Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Smoking/Burst In/Thiana/Office/Diaper
I actually had this section half-finished ever since I first wrote the earlier lead-in. I had started on it on my own before the other path got voted on, then I decided to just jump over and work on that and then this wound up staying here half finished as I worked on the rest of the story. Great to finally have it done and now off my staging word doccument where I kept having to cut-and-paste around it with every new post I wrote. Jemini (talk) 09:55, 1 October 2017 (CEST)
I love the scene, but I have a little conflict with her knowing what a tampon is and even having use one. It's a common myth that using a tampon destroy a girl's virginity, so I'm doubtful the town's authorities and church would condone it's use, at least in unmarried girls. Since we've already established that they have enough power to control the entrance of simple contraceptive medicine, it's logical they would also ban tampons, and force girls to endure their periods using only sanitary towels. I understand you're using her memory of the tampon to mitigate the impact of something entering her, but I think it's worth considering the point. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 10:09, 1 October 2017 (CEST)
Hmm... well... trying to figure out how it would be modified if at all to conform with that stance. I can very well see where you're coming from on that one, but knowing her that information may mean that if it's changed at all it might be for her to like having his dick stuck up in her thinking it's really the thing she wasn't allowed to use because her mother didn't like it. I'll give it some thought. (EDIT: And actually, my reason for writing it this way was to have her volunteer the fact she was fertile, that was the method that made the most sense at the moment. The part about it making it less traumatic was just me playing with her drunkenness.)
(Also, I've sorta been pushing the references to other scenes to assume the most extreme route that doesn't result in a bad ending. Jemini (talk) 12:31, 1 October 2017 (CEST)
I had seen the other scene where you mention tampons, but since that was him remembering what she told him, I just assumed he was putting words in her mouth. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 18:12, 1 October 2017 (CEST)
Yeah, I just hadn't considered that angle at all, but it makes sense now that you mention it. At any rate, yeah, I have been functioning under the assumption she would have been taught to use tampons when she has her period up until now, guess I need to go back and change those ones as appropriate as well. Jemini (talk) 22:37, 1 October 2017 (CEST)
Dunno if you changed it already but she says she's not allowed to use them. She knows what they are and why she's NOT supposed to use them. Also, i assume the leave her and compare notes is the same regardless of the diaper. Might want to link it to the other page since you get a choice of which punishment she got when you go back to her. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:07, 2 October 2017 (CEST)