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For those planing on adding to this. The idea is that Mary Franklin has confronted Freddy and Jason in the past about their bullying of Diya, this has always been in the presence of her friends and so the bullies didn't retaliate. this time however they caught her alone by the gym and decided to take their frustrations out on her with their fists. The rest of the squad caught them and as a group took matters into their own hands. You mess with one of them you mess with all of them kinda thing.
For those planing on adding to this. The idea is that Mary Franklin has confronted Freddy and Jason in the past about their bullying of Diya, this has always been in the presence of her friends and so the bullies didn't retaliate. this time however they caught her alone by the gym and decided to take their frustrations out on her with their fists. The rest of the squad caught them and as a group took matters into their own hands. You mess with one of them you mess with all of them kinda thing.
Yeah I got the idea when reading the profiles, along with an earlier mention of the MC wanting to impregnate the entire cheer squad together. [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 2209, 28 December 2017 (PST)


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Actually, upon checking out the profiles for the two boys, I can sorta see it happening like this. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 05:33, 28 December 2017 (CET)
Actually, upon checking out the profiles for the two boys, I can sorta see it happening like this. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 05:33, 28 December 2017 (CET)
Final point, I really don't know why you have it set for Dr. Hatell to be going in with the boys. Also, given the situation, anyone with a good head on their shoulders for how to handle a confrontational situation would remove the individuals that are the focus of the larger group's ire from the situation. That said, I think the boys should be sent to Jhon's office immediately along with one of the male teachers. I was about to make that edit, assuming the one you originally said to go in with them was a male teacher, but then when I re-read it and noticed it was Dr. Hatell I decided to hold off till I knew your reason for wanting her to go in with the boys.

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For those planing on adding to this. The idea is that Mary Franklin has confronted Freddy and Jason in the past about their bullying of Diya, this has always been in the presence of her friends and so the bullies didn't retaliate. this time however they caught her alone by the gym and decided to take their frustrations out on her with their fists. The rest of the squad caught them and as a group took matters into their own hands. You mess with one of them you mess with all of them kinda thing.

Yeah I got the idea when reading the profiles, along with an earlier mention of the MC wanting to impregnate the entire cheer squad together. Telgar (talk) 2209, 28 December 2017 (PST)

The one issue I have with this is the believability factor. I'm having a hard time buying that a couple boys, especially in such a traditionalist society, could physically beat up a girl younger than them. There is just too much social pressure against it, they would have to be ass-holes of simply unbelievable proportions for them to even consider such a thing. Jemini (talk) 04:57, 28 December 2017 (CET)

Actually, upon checking out the profiles for the two boys, I can sorta see it happening like this. Jemini (talk) 05:33, 28 December 2017 (CET)

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