User talk:ArthurKung

Notsooldpervert

Do you accept requests or are you just working on the story you want to read? If you do take requests, do you want them here, or on the story page like elerneron prefers? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:11, 2 January 2017 (CET)

Hmmm... not sure which i find more odd: you don't want to write scenes of under 15 yo on a site dedicated to lolies, or you consider yourself vanilla but the path you've chosen to write leads to sex with a dog lol. How do you want your requests? I'll start with here, and request

https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Ask_what_Fiona_has_in_mind (Reluctantly agree to fuck Michelle) [maybe bargain with her and she helps/watches you knock up Samantha (i think that's the grandaughter's name, and she's 14-15)

Another path that might interest you if you're into the beastiality aspect is to have the ghost dad posess the family dog lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:26, 2 January 2017 (CET)

Well that's fine. I like staight shota as well so bring on the MILFs. Life Hacks has several that are being neglected lol They've got a pretty complicated system though. Too bad about Samantha, but there's still Mom  ;) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:01, 2 January 2017 (CET)

Fuck her agressively. Dogs are used to that, and it would make Fiona hotter. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:28, 3 January 2017 (CET)

She seems to think she's in charge. You should refuse. (As an aside, medium size dogs are usually euqal to or bigger than average human. Unless Michelle was a toy poodle, she wouldn't have had such a hard time of it)

No worries. I've only taken a passing interest in it myself. Judging from the pics/videos I've seen Jack's about the size of a healthy german shepherd or rotweiller. I don't recall the breed of their family dog, but i want to say border collie size which would be smaller than Jack. Standard poodle should accomodate him easily, but the scene works as is. If you do the gentle path you can show it completely different and chalk it up to the different approach. :) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:35, 3 January 2017 (CET)

Jemini

Yeah, in reference to the conversation with Notsooldpervert, I really appreciate you filling in the MILF and bestiality routes, and your writing is pretty darn good too. I am pretty sure a lot of the readers here will want to see some loli routes stemming from any path though, and this one is just ripe for that possibility. I can write those routes in order to keep those options alive. The only thing is, you seem to be setting the pace for Fiona's personality, so the question is to whether or not she wants you fucking Samantha. The direction I had it is that she imagines in her wild F-ed up mind that Samantha is already a little whore with no boundaries, and this is resulting in her acting in such a way that makes things look more like that, such as throwing all of her underwear in the wash leaving her none to wear to bed. Jemini (talk) 22:18, 2 January 2017 (CET)

In my case, stories that I am the soul contributor to start to grow stale after a little while. I tend to get a lot more excited about writing for stories in witch I am not the only contributor, the things the other writer adds keeps it fresh. That's the main reason I stopped writing in 2T4U, but with you writing in there now I very well might get back into it. (Well, it is mostly your writing skill why I am getting excited. If it was a writer who wrote so poorly that I felt every single thing they wrote had to be scrapped and re-written then that would be a different story. In your case, you write well and make every bit the same level of effort I do to honor the character as laid out by previous authors who handled them. That's good stuff.) Jemini (talk) 04:41, 3 January 2017 (CET)

Whichever of those two paths you take, do you think you could keep the progress short both physical movement and time passing wise? (not necessarily in terms of conversation or post length, those can be as long as you want.) I am just seeing an opportunity to bring Samantha back into this, but I am a little too busy for that at the moment. Don't want to go ahead and claim both routes for myself, it is still completely possible for you to write up to another hour or so of story time passing without messing up what I have in mind so long as he does not wind up leaving and making it a lot farther than just getting out the door. Jemini (talk) 23:17, 3 January 2017 (CET)

Actually, I was sort of writer's cheating in a deal where Maria had taken a bit of an interest in the Gunderson family and had enchanted both Jack and Aaron to produce infinite semen, the justification being that she took an interest in Jack's promiscuity but more so the fact that he was Brittany's girlfriend and Brittany is the key to ending the curse depending on exactly what part of the story she looses her virginity. She wanted him to take it before she reached that point so she enhanced his sexuality. Mostly though, that was just a writer's cheat with justifications to write more consecutive sex scenes with him. (It is not prominently noted anywhere, kind of hidden under some stuff, so I don't blame you for not noticing.) At any rate, it would make sense for him to expect that he would be sexually exhausted, but that would involve some slightly different wording. Jemini (talk) 12:06, 5 January 2017 (CET)

Oh, I like the way you think. Actually, Fiona seems to already fit the bill perfectly where as Brittany is someone who needs to develop in that direction a little. As for bringing Samantha into it, I will probably at least start a branch or two on the route you are active on before doing the same with a route you are not active on. Oh, BTW, there was one other little thing that I had in mind but was not communicated very well (mainly because I wanted it to be a surprise while I was lead on the story, but I have kind of fallen out of the energy to write so now it needs to be communicated better.) That thought was that Maria, beings she has taken such an interest in the Gundersons, had possessed the mother, Ellen, at the start of the story. Also, she is sending out her loyal (male) slave fairy Avaron to spy on him. He would most certainly report back where he actually is if Fiona has been noted as a F-ed up virgin. Part of the divine magic addition to the curse though is also that Maria, even in spirit, is unable to touch or intentionally approach a virgin, so as long as he is at Fiona's the only person who could possibly say anything to him is Avaron. (also, if Avaron were to contact him, he would need to dispel the guilding that is a natural spell for all faeries. The way to dispel that is to get fairy dust in his eye, witch in this world is actually dried fairy male or female sexual fluids. Still works just as well for that purpose if it is not dried though.) Jemini (talk) 23:32, 5 January 2017 (CET)

Elerneron

I have no problem at all with you writing for Jaedyn Farmer in Generations.

As far as realms are concerned, I began with feudal Europe because it was the most familiar for readers and writers alike. If writers are interested in other regions, I can add them. I intended to actually make maps of the various kingdoms to keep things consistent, but that turned out to be a lot more work than I can handle right now. I will probably get it done at some point in the future however.

As far as technology goes, there is a huge disparity of technology throughout the world. Older technology still flourishes, primarily due to the advantages of magically enhanced items (guns have a lot more trouble with magical armor than with normal armor). The most advanced technology that most people will encounter would be that of the Renaissance, but the gnomes are at the level of the Early Industrial Age. Occasional examples of extreme technology can exist, but this is always the result of a skilled use of cutting edge magitech (the enhancement of technological devices with magical properties). Unfortunately, while the dwarves are the most skilled at magitech, they aren't very advanced technologically. The gnomes are very skilled at technology, but have little interest in magitech. This means that advanced technological items like automatic guns and power armor are very rare indeed.

I'll see to adding harpies. I'm not certain where to put them, but my gut says to make them a Beastkin race; so I'm putting them there for now. I've actually been considering finding a partner or two to help me flesh out the lore a bit. If you're interested in helping out, we can discuss it further. --Elerneron (talk) 07:04, 26 March 2016 (CET)

I made a few modifications to the first part of the story to reflect the fact that you keep the memories of the chosen when you take them over. I also corrected the template by adding a year/month/day age and adding the Divine Spark ability that should always be present. --Elerneron (talk) 08:47, 26 March 2016 (CET)

You may want to check out Generations/Lore/Realms/Garia as I have expanded it greatly. This should give you a better idea of how things are laid out. The city of Blackcliff may be of particular interest to you. It hosts a significant number of cliff-side harpy nests. I'm just saying that if you want to get Jaedyn with a harpy he may wish to travel west ;) --Elerneron (talk) 03:55, 30 March 2016 (CEST)

You have no way of knowing this (because I haven't written it up yet), but normal pixie dust is either gold (vaginal secretions) or silver (semen). Since your fairy dust was enchanted however, green is fine. I also haven't written up anything on fey magic yet, but invisibility is definitely in the skillset of fey magic. It's fine if Xila is a sorceress, and used sorcery to turn her pixie dust into dust of invisibility . . . I was just letting you know that she could also use fey magic to turn Jaedyn invisible. It actually makes sense to make invisibility dust for regular use, freeing up her fey magic for other purposes. So everything's fine with what you've written. I just wanted to give you some more info that I hadn't written up yet. I did think I saw a discrepancy with the Time Passed (adding a extra day when a day hasn't passed; and without Jaedyn aging a day). Is this something you're doing intentionally due to Xila's intervention? I noticed you went back to the Generations/Sleep until morning‎ passage again. Unless some time bending magic is being used we can't really do that (passing the midnight threshold multiple times in a loop) since we are tracking the passage of time. If he's actually caught in a magical time loop, no problem. --Elerneron (talk) 00:30, 2 April 2016 (CEST)

Since you're getting back into writing on the site right now, I thought I'd see if you might be interested at all in adding to my new story Yes. I've taken it back to basics, with no templates or game elements, and I have a 16 yo as my starting character, and am trying to put in plenty of older teens and MILFs, so you could avoid the loli stuff. If you are interested, I'd welcome your additions to the story. --Elerneron (talk) 22:23, 6 January 2017 (CET)

As far as pictures are concerned, I don't think it's a big deal as long as the picture your using isn't meant to represent a character that is underage. Even if the actress is 18+, if the character is 16, it could raise some eyebrows. I'd have to make a case-by-case decision in that instance. --Elerneron (talk) 00:36, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Wassersaeufer

Hey man, just saw the page you added to "Making the Team". I really appreciate it, it is well written and fits the narrative well, so thumbs up from me. And it opens a new path, which is always exciting. --Wassersaeufer (talk) 15:41, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

That is more than alright with me, I am all for it :) I look forward to it, can't wait actually. And you and another author posting to the story may have inspired me to keep adding myself, I try to write something for the story myself again soon. So, thank you a lot, I really appreciate your time and work you are putting into it. Mostly because it is interesting and well written ;) --Wassersaeufer (talk) 21:08, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

About the newest page you added to Making the Team (love it by the way), I was thinking about adding some options for the next "piece of ethnic ass" as you put it so eloquently ;) I was thinking another black girl, a latina, an asian girl and a middle eastern girl. As options I mean, but I'm not sure yet. Any other ideas or perhaps something you think that needs to be there? --Wassersaeufer (talk) 20:19, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

I went ahead and added those options mentioned above to the newest page of "Making the Team", though I refrained from hinting to the girls' personalities as I think that should be left to whoever writes it. But about your question, I think teenage studs fucking a cute nerd is always a very nice stereotypes that never gets old ;) --Wassersaeufer (talk) 02:57, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Yay, asian piece of ass :) That being said, can I somehow motivate you to write the first option for that new page, watching what the guys are doing to Yi Jing?--Wassersaeufer (talk) 20:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)