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how 2 “properly” link stuff w/ “[]”. ellooo. any humanz around da actually no how 2 explain stuff properly. God, Feast. (talk) 15:39, 19 December 2022 (CET)

Feedback on messages to a person's talk page are on the original poster's talk page. You should have gotten an alert when you first came to the site so you didn't need to continually check MY talk page. In other words, check your talk page. Upper right corner of the page. --Elerneron (talk) 21:40, 19 December 2022 (CET)

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2 Taboo 4 You

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Oh, and if/when the Jack shower scene in 2T4U is up I'm thinking about continuing "send Missy away, have Aaron stay". Well, the one where Jack remember's that Melony's old clothes are still in the attic anyway. I have a weakness for traps and sissies.

Also! Tell me if any off my additions seem off in regards to how the characters behave. That's my biggest worry when adding to someone else's story. --BakaG (talk) 07:09, 12 October 2015 (CEST)

Well, here it is: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee Hope it reads as well as it sounded in my head. --BakaG (talk) 13:22, 13 October 2015 (CEST)

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I just edited Aaron's profile to include his sexual knowledge. I am going to also be doing the same thing with every human character under the age of 12. That is another thing we are going to be needing to keep on the same page about, especially now that there is more than one person who is really editing this thing. --Jemini (talk)

I was also thinking, it might be a good idea to include an equivalent "sexual history" section for characters over age 12, especially with the highschool aged kids. I have already got my specific ideas for Brittany witch have already been talked about, but I was hoping to hear if you had anything specific in that area in mind when you created the character of Jack. I do not have any strong ideas about him myself in that area, so if you don't add something then I think that his sexual history bio may wind up being on hold until something is decided in-story by one of the writers (same for all the other 12+ characters not including Brittany.) --Jemini (talk)

Just gave Jack his sexual background. I had to re-write a few post entries that didn't fit it, but since his character has generally been a little on the jerkish side when me or others have written him and also more on the side of sexually competent and entitled, even with the curse that behavior suggests someone who has been around on the subject, so I made him a little bit of a man-whore. I am currently debating whether or not all this sleeping around should have resulted in him being a teen father though. Of course, if he is, then the maternal grand-parents are raising the child(ren). This would also explain more why Maria would be attracted to this family. Anyway, just sharing my thought process with the other large contributor to the story. I know you have sort of given me the lead, but since you started the story I think you ought to still be involved to at least the extent of being kept up to date about major things like decisions about character back-story. Jemini (talk) 04:38, 24 November 2015 (CET)

All Hell Breaks Loose

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Hey. I created a character sheet for a character in All Hell and I need help finding an image for her. --Dein0clies (talk) 16:40, December 20, 2022 (MDT)

As You Wish

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Chronos

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The Cum Fairy

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Dirty Talk

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Ecstasy Island

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Extreme Measures

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Fairly Oddparents: Timmy's Awakening

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I have got to say, I am admiring your Fairly Oddparents story. I don't find it much of a turn-on, but it is perfectly in the style and mood of the source material, and that shows some excellent writing. Just thought I would pay you the compliment. Jemini (talk) 04:24, 6 January 2016 (CET)

I'm not a huge fan of the show, but this looks like a fun tale. (Still want to see updates for TWAWKI and Generations) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:19, 6 January 2016 (CET)

Let her go mad, then free her after everyone knows she's preggers. You can tell everyone that she's crazy, molested Timmy, and got herself pregnant. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:01, 7 January 2016 (CET)

OMFG, that arena scene! It is exactly like watching an episode of Fairly Odd Parents! This stuff is great! Once again, I do not find this to be much of a turn-on, but that's Ok. Don't change a thing. About the only reason I don't write for this is because I do not feel qualified to keep it to this standard, and the only reason I do not suggest something is because I am enjoying it a lot more just seeing where you go with it. This is grade A fan-fiction here. Jemini (talk) 16:21, 9 January 2016 (CET)

Generations

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Fascinating concept. I look forward to seeing more options available. ~~Notsooldpervert

Hello Elerneron. I recently joined the site, almost for the sole reason of writing on Generations. I followed the initial writing on it, and read up on the lore which you had created. I was quickly smitten, and wanted desperately to contribute to the world, with all it's interesting races and societies. I thought out some ideas for Jaedyn Farmer, and have already begun to write a few pages on him. However, if you already had plans for him - feel free to remove what I have written thus far.

I also know you're not accepting non-canon contributions (which I understand completely! Wanting other writers to contribute to your world is just fine, but it can definitely get messy if everyone is allowed to change the foundations of the lore and environments.), but if you're up for it I would gladly like to discuss some potential expansions on the canon (but they are neither requests nor demands. You've already written a whole bunch, and I am more than thrilled to work with what has been provided!). But starting with the subject of Realms; so far you have written the ranks and titles for Western Rulership - which I assume is based off on medieval European feudal systems. Based on the title, I assume you've also had plans for Eastern or even Mid-Eastern Rulership? Sort of like a Sultanate/Caliphate or an oriental Empire? If you have, I would love to hear any such ideas! Second, is the human level of technology based off on any particular time period in the world (14th century, 12th century etc.)? Lastly, would you consider adding harpies to the creature races? Because harpies are hot. I love me some harpies.

And also, thank you for having left the story open to other writer's contributions! --ArthurKung (talk) 03:16, 26 March 2016 (CET)

Thank you for answering my questions, Elerneron. And I also want to thank you for expanding the realms sections and adding a map; it will be of great help when planning the stories to come! I look forward to writing and having Jaedyn explore the world and all its inhabitants. --ArthurKung (talk) 10:29, 30 March 2016 (EDT)

Hello Elerneron, I was working on a character sheet for Gru’Thrak and was wondering if you might be able to help out? -- Dein0clies (talk) 11:51, 21 April 2020 (EDT)

Hello Elerneron, when you say “If you would like another race defined...” do you mean adding a race that isn’t listed, or creating a page for one of the listed races? -- Dein0clies (talk) 18:47, 22 April 2020 (EDT)

Hello Elerneron, I know I’m been asking a lot of questions today, but is it okay for other contributors to create pages for races? Also is it the same for regions? -- Dein0clies (talk) 18:47, 22 April 2020 (EDT)

Thank you for answering my questions. I completely understand making modifications, as the story is your creation. As for if I was referring to the Garian Orclands, yes I was. If I may ask, is Garia based on any real world country/kingdom? -- Dein0clies (talk) 6:12, 23 April 2020 (EDT)

Hey Elerneron, could you possibly ad succubi/inccubi to the list of races? I figured that they’d fit along side the other demonkin. -- Dein0clies (talk) 7:44, 25 April 2020 (EDT)

Is it possible for an attribute to change overtime? Such as a character's Body improving through training, or their Mind decreasing by not studying for example. Also, if I may, what does Spirit entail? And how much nuance is their in the attributes? Like would a Sumo wrestler have a high or a low Body? -- Dein0clies (talk) 13:21, 26 April 2020 (EDT)

Out of curiosity, is it possible for the “spirit,” god, or whatever you are to transfer into the siblings of your host, in the event of their death? Perhaps if they had previously possessed the parent of the host? -- Dein0clies (talk) 23:16, 26 April 2020 (EDT)

In the vein of the previous question, what happens to your Divine Abilities once you posses a child you produce while in the host? Does your Divine Spark become more powerful, for example, or do you gain a new ability on top of it, or both? -- Dein0clies (talk) 13:21, 26 April 2020 (EDT)

Do the races all speak a single, racial language (common for humans, elvish for elves, etc.) or do they have different languages, depending on culture and location? -- Dein0clies (talk) 9:37, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

Hey Elerneron, I know I gave you an quite the undertaking already with the Demons race page and all, but could you possibly create a page for goblins once you’re done with that and find time? -- Dein0clies (talk) 12:13, 6 May 2020 (EDT)

How long after the God War does the story take place? Also is there a limit on how old the offspring you produce can be before you take control of them? And what happens to your previous host? I assume they die, but I want to ask for sure. -- Dein0clies (talk) 3:33, 8 May 2020 (EDT)

I’m sure you have a lot on your plate right now, but could you add outlining the page for Eudresian Empire to. The to-do list? -- Dein0clies (talk) 8:09, 18 May 2020 (EDT)

Here’s a hypothetical question for you: what do I do for character sheets of the offspring you produce? —-Dein0clies (talk) 8:33 22 May 2020 (EDT)

Could you work on a page for the troglodytes or imps when you have time available? —-Dein0clies (talk) 13:17 27 May 2020 (EDT)

I know we won’t see the Eudresian Empire anytime soon, but perhaps you could work on Noxsylvania? Or if you’re busy, you could give me an idea for what you had in mind and I could create a page for it? —-Dein0clies (talk) 16:21 2 June, 2020 (EDT)

How do I calculate cross racial pregnancy, such as between a human and an elf? —-Dein0clies (talk) 8:41 4 June, 2020 (EDT)

Thanks for responding, but I don’t think my question was very clear. I meant to ask how I calculate the length of a cross species pregnancy? -- Dein0clies (talk) 14:32 4 June, 2020 (EDT)

I know I’ve been asking for race pages a lot lately, but is it possible we could see a page a Stone Giants, Fomorians, or Ogres? Which ever one is more likely to produce a half giant. Alternatively, like Noxsylvania you could give me an idea of what you had in mind for them and I could start creating pages. I didn’t want to create something that goes against what you had in mind so I held off. -- Dein0clies (talk) 7:04 5 June, 2020 (EDT)

Hi Elernon, I’m sorry to bother you but I have two questions about the orcs: 1) do they have a swifter recovery than human males? 2) do women have any role in society other than sex and children? Also, I figured I would leave the government and population sections of Noxsylvania to you.-- Dein0clies (talk) 6:18 5 July, 2020 (EDT)

What is your policy on magic items in Generations? How do magic items work and how rare are they? What are the limitations of magic items? -- Dein0clies (talk) 6:52 27 December, 2020 (EDT)

Hey Elerneron! I saw on Dein0clies' talk page that you already have an idea in mind for the regions in the setting. I've had my sight set on the "Jungle Tribes"-area for a while, and would love to try and write a page for that region. With your blessing and final say, of course. Could I ask what you might have had in mind for that environment? Any particular politics or points of interest that you think would be vital? I've envisioned an extremely loose bundle of tribes and societies that other 'actual' empires just decided to name "The Jungle Tribes" for convenience's sake. A region that's wild and dangerous, and where some might go their whole lives without ever seeing the world outside of their village. If you'd prefer to write that region on your own, then I completely understand of course! --ArthurKung (talk) 10:42, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey. I know that you can transfer into you into your children as early as the womb, but hypothetically if that were to happen, how much influence would you have over their development? -- Dein0clies (talk) 17:58 30 March, 2021 (EDT)

Does Garia have any holidays of note? I imagine religious holidays aren't too significant anymore, but what about national holidays like an Independence Day or founding day or such?-- Dein0clies (talk) 22:48 June, 2022 (EDT)

Hey. If you do have some time, could you write up the pages for some of the giant races? I imagine you don't have much time, but I wanted to ask since I have a character who is half-giant.-- Dein0clies (talk) 5:30 12 October, 2022 (EDT)

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First of all, thanks for your help with the categories. I was reviewing the description for the alien races and tried to see how their home planets would be like, and I have to argue against the extreme surface gravities that some of the alien's planets have. The Varselavesh are fine, their gravity and pressure fits into a gas giant. I also have no issue with the Winterkin. But the Grelis, and specially the Markovik have way too much surface gravity and way too little atmosphere. In the biggest terrestrial planet we can conceive (10 times the mass of the earth, twice its radius), the surface gravity would only be 2.5 G, and such planet would already have a much bigger atmosphere than earth, even being closer to a star and subject to solar tides. I can't imagine how a planet could have a surface gravity of 5.51 G, and an atmosphere of only 0.216 atm. I don't think such planet can exist. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:59, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

Actually, surface gravity (which is what I think we're talking about) is directly proportional to the mass, but also inversely proportional to the square of the radius of the planet. Indeed the theoretical limit for terrestrial planets is about 10 times the mass of the earth, but that requires an increase in the radius, again the accepted ratio is that a planet 10 times as massive as the earth would have twice the radius, if you do the calculations for it's surface gravity, you'll find that it's only about 2.5 times greater than earth's surface gravity. I mean, even Jupiter, a gas giant only has a surface gravity 2.52 times greater than earth, since it's radius is so much bigger than earth's. In order for a celestial body to have a higher surface gravity, it's inner density would have to be much higher, which it's not possible under our current understanding of atomic forces.

Also, with respect to a gas giant losing it's atmosphere, you would end up with a pretty standard terrestrial planet in both size and mass, for example, it's hypothesised that Jupiter's solid core is only 5% of it's mass, which would put it well within the limit of terrestrial planets. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 19:46, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

I've been searching a lot about this, since I haven't had to make gravity calculations for bodies since college, and never for fantasy planets. So far the only place I've found planets with a surface gravity greater than 30 m/s² is in soft science fiction. All the science documents I've found limit the surface gravity of "planets" to around 28 m/s², regardless of them being terrestrial or gas giants. I also found a very interesting document about extraterrestrial zoology (hxxps://www.bibliotecapleyades.net/vida_alien/xenology/papers_xeno/et_zoology.htm), that states: "terrestrial rocky worlds with atmospheres suitable for life should have surface gravities between about 0.2 and 2.0 Earth-gees." The rest of the article is also very interesting and might help inspire other species, so I'm proposing you make an exception to external links so other prospective authors might also read it.--Tod Naturlich (talk) 04:40, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

All this stuff with that shape-shifting race that was being talked about made me think about the Kitsune from Japanese folk lore, so I decided to make it as a race and blend it in with the "Lizard People" conspiracy theory. Basically, it is a shape-shifting race that was already on earth and already in high positions of power before the Invasion ever even began. They landed on earth as colonists before the planet had any sentient life, and then blended in with human society due to their shape-shifting powers as human society developed. Basically, they are starting off in what all the other races would consider the "victory position." However, since they have no actual contact off planet and their technology is only as advanced as the cutting edge of human technology, the most they can do with this power position is defend it. Technically, they are the "defenders of earth" against the invasion, thus they are technically the "good guys" although no human would really consider them as such considering they are controlling earth politics from the shadows. Jemini (talk) 18:59, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

Are you sure jeminis Yokai race is conform to the rules ?--Foalpoots (talk) 23:49, 13 July 2017 (UTC)

Would you call cloning if done on earth a legitimate form of birth ? --Foalpoots (talk) 22:59, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

would it be against the rules if the Chromarans in the guise of human government officials subjected the female population to slavery and holocaust ? --Foalpoots (talk) 03:29, 8 August 2017 (UTC)

so slavery right away, but the genocide will have to wait. or does it count as the humans doing it if the chromarans responsible used to be humans ? --Foalpoots (talk) 03:10, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

So, profile is finaly finished, how do i actually start the storyline in my branch? i already have the first sex scene layed put but i don't know how to get my characters there. --Foalpoots (talk) 06:36, 14 August 2017 (CEST)

Would you be okay with contributors creating their own artwork for the races they create? I’m an artist with a specific idea in my head for what the Hraktogala look like so that’s why I ask. --Dein0clies (talk) 24:01, 20 May 2020 (CEST)

The Last Boy on Earth

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Hey, how would sex work in the story? How detailed do you want it? How old is the main character? Can he strip nude first? What's his privates like? Sorry... just so many questions.--BinaryHedgehog (talk) 02:53, 28 February 2016 (CET)

Okay then, I'll let you handle it for now, I'll get on board soon, though.--BinaryHedgehog (talk) 03:54, 28 February 2016 (CET)

Okay, maybe the mother's okay with it and the father isn't? Also, and this is important since it's something you establishd, but what happens to arousal after orgasm?--BinaryHedgehog (talk) 04:14, 28 February 2016 (CET)

Life Hacks

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Is there a real Alexander in the real world?--No-one (talk) 19:38, 2 January 2017 (CET

Got another picture for you to modify to your format specifications so it can be used in the character profiles. It's a gender-swap picture for Bastian. https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=File:Life_Hacks_Bethany.png Jemini (talk) 08:13, 27 March 2018 (CEST)

Actually I already modify it to work. I crop it to the required size and changed it to PNG before uploading. The only thing I didn't do was to remove the background, but it should work as I uploaded it. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:19, 27 March 2018 (CEST)

Oh, Ok. Yeah, just confirmed that, it works. Sorry to bother you Elerneron, looks like Tod's on top of this. Jemini (talk) 09:10, 27 March 2018 (CEST)

Yeah, It's been a busy week. I'm glad Tod could help out. I'll see about getting a replacement with the background removed; but I can't say that I will for sure, or when I will have the time to do so if I do. I have the week off, but I still haven't had a moment to myself. --Elerneron (talk) 13:43, 29 March 2018 (CEST)

Don't stress about it, you can consider this low priority. It's perfectly functional as is. In fact, I wasn't even thinking of asking you to remove the background, although now that it's offered I guess that it would make sense to have it fit in with the overall aesthetic of the rest of the story. Again though, low priority. Just do it whenever it's something that won't cause you undue stress. Jemini (talk) 19:03, 29 March 2018 (CEST)

Didn't really know how to go about contacting Elerneron, but I just wanted to say what an amazing piece of work you've made. I wish I could financially compensate you to work on this more, there just aren't enough large stories that have such great content. Anyway, keep up the great work! --Playb0y (talk) 23:48, 29 October 2018 (CEST)

Hey Elerneron, is there a way to have the Life Hacks UI collapsible, yet span the whole page? I originally wanted only the "active Perks" section to collapse, but then it evolved into the entire UI element being auto hidden for mobile users -- MrPib (talk) 22:07, 14 February 2019 (CET)

Hey Elerneron, i hope i'm not in the wrong place, i'm new here and i want to contribute to Life Hacks, specifically to Wsintai's requested option on this page: https://stories.allthefallen.moe/index.php?title=Life_Hacks/Hallomod(tod-pre)/Take_some_hacks_and_apply_them_to_the_Holidays_and_all_of_your_family I just have a few questions about the Guidelines and Reward System. Is there a definitive replacement for the old calculations of consent stats (friend/trust/love ...)? And how is the point reward for PIV sex calculated? I saw 20 in an example somewhere but i just don't understand the docs page on this. Also i wonder, is it considered sex if the the penetration goes no deeper than the hymen, without damaging it, but Xander ejaculates into the girl? And finally does that also give the "break her cherry" bonus then? DiaperDollies (talk) 23:55, 5 January 2021 (UTC)

Hey Elerneron, could you delete the Life Hacks/Herm Lexi Brittany interrupts page I created, since I didn’t read the title once I made the page and would prefer to just start over? -- Dein0clies (talk) 22:07, 19 April 2020 (CET)

The Mark of Fate

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Pass It Along

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Profiles in Power

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Romp

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Is there an assumed age of the protagonist or is it up to the reader? -- Dein0clies (talk) 6:51, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

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Just sorta wondering, is there an issue with per se putting an age on the options or did I over step my boundaries by doing that when I added the "Its not my family but a friends family" then defining the age of the younger minors? Cause the reason I did that was due to their being so close in age. I couldn't exactly per se just put toddler when there is one that's 2, 3, & 5 all female it just didn't make sense to me. Just let me know if I go to far or off in left field somewheres I shouldn't be. --Icy.horse (talk) 12:05, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

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Vault 69

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Hello, I see the format of this new story in some ways resembles the one on Disciplinary Action. I can't wait to see how you amaze us with the use of these Nexus points. After reading the part where Tay is taken to the Overseer's office, I remembered I had to deal with something similar when I started with Disciplinary Action. You have three pages almost exactly equal: Go, Run and Shut the Door. I'm pretty sure you did this on purpose because the other option was to put the different intros into a very small page with a single link to the parts that are equal, and such segue page can seem too short. The problem arrises in the future, because each of those pages has 3 links to continue the story, and right now there are no problems, but in the future someone might want to add a fourth option, and most people are not going to be careful enough to add the fourth option on all three pages, so it will come to you to check and add the fourth option on all of them. Right now that might seem like a very little concern, but from experience I can tell you it can become very unhandy quickly. I strongly urge you to use segue pages for differences and join them into a small nexus so that there is no duplicated options that will haunt you in the future. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 03:23, 23 September 2019 (UTC)

Villainy

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You're as bad as me playing an rpg. 500 hours of game time and a dozen different chatacters, and i still haven't completed the main plot of Skyrim. I just love making new characters like you seem to love starting new stories. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:47, 19 December 2017 (CET)

Is it ok to have multiple possible characters have the same origin? Such as from the 50's to the 70's Project: Prometheus? I’m kinda worried this is an obvious question but I feel I should ask anyway. --Dein0clies (talk) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

What would the paragraph for the black market page look like? Would it be a list or would it just b some random thug asking you what kind of power you want or something? --Dein0clies (talk) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

Are you allowing contributors for the story? I wanted to ask before I went and added my own character. --Dein0clies (talk) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

What is the limit of attributes/traits/whatever they’re called? Ex) Dex x-y. Also, can a character have multiple Motivations?--Dein0clies (talk) 10:58, 23 May 2020 (EDT)

Do superpowers occur naturally? They seemed to for the Patriot, has anyone else in the last couple hundred years just had superpowers? If so, how do they occur? --Dein0clies (talk) 8:08, 31 May 2020 (EDT)

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Same with this one. Love the concept, and anxious for more story. I'd love to see one (or both) of the stripper moms start going naked at home and letting her kids use her for a fuck toy lol ~~Notsooldpervert

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I have created profiles for the twins, the mother, the uncle and the two best friends. If you are still happy for me to go ahead with writing a different character(s) I think I'm good to go. I have uploaded the pictures of each of them (I have noted in one its flagged to be deleted); can you double check there's no issues there? Otherwise I'll get the profiles uploaded soon, with some story about the antics of the Morse twins :|P --Jackmaster (talk) 16:16, 23 January 2017 (CET)

Awesome. I can try and get the character sheets up tomorrow! Feel free to contribute, edit or write anything for the twins as well :)

Which picture did you think was a little small? I will see what the character sheets look like when I copy them over; I just copied the coding for the ones you made, and then edited the information on them. If anything doesn't work out as expected I'm sure I'll come calling soon! :P --Jackmaster (talk) 00:03, 24 January 2017 (CET) 'Edit:' Mariel's picture and Marcel's picture are both likeness drawings of characters from a game (as I mentioned in the description. I know Marciel is created by the game's illustrator, and I have included the link to their page, copyright etc. I can't find the other picture again to check for any copyright. Will they be ok, or will we need to find oath images for them?

Yeah I think stick to third person! As much as I love second person as a tool, trying to write in second person for two constantly interchanging characters, although fun, would me too much chaos! First part if just about to go up (or may already be up by the time you read this :P). I'm thinking the second part can introduce the idea of swapping the ring between them. Hopefully there will be readers who want to contribute to the choices; it makes it so much easier when writing interactive stories, as I have no idea which of the three to go for! --Jackmaster (talk) 16:35, 24 January 2017 (CET)

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Trag (talk) 05:18, 12 December 2022 (CET) I'm wondering how I can post a story. I just recently got the contributor status, but I don't know how to post a story here. I need some help on that front. I can probably figure out the rest from there.

Hmm... didn't actually see where the option to do that was located. I guess I should look a little more carefully next time I'm editing something. Jemini (talk) 12:14, 12 December 2022 (CET)

Ok, found it. Not exactly in the most intuitive place as to let me find it even not knowing I had the option, but it was in just good enough of a place that I found it quickly when I was actually looking for it. Jemini (talk) 12:17, 12 December 2022 (CET)

idk how to make links to continue story, and such. & how 2 DM sum1.. God, Feast. (talk) 12:02, 17 December 2022 (CET)

If you're looking for recommendations on how to nail the format rules home for the new users, I would personally recommend linking to the specific subsection within the format rules when someone misses something critical. Like, a missing category? Or a scuffed link? Just link directly to Categories or Links respectively, instead of only linking the full format rules again. Linking to Full Format might also be helpful since it gives the user a good full picture of what the code for the page is supposed to look like. Or maybe link to a simple, existing story page like this so the user can get a more practical example of how stuff works correctly. Might be worth creating an example page for that so people don't accidentally mess up other people's work! (On that note, the "full format" is linked to on the front page but not under the Format Rules page, so it could also be helpful to add it there.)

Some of this might seem redundant since it's literally just one or two extra clicks for the user, but it COULD just make a difference since someone who has zero experience with html or editing pages will likely feel different. Like, I still remember when I was starting and had zero knowledge on the subject, just wondering, "wait, how the frick", and I'd imagine that most people are in a similar boat since this stuff hasn't probably been taught in school's IT classes in years. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 13:15, 17 December 2022 (CET)