Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Cutting Class/Caught/Recording

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Forced impregnation for Thianna is already started. Don't forget to link it in here. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 23:38, 15 December 2017 (CET)

Actually, the start of that happens when she was caught in the storeroom and raped in the office, before the others were bring in for skipping class. In this path, she was never caught and brought in the office, so she's still a virgin waiting for her first punishment. She's also no longer drunk, so the scene has to be different. The follow-up scenes will be the same, since those can happen regardless of how she was first raped. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 00:28, 16 December 2017 (CET)

Nice! I didn't think about that. I'm changing my request then lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:29, 16 December 2017 (CET)

I'm trying to decide whether or not to make the order matter. It can create some interesting interactions if it does, but it would also serve to make the route a lot more complicated and this branch is already long and convoluted enough. Jemini (talk) 06:42, 11 January 2018 (CET)

If I were to write it, I would make it independent of the order, for the reason you point out, but in the end if you're gonna write it, feel free to do it in any way you want, no matter how complicated it becomes.

Just keep in mind that in the second visit of Tihana to the office the next day, she does not remember too good what exactly happened, since she blocked it out of shyness, and he tells her he indeed managed to get it inside her (to her disbelieve) two times previously. As long as by the end that is consistent, we won't have to change anything in Tihana follow-up punishment. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 07:04, 11 January 2018 (CET)

Actually, I just looked it over again and there is specific language about doing it because she was drunk and then again when she woke up after that. I can't see this being written in a way that fits that, but I certainly can have it so that it's believable she would block it out for embarassment. Those details though will likely need to be changed. Jemini (talk) 07:44, 12 January 2018 (CET)

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