Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Letter

Would it be possible that we could keep this story to only Tod Naturlich since I personally find Tods writing style fits this story more than Telgars especially since Telgars stories aren't something I can actually enjoy due to the lack of children in their current stories (no offense Telgar)? --Joltlord (talk) 09:47, 15 December 2017 (CEST)

You DO realize I wrote about half this story to date, right? (Well, style imitation is kinda one of my talents or more to the point I tend not to write for stories unless I think I'm capable of imitating the original author's style.) As for Telgar, if the objection is the lack of young children, that's mostly been down to his editors he has had to work with. I would say give him a chance, or if there are other concerns then you could go ahead and voice them. Reader feedback can prove helpful to the artist so long as they know what your exact issue is. Jemini (talk) 10:51, 15 December 2017 (CET)

You are very good at imitation Jemini and as for my problem with Telgars stories it is in fact the lack of children and since Telgar joined this site I will give him a shot and wait for what he adds. --Joltlord (talk) 00:40, 16 December 2017 (CEST)

There are also plenty of mid-older teens that need punishments too. Even if he leaves the story blank, and just adds the options for the littles, someone else can join and write those parts. That said, I'm a bit eager to see some younger ones myself.

To Telgar, why would a 6 yo throw a rock through his window? Kids can't read the letter. Maybe she's mad that an older sister is preggo now? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:48, 15 December 2017 (CET)

Reply Notsooldpervert, Many reason, kids are just mean some times, she may have been pushed or convinced to do it by an older child. She might just not like the MC. I leave that to whomever decides to write it.

The third category should have one month as the high end. Less than a day, 1 day to one week, more than a week up to one month. In a misedemeanor crime once you go beyond 30 days it's usually about 6 months to a year. Anything over a year would be a felony. I'm not familiar witb anything that would be between 30 days and 6 months. Not to say it doesn't exist, it just seems to be very uncommon. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:32, 16 December 2017 (CET)

Reply Notsooldpervert, yeah I was not going for just crime punishments but a combo of crimes and at home discipline, I would hate for a child to become a pregnant whore simply because she did something that got her grounded for a month.