Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Boys

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I leave the boys punishment to someone else, hoever in my mind currently, the harshest punishment would be to require both boys to report to Me. Goodman every time any of the girls receive a punishment. While they are in his care, he is allowed to do anything he wishes to them even if it breaks them mentally or physically, he just can't do anything that would result in permanent physical injury or death. Telgar (talk) 01:05, 27 February 2020 (PST)

I was actually thinking something incredibly similar, the difference being that it's something that's worked together with the girls. Basically, Mr. Gardner works out the paramiters of the girl's punishment, and then sets an addition to it where every single time one of the girls comes in to receive a vaginal ejaculation, both of the boys go to Mr. Goodman. And, the girls get to decide for themselves how many times they receive that punishment, and the decision does not need to be up front. In other words, they can decide on their own to come to you and have sex in order to make the boys have to endure another round of punishment for themselves. (There ought to be a minimum number of times that the girls are required to take a punishment, but no maximum. If they find that the punishment is enjoyable for themselves, they might just all start liking it over the course of their minimum number and all start seeking more.) Jemini (talk) 13:31, 28 February 2020 (CET)


Another thought I had for the girls goes along the lines of damaging property. Since the two boys damaged Mr. Gardner's property, Mary, and because of that damage they will be unavailable to carry out her wifely duties, sex, the boys will have to. However Mr. Gardner doesn't want the boys, and the girls are only in trouble in reaction do to the boys original actions, so the responsibility of replacing Mr. Gardner's property will be displaced to the girls. The girls will be legally considered his wives and property for the duration of their punishment, but only in regards to wifely duties. The duration of their punishment will be minimum until pregnancy with the maximum to be determined by Mr. Gardner and each girl. Any child produced by such union will be legally Mr. Gardner's and one of his wives. Once the punishment is completed the girls will return to an unmarried status and no wifely duties carried out by them will be counted against their purity.

this has precident from biblical story of Abraham, where his wife was baren so another woman was used to carry out her wifely duties and no sin was attributed to the surrogate. I was talking thinking of having Mr. Gardner call the Deacon, as the wounded party, explain what happened and get his Blessing. In this way the girls get their "punishment" but keep their purity as a reward for coming to the aid of Mary. Telgar (talk) 06:00, 28 February 2020 (PST)


This was a tad extreme for my tastes... But for the punishments, allowing my rage to do the thinking,...

  • Where was Mrs. Carmichael when the events unfolded? Call her down and have her bring Catrina. (It's dumb, but I'd originally thought of "roughly" fucking Catrina in front of Jason)
  • Just give the boys to Mr. Goodman
  • If Mary was pregnant, she could've miscarried. That's involuntary manslaughter, call María to get rid of Freddie.
  • You're aware of the situation of the LeFort household, either give Freddie to the brothel (to learn respect), or make him Willena's slave.

--MrPib (talk) 16:01, 28 February 2020 (CET)


I thought of the possibility of Mary being pregnant, however it's only been a week since the wedding and this town doesn't have the medical knowledge to determine pregnancy that early, thus girls have to start to show before they can be considered pregnant. Telgar (talk) 07:29, 28 February 2020 (PST)

Of course the girls and the boys will all get extreme punishments, meaning the girls will be impregnated. I like the idea of finding a way to preserve their "purity" but John's gonna have enough kids, so making them his might be problematic. Too bad there's not a way to make them the boys' responsibility without forcing the girls to marry them. Not sure about the "precedent" of Abraham and Sarah, since they were punished for their lack of faith in using the servant. Her son is considered the founding father of most of the Islamic countries, and the ones the Hebrews slaughtered to claim the Promised Land after escaping Egypt (giving rise to the continual warfare that carries on to this day, and their general hatred of Jews). Meh! Works for me, their being counted as his "wives" for the duration of the punishment, might be best. I also like the tie in where the girls have some say. Perhaps they're required to report to John until they are pregnant, and are his "wives" until Mary recovers physically, but whenever they "show remorse" for their actions toward the boys, they can request extra punishments. Even after they are confirmed pregnant and the official punishment ends, they can choose to report to him for another session for the remainder of the school year. When they do, the boys have to report to Coach Goodman for "drill instruction". We're not asking questions about what he's doing with them to "whip them into shape", as long as there's no permanent injury.

As for the boys and their disrespect toward women, I think an object lesson is in order. For the remainder of the year, they have to wear the sexy version of the female uniform (complete with makeup), no underwear allowed, and referred to/treated as female. If they are seen performing oral sex, or being engaged in other sexual situations with a male (whether for punishment or not) they will be considered female (so Coach can go to town and it will be seen as punishing girls, regardless of who knows about it). Of course, if they do something outside of punishment, that means another offense, and the only thing left is sexual servitude. They become the Coach's "wives". There's the object lesson for the rest of the school boys. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:56, 28 February 2020 (CET)

OHHH! If the boys are "turned into girls" for the duration of the punishment, then the children fathered on the cheerleaders can be theirs after all! The girls are John's "wives" so their purity stays intact, and the children are treated as having been birthed by the two "girls" being punished by the Coach! Mary doesn't count because 1) She's actually married to John, and 2) hers is a lesser punishment because she didn't actively fight (I still say show off her little body with the sexy no undies uniform until the girls' punishments are over). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:01, 28 February 2020 (CET)


For the girls, I'd suggest bringing in Mr. Williamson, Ms. LeFort, Ms. Curtis, and Mr. Eckles, the coach, Mrs. Varano and Dr. Hartnell.


Have them all watch the video and tell them that in your rage, you don't think that the girls deserve a forced pregnancy, and in some cases you'd end up getting them pregnant again (Alycia, Dawn and Suzanne). And then there's Perl who fled the crime scene, she's just as guilty for fleeing and not getting a member of faculty. Mrs. Carmichael might also face a punishment because she ignored the reports from Mary that the boys were hurting Diya.

Remember, all punishment decisions are up to Mr. Gardener

Have Mr. Gardener put it to a vote,

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I thought Perl left to get help and that's where Mrs. Carmichael came from. I need to read it again. I do like the idea of getting the other teachers involved due to your lack of objectivity, but possibly to just confirm that the punishment you come up with is within the guidelines and fair. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:09, 29 February 2020 (CET)

Neither Perl, or Mrs. Carmichael are present in the office and none of the girls have mentioned Perl yet either.

That's the reason he left the boy's fate up to Mrs. Varano, he doesn't want it to seem like a personal vendetta. The same could be seen with him just giving the girls a light punishment. Allowing a vote (by the authority figure, ie the parent of most parties involved) would avoid the issue.

Adding Perl and Mrs. Carmichael into the mix is so that the parties involved are more likely to choose the lesser.

An example he could give, is "I'm going to get them all pregnant, and they're all going to be completely naked" --MrPib (talk) 04:27, 29 February 2020 (CET)


Pearl left to get help, but help had arrived in the form of Mr. Goodman before she could find a teacher, I plan on revealing this in the girls section.

We can't include Pearl in any punishment as Tod already has plans for her, and has requested she be left out if this scenario. While Mr. Gradner is talking to the girls, Pearl and Mrs. Carmichael show up so that Pearl can give her side. Mrs. Carmichael also backs Pearls story of leaving to get help when she realized the boys and cheerleaders were still fighting. Telgar (talk) 20:21 28 February 2020 (PST)

Alright, simple fix to my idea,

  • If they vote to punish Perl too, she shows up with Mrs Carmichael. They get out of it.
  • If they vote to lighten the punishment, Perl and Mrs Carmichael still show up.

In the vote section, Perl would never actually be punished, both she and Mrs Carmichael are added to it in order to entice the other faculty to choose the lesser punishment.

If the reader still chooses the extreme punishment, we throw a "fuck you, I do what I want" by having Perl show up and Mr. Gardener "decides" not to punish her. --MrPib (talk) 05:37, 29 February 2020 (CET)