Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Diya

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I'm very glad you decided to continue Diya's story. I tried to wrap up where you left her during the first week, but I wasn't too confident at being able to honour her portrayal. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:34, 28 December 2017 (CET)

Yeah, I did sorta find it off a bit, but I could see it. I thought you had her going just a tad too fast. My justification with her is her thought process is more along the lines of giving her body to him like her parents give theirs to guys for money, except in her case she's using her body to get her sister 100% off the hook for protecting her. She figures it's fine for her to do that because the MC is nice and she does sorta like him, not that she's completely head-over-heels for him after that one incident. So, it's pragmatic first, then it becomes genuinely romantic as the MC continues to be nice once she puts this into action. Jemini (talk) 19:52, 28 December 2017 (CET)

You're right, I did make her fall for him way too fast. I'm glad you fixed that a little. Perhaps we could remove her calling him by his first name also, since that is already a bit too familiar, especially under the town's traditions where the students must refer to teachers as "sir". What do you think? --Tod Naturlich (talk) 01:18, 29 December 2017 (CET)

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