Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Squad

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For those planing on adding to this. The idea is that Mary Franklin has confronted Freddy and Jason in the past about their bullying of Diya, this has always been in the presence of her friends and so the bullies didn't retaliate. this time however they caught her alone by the gym and decided to take their frustrations out on her with their fists. The rest of the squad caught them and as a group took matters into their own hands. You mess with one of them you mess with all of them kinda thing.

Yeah I got the idea when reading the profiles, along with an earlier mention of the MC wanting to impregnate the entire cheer squad together. Telgar (talk) 2209, 28 December 2017 (PST)

The one issue I have with this is the believability factor. I'm having a hard time buying that a couple boys, especially in such a traditionalist society, could physically beat up a girl younger than them. There is just too much social pressure against it, they would have to be ass-holes of simply unbelievable proportions for them to even consider such a thing. Jemini (talk) 04:57, 28 December 2017 (CET)

Actually, upon checking out the profiles for the two boys, I can sorta see it happening like this. Jemini (talk) 05:33, 28 December 2017 (CET)

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