at school, usually the only one who is. Never allowed to say no when people cop a feel. Also love the idea of her getting fucked by the teacher in front of her classmates, maybe for something Tiffany did. Ooohh I like that! She really is a good girl for the most part, but keeps getting blamed when other people do stuff. After all, she's got a reputation as a troublemaker now. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:40, 6 December 2021 (CET)

Honestly, I'm neutral on the whole punishment aspect. To me it's about fucking the loli (repeatedly and preferably in public lol) and the punishment is really just a plot device to let it happen. Just love the idea of stripping a loli and doing lewd things to her in front of other kids, or even adults. She's naked and in stocks in the main courtyard of the mall with any passerby who wants to taking a turn. Why? Someone accused her of shoplifting (too bad Tiffany got away and April took the blame), so the adults just shake their heads at a troublemaker girl, and it's a shame she started so young. Oh well, time to go. After you watch three guys cum inside her, it just kinda blurs together, come along kids. No son, we don't have time for you to take a turn. Oh fine, your older sister can watch you while I head to the store. lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:26, 6 December 2021 (CET)

Awesome! I see Masterdebator is still writing, though sadly not Dan and His Boys. Or rather was still writing back in April, anyway. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:34, 10 December 2021 (CET)

If you're in touch with any of those other authors, maybe they'd like ATF as a new venue to post, now that Lasiter is throwing in the towel. Don't burn yourself out, slow and steady wins the day. Though I do look forward to seeing April's next predicament lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:55, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Happy to read that you enjoy "Making the Team" and thank you for your kind words and that you have taken time to leave a comment on my talk-page. If you want to add to "Making the Team", just go for it. If you have read it, I am pretty confident you know what would fit and what wouldn't. --Wassersaeufer (talk) 00:12, 12 December 2021 (CET)