Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Interviews/Headmaster/Go

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Ok, so, I looked back at the original punishment. It looks like the exact wording of Matt Marlow's punishment was that he was to be subject to homosexual actions including "anal sex, oral sex, masturbation of self or others, or to be made to lick another man’s anus." So, essentially the whole list of homosexual acts. However, the more important point I found was that this punishment was only on the branch where John is impregnating Liliana. I had intended to shift this to become open-ended between the two punishments, but now it looks like the tracks have fully been jumped over to the other branch. Jemini (talk) 13:28, 9 January 2018 (CET)

Have either of the boys been punished at all yet in the first part of the story? I'm pretty sure the headmaster gets access to Matt regardless of who gets Liliana, just noone had followed through yet. The other boy hasn't been covered at all (to the point i don't even remember his name). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:38, 9 January 2018 (CET)

I just went over it when I was checking your claim of it "just being anal." The incest route does not provide Matt as a sexual option, on that route his only punishment is to watch Liliana being fucked by her father. (and the libido-suppressing drugs and having to raise the child Liliana has with her father.) Jemini (talk) 16:54, 9 January 2018 (CET)


While I'm a sucker for completeness (the main reason I was reluctant to work with this site format), and I appreciate the effort to make the story work regardless of the path the reader takes; there really isn't any obligation to ensure every possible previous choice is represented in future chapters. For instance, right now that I'm refactoring all of what happened to Tihana, it's clear that by the end of the first week, in at least 2 different paths, he's gonna end up with Tihana living in his house (either married to him or kicked out of her house). Having a wife would certainly change a lot of possible paths in the future, so I've accepted that most future paths will simply ignore her presence, since making it work into any possible path would be way too much work.

I mean, with Matt and Liliana things are simple, they ended up with only 2 possible punishments, each one with only 1 outcome. Tihana, on the other hand, ends up with four different possible punishments, only the Impregnation one being fleshed out right now, and that one leaves her with 4 different outcomes (normal, kicked out, married, or living with John). Even working to condense the outcomes of all punishments so the end result it's the same, we'll have at a minimum 5 outcomes for Tihana after the first week. I can't expect future chapters to take that much variance into account.

So I think we should consider this path to be the one where Liliana was sentences to be impregnated by John, and Matt became Leopold's sex toy. If another part of the story works better with the other punishment, then consider that one happened instead, and don't worry about taking all options into consideration into every path. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:56, 9 January 2018 (CET)