Talk:Life Hacks/(Inf/Lox)-(Preg)/(Wells House/Danica-Everybody-Gathered)/Tell her to put that idea on hold for now

Ok, massive edit done. Removed Trish volunteering Siobhan for impregnation, that's not something she would ever do without having her mind tweaked a bit. However, I still left the door wide open on that one by inserting Ellie's more appropriate response of becoming excited over the idea of babies and Trish's response to that making it clear that she actually wouldn't mind Siobhan doing it with you without condoms so long as it's Siobhan's decision. I still think the rest need a few touch ups as well, but the need drastically decreased just by that correction on this scene.

Also, I split the story to add a route where he does decrease his ejaculations and one where he doesn't. I don't believe in taking choices away from the reader. That said, I actually do prefer the route where his ejaculations aren't so massive. I've been tossing up the option of decreasing them over and over through the story, kind of a "hint hint, won't somebody choose this one already!?" However, I like the idea of there being bad choices left on the path and those bad choices having the predictably bad results. That said, I'm bad at making really bad results, I'm not brutal enough with my characters, so I guess maybe I don't punish the readers enough for making those bad choices over and over again. Jemini (talk) 23:52, 25 October 2018 (CEST)

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The only problem I had with his ejaculations was the viscosity. That thick and sticky is... gross, more so than the human bukkake factory. I was thinking wait until they all get a super big dose, then scale it back like you're "running low" or "leveling out". --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:32, 26 October 2018 (CEST)