Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Diya/Accept/Alone

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Very nice description of the brothel and it's girls. I hadn't put much thought on it, and I love the way you depict it. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:35, 28 December 2017 (CET)

This would really be another case of my spontaneous writing changing the plan ultimately. I had originally planned that one of the "Aunts" were going to completely dress him down. (Still might happen.) But since Diya hasn't told him anything I wound up on-the-spot getting into their heads and going for a more gentle approach since they understand he's not actively pursuing Diya right now. Jemini (talk) 19:56, 28 December 2017 (CET)

And this would be another case of me not knowing enough English. What does "dress him down" mean? I'm assuming it has nothing to do with his clothes, but I'm not sure. It's a expression I don't remember reading before. In any event, the interaction between John and the aunts can be very interesting. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 01:21, 29 December 2017 (CET)

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