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Very nice description of the brothel and it's girls. I hadn't put much thought on it, and I love the way you depict it. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 17:35, 28 December 2017 (CET) | Very nice description of the brothel and it's girls. I hadn't put much thought on it, and I love the way you depict it. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 17:35, 28 December 2017 (CET) | ||
This would really be another case of my spontaneous writing changing the plan ultimately. I had originally planned that one of the "Aunts" were going to completely dress him down. (Still might happen.) But since Diya hasn't told him anything I wound up on-the-spot getting into their heads and going for a more gentle approach since they understand he's not actively pursuing Diya right now. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 19:56, 28 December 2017 (CET) | |||
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Very nice description of the brothel and it's girls. I hadn't put much thought on it, and I love the way you depict it. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:35, 28 December 2017 (CET)
This would really be another case of my spontaneous writing changing the plan ultimately. I had originally planned that one of the "Aunts" were going to completely dress him down. (Still might happen.) But since Diya hasn't told him anything I wound up on-the-spot getting into their heads and going for a more gentle approach since they understand he's not actively pursuing Diya right now. Jemini (talk) 19:56, 28 December 2017 (CET)