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Hey Elerneron, There's a wiki extension that allows you to get all pages in a category added to your watchlist when you have the category in your watch list. In addition, new pages added to said category will automatically be added as well. Its the [https://www.mediawiki.org/wiki/Extension:CategoryWatch#:~:text=Configuration%20%5B%20edit%5D%201%20In%20Preferences%20%E2%86%92%20Watchlist%2C,a%20category%20they%20are%20watching.%20...%20More%20items CategoryWatch extension]. It might be a good idea to consider adding it here to help with ease of use when editing or following a story.
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Yet again, you come up with another incredibly enticing subject to write for. I'll probably dip my hand in to this Life Hacks story at some later time once you have flush it out a little more first. Eager to see where that goes. The OP is always able to do that job better. (as you have probably seen, my own stories tend to go a lot slower toward sex scenes when I am the OP Vs. when I write for someone else's story.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 19:56, 25 September 2016 (CEST)


I have to agree, you have some great starts to stories, and it's a shame when they get abandoned. I like the premise of Life Hack, but I also really like TWAWKI and Generations. Unfortunately, about the best I can do for contributions is request story paths I'd like to read. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 16:40, 26 September 2016 (CEST)
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Yeah, I don't like giant freak outs either. Some movies like to over-state reactions for the sake of theatrics, but that is not in any way realistic. You would think writing is a place where they can try for a more realistic reaction, but some poorer writers think less about what is realistic and more about imitating what they see in movies, and it winds up just sounding even more dorky in writing where it just manages to pass in movies. Personally, I try to imitate life rather than art. (Oh, and same to you about deleting from the conversation. It would help me though to keep the most recent paragraph, it just helps my mind to re-focus. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:51, 9 October 2016 (CEST)
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Made one more tweak to the attributes. Added "fertility" as a physical attribute. What can be more interesting than the fact that maxing it out has now given him super sperm that can probably impregnate every girl in a swimming pool if he ejaculates into it (probably not, but point is he has verile sperm,) what can be more interesting about this is the prospect of altering a girl's fertility with the mod. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 16:38, 9 October 2016 (CEST)
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For Fear/Trust, I think that is a valuable stat, the only detriment I see is it crowding the windows. I just took a look, it does indeed look a little crowded now. 3 is a perfect number, 4 starts to look crowded, but I think I agree that the benefit outweighs the detriment. As for things like how I put eyesight and fertility in attributes, I figure attributes determines the base potential for those features where traits add additional features, kind of like how I mentioned in there that Xander's eyesight attribute would increase the neural proliferation of rods and cones in his retina witch would allow him to make out sharper detail, but it did nothing to fix his nearsightedness because that is a structural problem with another part of his eye that is governed by traits.


I also figure, with the character write-up, that his mother has a VERY high fertility stat (around 150 or higher) herself, and probably still does right now, but similar to Xander's nearsightedness the fact that she has her tubes tied prevents this from being realized. For male fertility, it would probably raise the motility (swimming speed) and viability (life-span) of sperm, as well as spermatoblast proliferation of the testicals. It would not, however, increase the size of the testicals. (doing so by adjusting traits would have a multiplying factor on sperm production together with the high fertility trait.) I figure 100 is average, and there is probably a multiplying factor as it gets further out toward the edges. The average is 3 day life span for sperm, and 3 days to reach the falopian tubes. Xander's sperm at 200 probably have 1 day to reaching the falopian tubes and somewhere between a 6-12 day life span, meaning his semen would only need to be in contact with the moist outside of a girl's slit in order to get her pregnant assuming she is ovulating. For females, it would determine implantation viability and rate of miscarriages. In other words, how hospitable the uterus is to a fertilized egg cell (or, at the really low ends, if she ovulates at all.) Obviously, Inga's womb is extremely hospitable beings it had a successful implatation despite the use of birth control (witch I assume she did use properly beings she was the one who took issue with getting pregnant.) So, the effect of women having a higher fertility stat is that birth control doesn't work for them. Other things like percocious puberty and twinning rates (that is probably a good term for it) would be determined by traits. (So, Xander could set Kizzie's fertility to max but she would not get pregnant if the precocious puberty trait is not also turned on, assuming that is even viable.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 22:13, 9 October 2016 (CEST)
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So, the options after Billy's dad showed up seemed to just be calling out to me. I decided to write the first part to the post for diffusing the situation. It is noted as incomplete WIP. You can finish it if you want, or I might come back to it later. I also modified the condition % scores during some of the tinkering around phases of the story. I notice you have been keeping those up once the technical part got done, but it makes sense that it should jump around a little while he is checking out the controls as well. (FYI: The only reason his stress did not hit 100% during the attributes adjustment phase is because he increased his mental stability to max, witch would probably prevent his stress from ever getting above 70% unless under extreme circumstances or if his arousal hits max and he can't find relief. Basically, maxed mental stability will allow him to handle this crazy situation like a normal person handles their everyday life.) Sorry if these reports on everything I'm doing seem excessive. Like I said before, I consider this your project primarily, so I feel the need to keep you appraised of what I am doing. I would like to keep that dynamic clear so that you might overrule anything if you have a strong preference against something I did. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 00:43, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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I'm having and issue where content I copy and paste from Scrivener has all the line breaks and tabs removed. If I delete the ones from Scrivener within the media wiki editor and retype the line endings, then 4 spaces for tabs, everything looks correct but then my content is parsed with a <nowiki><Pre></nowiki> tag, which places everything in a strange box and I'm not sure how to fix it. Other user's stories don't seem to be parsed with that tag. I did read the rules carefully but maybe I'm making a mistake in the formatting?


Ok, interesting. You have probably noticed by now, but I have started up a page to catalog some of the possible mods in the "writers" section so that players and writers alike can get a better idea of what the mod might look like. It is specifically noted that the real thing Xander is interacting with likely has more options than are listed there, but it should go quite a way toward getting into the proper feel of things, and also keeping writers on the same page. Since I know a little bit about kinesiology, exercise science, neural anatomy and psychology (psychology more due to hobby rather than the other three witch were part of my career field in healthcare,) I am probably the person likely to make the most flushed out attributes section. Some help in traits and skills would be much appreciated though.
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Also, it might be a case of overburdening ourselves with unnecessary work, (because I think we could probably get by just fine without what I am about to suggest,) but making up some kind of 5 horizontal cells by X vertical cells table to note what different values might look like is a thought I entertained at one point. I don't know enough about HTML to make such a table though. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 14:10, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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Oh, another thing. I have been holing it in for a while, figuring you wold reveal it eventually, but the curiosity is just eating me alive. What exactly were you planning to do with the "perks and rewards" mechanic? [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 14:12, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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Well then, I imagine some of the perks we might go for could be things like no refractory period, perminately maxed sperm count, and possibly something to prevent his neural activity from consuming glucose so that he can speed up his thinking speed at any time. I think it might be a good idea to work up a list of points awarded for each action, and point costs for various perks. Not certain exactly where we would put this though. It would make perfect sense to put the perks and rewards he can perchase under the life control write-up, but I am not sure where would be appropriate to put Xander's goals. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 15:00, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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Oh, and if/when the Jack shower scene in 2T4U is up I'm thinking about continuing "send Missy away, have Aaron stay". Well, the one where Jack remember's that Melony's old clothes are still in the attic anyway. I have a weakness for traps and sissies.
 
Also! Tell me if any off my additions seem off in regards to how the characters behave. That's my biggest worry when adding to someone else's story. '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] ([[User talk:BakaG|talk]]) 07:09, 12 October 2015 (CEST)'''
 
Well, here it is: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee Hope it reads as well as it sounded in my head. '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] ([[User talk:BakaG|talk]]) 13:22, 13 October 2015 (CEST)'''
 
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I just edited Aaron's profile to include his sexual knowledge. I am going to also be doing the same thing with every human character under the age of 12. That is another thing we are going to be needing to keep on the same page about, especially now that there is more than one person who is really editing this thing. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]])
 
I was also thinking, it might be a good idea to include an equivalent "sexual history" section for characters over age 12, especially with the highschool aged kids. I have already got my specific ideas for Brittany witch have already been talked about, but I was hoping to hear if you had anything specific in that area in mind when you created the character of Jack. I do not have any strong ideas about him myself in that area, so if you don't add something then I think that his sexual history bio may wind up being on hold until something is decided in-story by one of the writers (same for all the other 12+ characters not including Brittany.) --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]])
 
Just gave Jack his sexual background. I had to re-write a few post entries that didn't fit it, but since his character has generally been a little on the jerkish side when me or others have written him and also more on the side of sexually competent and entitled, even with the curse that behavior suggests someone who has been around on the subject, so I made him a little bit of a man-whore. I am currently debating whether or not all this sleeping around should have resulted in him being a teen father though. Of course, if he is, then the maternal grand-parents are raising the child(ren). This would also explain more why Maria would be attracted to this family. Anyway, just sharing my thought process with the other large contributor to the story. I know you have sort of given me the lead, but since you started the story I think you ought to still be involved to at least the extent of being kept up to date about major things like decisions about character back-story. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:38, 24 November 2015 (CET)
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Lol, you beat me to it. I thought about it a bit and realized I forgot to include "Confidence" in the social attributes, and then what do I see when I go back in to include it but the fact that it was already there thanks to you! That was rather interesting. Just had to comment. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 16:04, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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I do not know how, but I SOMEHOW managed to come up with 6 attributes for appearance, none of witch covered something that could be better suited for "traits." That was actually something of a challenge. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 16:39, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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Oh I'm watching closely. Some of the paths obviously interest me more than others do. I'll be making a request soon in any case. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 21:38, 10 October 2016 (CEST)
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I did the route where he gets Billy's dad to attack him. I have actually been in a fight once where a knife was pulled, and real fights really do end up exactly this fast, a single move and it's over. Also, the best way for a real fight to end is also exactly like this, with the less belligerent party holding the more belligerent one in a submission hold. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:39, 11 October 2016 (CEST)
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Ok, just put in part 2 of the physical confrontation route. I figured I would leave the stats part since you said something about modifying Ronni's relationship stats. Also, I was thinking that once Xander lets go and has sat for about a minute his stress will shoot straight up and focus will plummet. As I said, I was actually in a situation almost identical to this once, except that the guy was a drunk instead of a police officer, and that is when I discovered I was an after-the-fact panicker. As in, I was firm, strong, and steady for the entire time I had the guy pinned. As soon as the officer relieved me though, I was shaking like a leaf and it took a lot of effort just to talk to relay my side of things. I think since Xander's mental stability has been raised he should do better than I did, but then this is the first time he has ever encountered a situation like this, so it should show some results. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 08:38, 11 October 2016 (CEST)
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What was in my mind with the infra-vision and ultra-vision was actually that I had heard bees can see into the ultra-violet spectrum, and essentially use this for the exact reason stated. Their ability to see ultra-violet allows them to visually perceive the electro-magnetic field around flowers, witch apparently budding flowers have a different shaped field from that of other plant life. It seemed to make sense to me that abilities available via the mod would be abilities available to any living real-world creature. Snakes are also supposed to be able to sense infra-red radiation with the pits in their nose (they smell with their tongue and sense heat with the pits that would be nostrils on other creatures,) but that is not a component of vision, so I am not really sure that counts. As for how it looks, I think your version is probably closer to reality, but that is really hard to visualize for a reader. That's why I just said they were a red radiating glow and violet radiating glow. It has more to do with finding the medium between realism and relatability. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 11:28, 11 October 2016 (CEST)
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So long as it's just sensory abilities, I wouldn't see why it would be too much. The main inspiration really for infra-red and ultra-violet vision was really to be an equivalent to having a blood-hound like sense of smell, witch I admit is something I assumed would be available without consulting you. (thus why I noted smell as being 30 for males and 40 for females out of a possible 200, species of dog having the numbers that hit 150 and above.) I figured there should be something for other senses that was equally impressive just to put that level of sense of smell into perspective, and having a bee's ability to perceive ultraviolet just seemed to make sense. I don't know of any animal that actually has infra-red vision, but it kind of made sense to just widen it on both ends. Oh, and that kind of X-ray vision would be absolutely hilarious. It would make sense too, since real X-ray machines are actually picking up a negative image on film created by X-ray radiation. Even if a person could release X-rays from their eyes, it wouldn't allow them to see through objects without a sensor on the other side of the object they were trying to see through. On the other hand, your eyes actually being the receptor would allow you to see a skeleton-shaped shadow in the light cast by an x-ray source if you had the kind of x-ray vision we are talking about here. Yeah, I definitely like this. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:14, 11 October 2016 (CEST)
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Oh, and yes, it actually is something that has been recognized that women have a better sense of smell than men, and men (who's hearing has not been damaged by man-made machines) have a better sense of hearing than women. Also, in terms of eyesight, men's eyes are more sensitive to movement and women's eyes are more sensitive to fine gradients in color, perceiving more colors within the visible light spectrum. However, in terms of eye-sight, the scent and hearing thing is something that is unchangeable. However, for eye-sight, it is just a starting point. The gender dimorphism in eye-sight can be erased with exposure to the opposite gender's stimuli. Male painters get a better skill for color discernment, and women who try out something like hunting get more visually sensitive to motion. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:21, 11 October 2016 (CEST)
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No, the 200 thing actually makes a lot of sense. Realistically though, if we let go just a little and think in game terms instead of real-life equivalent terms, it actually works out pretty well. In the case of smell, for instance, if you think of it not in terms of how many parts per million of an odiferous agent can be recognized by the nose, and instead think of it in terms of how far away from the object you need to be to smell it and how long after it has passed, that actually already functions on a naturally occurring geometric scale. And actually, things like this are often the case in nature. Any time we have tried to measure natural abilities in terms of effect and produced a lenear scale, we have discovered when we looked at, for instance, the number of muscle fibers that contract in order to move against a certain amount of weight, it takes an exponential increase in the number of muscle fibers triggering in order to lift an incremental increase in weight. I imagine the same thing to be going on in the brain for IQ, although we have yet to devise a proper way to measure the activity inside the brain to produce higher IQ scores. The same also goes in electronics BTW. This is the reason we use dual-core 64 bit processors instead of single core 128 bit processors. A 128 bit processor takes something like 10 times the amount of electricity and generates 10 times the amount of heat compared to a 64 bit processor. The same also goes for high-performance air-craft. Incremental increases in performance require exponential increases in money to fund its development. If we think of these numbers as measuring the incremental increase in performance rather than the exponential increase in resource dedication, it becomes a lot more sensible to deal with. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 13:32, 11 October 2016 (CEST)
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So far as Xander's conversation with the officer taking his statement go, I am planning to have no drastically different outcomes with the officer, but every answer affects his relationship stats with Roni. Plays for sypmathy lower submissiveness but raise familial love, playing it cool raises submissiveness as well as familial and romantic love. The 3rd answer, witch there will always be at least a 3rd answer that doesn't fit into either of those, will have effects on a case by case basis. Just telling you where my head is on that subject, much like how you filled me in on your route with Brittany. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 14:31, 12 October 2016 (CEST)
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We must be psychically connected or something, I started working on that myself. I was in the middle of making a long post for Xander's goals and opened a new page to look up some names when I saw your message. Probably a good idea if I were to check what you have before I hit the "save" button. EDIT: Ok, it looks like my goals for Xander should still be all right, although the "game breaking" notice definitely applies due to how much more incrimental his potential for rewards is (receiving rewards for smaller acts and more acts than are given for general players, more bonuses as well.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:59, 13 October 2016 (CEST)
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Ok, I completed the outline and a few examples for each of Xander's sexual goals. The first section provides bonuses that count for Xander's first time for each act that fits certain conditions, and then categorizes sex acts into 6 categories. Benign, dismisable, mild, moderate, hard-core, and violent/extreme. Would like to know what you think. I think having the higher level acts be as broken down as they are is appropriate, but my concern is that the smaller items might be a little too game breaking if he can get points that easily. Then again, it might be a good thing to break the game in this way in order to provide an opportunity to give Xander access to rewards earlier in the story. Might loose their attention span otherwise, a story is different from a game after all. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 08:38, 13 October 2016 (CEST)
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Just worked on the rewards a little. I made some of the rewards cost points to have a smaller effect than what the life-mod does for free infinitely in regards to modding your attributes and relationship stats, I figured it would make sense to have some rewards that were made redundant and useless by the mod. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 13:05, 13 October 2016 (CEST)
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Oh no, it makes perfect sense to add points from both routes for him. Part of this IS to get him points faster after all. I was just editing while sleepy so I forgot about the player route. But... uhhh.... where does this X10 thing come from? I guess I will have to read over the player route more closely. Edit: Ok, I found the X10 thing, and with that in mind I changed Xander's 1st time sexual encounter thing to X5 instead of X2 in order to bring it more in line. Now, however, I am wondering about the "be cool" section. That one has the limiter of only counting the points so many times (unless otherwise noted,) so I don't think a multiplier is appropriate but now I am wondering about increasing the rewards. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:13, 14 October 2016 (CEST)
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Ok, I just looked through a google searched image gallery of anime female police officers, and I think this is the one that most closely matches my mental image of officer Thompsett in terms of attitude. I actually wanted her to be darker skinned with short hair, but all of those images were scantily clad dominatrix style. This is about the only modestly dressed professional one that also had the attitude I wanted, so I am going with it despite the hair length and skin tone being wrong. http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_kC5MT2r5U8s/SVYflDOflAI/AAAAAAAAH_o/0BX2ZlIzpoQ/s320/you're+under+arrest_+Miyuki+Kobayakawa.jpg
I have got to say, I am admiring your Fairly Oddparents story. I don't find it much of a turn-on, but it is perfectly in the style and mood of the source material, and that shows some excellent writing. Just thought I would pay you the compliment. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 04:24, 6 January 2016 (CET)


As for the name, I would say "Maria "Mary" Thompsett, police officer." If he does get closer to her, she is probably going to start having him just call her "Mary." [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 13:35, 14 October 2016 (CEST)
I'm not a huge fan of the show, but this looks like a fun tale. (Still want to see updates for TWAWKI and Generations) --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 06:19, 6 January 2016 (CET)


Yeah, that does sound pretty good. We'll go with that then. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 14:51, 14 October 2016 (CEST)
Let her go mad, then free her after everyone knows she's preggers. You can tell everyone that she's crazy, molested Timmy, and got herself pregnant. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 00:01, 7 January 2016 (CET)


So far as the point where you stopped in the bluffing to say that he is a player line, I have two possible routes you could go. The general rule while trying to deceive like this is to tell the lie that 1. gives the least information so that you can't be checked on it, 2. is generally the most believable. In the case of an MMO of any kind, that option is almost ready-made for this situation, that being "trolling." He just likes messing around. The only other believable lie, that he is some kind of obsessive, gets overturned by the piece of information that she already gave that there is an invisible mode he could have done this in. That other beleivable lie leaves a few more bread-crumbs than trolling, but avoids a few other problems in that he will have a more ready-made reason to tell her to leave him alone. He still has the ability to explain away the questions that could be raised by the "obsessive" route. Trolling still gives the ultimate advantage tough in that if he goes that route then it would not make it at all out of line for him to answer "I don't know" to questions that, from her view, he ought to know the answer to. (feel free to re-phrase any or all of this in Xander's words in order to explain his thought-process. I still want to leave this mostly to you since, while I feel somewhat competent in writing for Xander, I do not feel so secure in writing for this player girl since she has knowledge of your world that I don't.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 13:25, 15 October 2016 (CEST)
OMFG, that arena scene! It is exactly like watching an episode of Fairly Odd Parents! This stuff is great! Once again, I do not find this to be much of a turn-on, but that's Ok. Don't change a thing. About the only reason I don't write for this is because I do not feel qualified to keep it to this standard, and the only reason I do not suggest something is because I am enjoying it a lot more just seeing where you go with it. This is grade A fan-fiction here. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 16:21, 9 January 2016 (CET)
EDIT: By the way, thank you for the Maria card. It looks good. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 13:26, 15 October 2016 (CEST)


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Fascinating concept. I look forward to seeing more options available. ~~[[Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]]
Hello Elerneron. I recently joined the site, almost for the sole reason of writing on Generations. I followed the initial writing on it, and read up on the lore which you had created. I was quickly smitten, and wanted desperately to contribute to the world, with all it's interesting races and societies. I thought out some ideas for Jaedyn Farmer, and have already begun to write a few pages on him. However, if you already had plans for him - feel free to remove what I have written thus far.
I also know you're not accepting non-canon contributions (which I understand completely! Wanting other writers to contribute to your world is just fine, but it can definitely get messy if everyone is allowed to change the foundations of the lore and environments.), but if you're up for it I would gladly like to discuss some potential expansions on the canon (but they are neither requests nor demands. You've already written a whole bunch, and I am more than thrilled to work with what has been provided!).
But starting with the subject of Realms; so far you have written the ranks and titles for Western Rulership - which I assume is based off on medieval European feudal systems. Based on the title, I assume you've also had plans for Eastern or even Mid-Eastern Rulership? Sort of like a Sultanate/Caliphate or an oriental Empire? If you have, I would love to hear any such ideas!
Second, is the human level of technology based off on any particular time period in the world (14th century, 12th century etc.)?
Lastly, would you consider adding harpies to the creature races? Because harpies are hot. I love me some harpies.
And also, thank you for having left the story open to other writer's contributions! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] ([[User talk:ArthurKung|talk]]) 03:16, 26 March 2016 (CET)
Thank you for answering my questions, Elerneron. And I also want to thank you for expanding the realms sections and adding a map; it will be of great help when planning the stories to come! I look forward to writing and having Jaedyn explore the world and all its inhabitants. --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] ([[User talk:ArthurKung|talk]]) 10:29, 30 March 2016 (EDT)
Hello Elerneron, I was working on a character sheet for [[Genertions/Character Sheet/Gru’Thrak|Gru’Thrak]] and was wondering if you might be able to help out? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 11:51, 21 April 2020 (EDT)
Hello Elerneron, when you say “If you would like another race defined...” do you mean adding a [[Generations/Lore/Races|race]] that isn’t listed, or creating a page for one of the listed races? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 18:47, 22 April 2020 (EDT)
Hello Elerneron, I know I’m been asking a lot of questions today, but is it okay for other contributors to create pages for races? Also is it the same for regions? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 18:47, 22 April 2020 (EDT)
Thank you for answering my questions. I completely understand making modifications, as the story is your creation. As for if I was referring to the Garian Orclands, yes I was. If I may ask, is Garia based on any real world country/kingdom? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 6:12, 23 April 2020 (EDT)
Hey Elerneron, could you possibly ad succubi/inccubi to the list of races? I figured that they’d fit along side the other demonkin.  -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 7:44, 25 April 2020 (EDT)
Is it possible for an attribute to change overtime? Such as a character's Body improving through training, or their Mind decreasing by not studying for example. Also, if I may, what does Spirit entail? And how much nuance is their in the attributes? Like would a Sumo wrestler have a high or a low Body?  -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 13:21, 26 April 2020 (EDT)
Out of curiosity, is it possible for the “spirit,” god, or whatever you are to transfer into the siblings of your host, in the event of their death? Perhaps if they had previously possessed the parent of the host?  -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 23:16, 26 April 2020 (EDT)
In the vein of the previous question, what happens to your Divine Abilities once you posses a child you produce while in the host? Does your Divine Spark become more powerful, for example, or do you gain a new ability on top of it, or both?  -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 13:21, 26 April 2020 (EDT)
Do the races all speak a single, racial language (common for humans, elvish for elves, etc.) or do they have different languages, depending on culture and location? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 9:37, 4 May 2020 (EDT)
Hey Elerneron, I know I gave you an quite the undertaking already with the Demons race page and all, but could you possibly create a page for goblins once you’re done with that and find time? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 12:13, 6 May 2020 (EDT)
How long after the God War does the story take place? Also is there a limit on how old the offspring you produce can be before you take control of them? And what happens to your previous host? I assume they die, but I want to ask for sure. -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 3:33, 8 May 2020 (EDT)
I’m sure you have a lot on your plate right now, but could you add outlining the page for [[Generations/Lore/Realms/Eudresian Empire|Eudresian Empire]] to. The to-do list? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 8:09, 18 May 2020 (EDT)
Here’s a hypothetical question for you: what do I do for character sheets of the offspring you produce? —-[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 8:33 22 May 2020 (EDT)
Could you work on a page for the troglodytes or imps when you have time available? —-[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 13:17 27 May 2020 (EDT)
I know we won’t see the Eudresian Empire anytime soon, but perhaps you could work on Noxsylvania? Or if you’re busy, you could give me an idea for what you had in mind and I could create a page for it? —-[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 16:21 2 June, 2020 (EDT)
How do I calculate cross racial pregnancy, such as between a human and an elf? —-[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 8:41 4 June, 2020 (EDT)
Thanks for responding, but I don’t think my question was very clear. I meant to ask how I calculate the length of a cross species pregnancy? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 14:32 4 June, 2020 (EDT)
I know I’ve been asking for race pages a lot lately, but is it possible we could see a page a [[Generations/Lore/Races/Stone Giants|Stone Giants]], [[Generations/Lore/Races/Fomorians|Fomorians]], or [[Generations/Lore/Races/Ogres|Ogres]]? Which ever one is more likely to produce a half giant. Alternatively, like Noxsylvania you could give me an idea of what you had in mind for them and I could start creating pages. I didn’t want to create something that goes against what you had in mind so I held off. -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 7:04 5 June, 2020 (EDT)
Hi Elernon, I’m sorry to bother you but I have two questions about the orcs:
1) do they have a swifter recovery than human males?
2) do women have any role in society other than sex and children?
Also, I figured I would leave the government and population sections of Noxsylvania to you.-- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 6:18 5 July, 2020 (EDT)
What is your policy on magic items in Generations? How do magic items work and how rare are they? What are the limitations of magic items? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 6:52 27 December, 2020 (EDT)
Hey Elerneron! I saw on [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies']] talk page that you already have an idea in mind for the regions in the setting. I've had my sight set on the "Jungle Tribes"-area for a while, and would love to try and write a page for that region. With your blessing and final say, of course. Could I ask what you might have had in mind for that environment? Any particular politics or points of interest that you think would be vital? I've envisioned an extremely loose bundle of tribes and societies that other 'actual' empires just decided to name "The Jungle Tribes" for convenience's sake. A region that's wild and dangerous, and where some might go their whole lives without ever seeing the world outside of their village. If you'd prefer to write that region on your own, then I completely understand of course! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] ([[User talk:ArthurKung|talk]]) 10:42, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey. I know that you can transfer into you into your children as early as the womb, but hypothetically if that were to happen, how much influence would you have over their development?  -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 17:58 30 March, 2021 (EDT)
Does Garia have any holidays of note? I imagine religious holidays aren't too significant anymore, but what about national holidays like an Independence Day or founding day or such?-- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 22:48 June, 2022 (EDT)
Hey. If you do have some time, could you write up the pages for some of the giant races? I imagine you don't have much time, but I wanted to ask since I have a character who is half-giant.-- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 5:30 12 October, 2022 (EDT)
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Hey Elerneron. I was wondering if you would permit me to write a character sheet for Crown Prince Aldwin Gar, or if you had a very specific idea with him in mind?-- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 21:40 24 March, 2023 (EDT)
When I make a page for a character who already has children prior to possession, do I include those children/mates in the template? --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 21:51 March 28, 2023 (EDT)
Did you have a timeline for whenever you were going to write up the character sheet for some of the Abilities (namely the simple ones like Sharp Teeth, Low-Light Vision, etc) or if those are something that other people are also free to write up like character sheets?--[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 5:13 October 13, 2023 (EDT)
Are there any considerations you had in mind for kobolds and their traits/origins?--[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 6:33 October 19, 2023 (EDT)
First question: what size ranges do you consider appropriate for each of the giants (or at the very least an upper limit) other than colossi? Second question: what exactlyy are troglodytes compared to other humans? --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 6:56 October 22, 2023 (EDT)
What is your stance on people drawing art for Generations races? I've got a knack for drawing but don't want to just do it unless you're okay with it--[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 10:44 November 4, 2023 (GMT)
I added stuff to [[Generations/Lore/Realms/Noxsylvania|Noxsylvania]] but it occurred to me that I should ask you what your thoughts were on the political/legal aspects of the nation. —-[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 7:52 24 March, 2024 (EDT)
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== Invasion! ==
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First of all, thanks for your help with the categories. I was reviewing the description for the alien races and tried to see how their home planets would be like, and I have to argue against the extreme surface gravities that some of the alien's planets have. The Varselavesh are fine, their gravity and pressure fits into a gas giant. I also have no issue with the Winterkin. But the Grelis, and specially the Markovik have way too much surface gravity and way too little atmosphere. In the biggest terrestrial planet we can conceive (10 times the mass of the earth, twice its radius), the surface gravity would only be 2.5 G, and such planet would already have a much bigger atmosphere than earth, even being closer to a star and subject to solar tides. I can't imagine how a planet could have a surface gravity of 5.51 G, and an atmosphere of only 0.216 atm. I don't think such planet can exist. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 08:59, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Actually, surface gravity (which is what I think we're talking about) is directly proportional to the mass, but also inversely proportional to the square of the radius of the planet. Indeed the theoretical limit for terrestrial planets is about 10 times the mass of the earth, but that requires an increase in the radius, again the accepted ratio is that a planet 10 times as massive as the earth would have twice the radius, if you do the calculations for it's surface gravity, you'll find that it's only about 2.5 times greater than earth's surface gravity. I mean, even Jupiter, a gas giant only has a surface gravity 2.52 times greater than earth, since it's radius is so much bigger than earth's. In order for a celestial body to have a higher surface gravity, it's inner density would have to be much higher, which it's not possible under our current understanding of atomic forces.
Also, with respect to a gas giant losing it's atmosphere, you would end up with a pretty standard terrestrial planet in both size and mass, for example, it's hypothesised that Jupiter's solid core is only 5% of it's mass, which would put it well within the limit of terrestrial planets.  --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 19:46, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
I've been searching a lot about this, since I haven't had to make gravity calculations for bodies since college, and never for fantasy planets. So far the only place I've found planets with a surface gravity greater than 30 m/s² is in soft science fiction. All the science documents I've found limit the surface gravity of "planets" to around 28 m/s², regardless of them being terrestrial or gas giants. I also found a very interesting document about extraterrestrial zoology (hxxps://www.bibliotecapleyades.net/vida_alien/xenology/papers_xeno/et_zoology.htm), that states: "terrestrial rocky worlds with atmospheres suitable for life should have surface gravities between about 0.2 and 2.0 Earth-gees." The rest of the article is also very interesting and might help inspire other species, so I'm proposing you make an exception to external links so other prospective authors might also read it.--[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 04:40, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
All this stuff with that shape-shifting race that was being talked about made me think about the Kitsune from Japanese folk lore, so I decided to make it as a race and blend it in with the "Lizard People" conspiracy theory. Basically, it is a shape-shifting race that was already on earth and already in high positions of power before the Invasion ever even began. They landed on earth as colonists before the planet had any sentient life, and then blended in with human society due to their shape-shifting powers as human society developed. Basically, they are starting off in what all the other races would consider the "victory position." However, since they have no actual contact off planet and their technology is only as advanced as the cutting edge of human technology, the most they can do with this power position is defend it. Technically, they are the "defenders of earth" against the invasion, thus they are technically the "good guys" although no human would really consider them as such considering they are controlling earth politics from the shadows. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 18:59, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
Are you sure jeminis Yokai race is conform to the rules ?--[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 23:49, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
Would you call cloning if done on earth a legitimate form of birth ? --[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 22:59, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
would it be against the rules if the Chromarans in the guise of human government officials subjected the female population to slavery and holocaust ? --[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 03:29, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
so slavery right away, but the genocide will have to wait. or does it count as the humans doing it if the chromarans responsible used to be humans ? --[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 03:10, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
So, profile is finaly finished, how do i actually start the storyline in my branch? i already have the first sex scene layed put but i don't know how to get my characters there. --[[User:Foalpoots|Foalpoots]] ([[User talk:Foalpoots|talk]]) 06:36, 14 August 2017 (CEST)
Would you be okay with contributors creating their own artwork for the races they create? I’m an artist with a specific idea in my head for what the [[Invasion!/Hraktogala:Profile|Hraktogala]] look like so that’s why I ask. --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 24:01, 20 May 2020 (CEST)
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== The Last Boy on Earth ==
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Hey, how would sex work in the story? How detailed do you want it? How old is the main character? Can he strip nude first? What's his privates like? Sorry... just so many questions.--[[User:BinaryHedgehog|BinaryHedgehog]] ([[User talk:BinaryHedgehog|talk]]) 02:53, 28 February 2016 (CET)
Okay then, I'll let you handle it for now, I'll get on board soon, though.--[[User:BinaryHedgehog|BinaryHedgehog]] ([[User talk:BinaryHedgehog|talk]]) 03:54, 28 February 2016 (CET)
Okay, maybe the mother's okay with it and the father isn't? Also, and this is important since it's something you establishd, but what happens to arousal after orgasm?--[[User:BinaryHedgehog|BinaryHedgehog]] ([[User talk:BinaryHedgehog|talk]]) 04:14, 28 February 2016 (CET)
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== Life Hacks ==
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Is there a real Alexander in the real world?--[[User:No-one|No-one]] ([[User talk:No-one|talk]]) 19:38, 2 January 2017 (CET
Got another picture for you to modify to your format specifications so it can be used in the character profiles. It's a gender-swap picture for Bastian.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=File:Life_Hacks_Bethany.png
[[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 08:13, 27 March 2018 (CEST)
Actually I already modify it to work. I crop it to the required size and changed it to PNG before uploading. The only thing I didn't do was to remove the background, but it should work as I uploaded it. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 08:19, 27 March 2018 (CEST)
Oh, Ok. Yeah, just confirmed that, it works. Sorry to bother you Elerneron, looks like Tod's on top of this. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 09:10, 27 March 2018 (CEST)
Yeah, It's been a busy week.  I'm glad Tod could help out.  I'll see about getting a replacement with the background removed; but I can't say that I will for sure, or when I will have the time to do so if I do.  I have the week off, but I still haven't had a moment to myself. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] ([[User talk:Elerneron|talk]]) 13:43, 29 March 2018 (CEST)
Don't stress about it, you can consider this low priority. It's perfectly functional as is. In fact, I wasn't even thinking of asking you to remove the background, although now that it's offered I guess that it would make sense to have it fit in with the overall aesthetic of the rest of the story. Again though, low priority. Just do it whenever it's something that won't cause you undue stress. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 19:03, 29 March 2018 (CEST)
Didn't really know how to go about contacting Elerneron, but I just wanted to say what an amazing piece of work you've made. I wish I could financially compensate you to work on this more, there just aren't enough large stories that have such great content. Anyway, keep up the great work! --[[User:Playb0y|Playb0y]] ([[User talk:Playb0y|talk]]) 23:48, 29 October 2018 (CEST)
Hey Elerneron, is there a way to have the Life Hacks UI collapsible, yet span the whole page? I originally wanted only the "active Perks" section to collapse, but then it evolved into the entire UI element being auto hidden for mobile users -- [[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 22:07, 14 February 2019 (CET)
Hey Elerneron, i hope i'm not in the wrong place, i'm new here and i want to contribute to Life Hacks, specifically to Wsintai's requested option on this page: https://stories.allthefallen.moe/index.php?title=Life_Hacks/Hallomod(tod-pre)/Take_some_hacks_and_apply_them_to_the_Holidays_and_all_of_your_family
I just have a few questions about the Guidelines and Reward System. Is there a definitive replacement for the old calculations of consent stats (friend/trust/love ...)? And how is the point reward for PIV sex calculated? I saw 20 in an example somewhere but i just don't understand the docs page on this. Also i wonder, is it considered sex if the the penetration goes no deeper than the hymen, without damaging it, but Xander ejaculates into the girl? And finally does that also give the "break her cherry" bonus then? [[User:DiaperDollies|DiaperDollies]] ([[User talk:DiaperDollies|talk]]) 23:55, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
Can I use the main characters (Beth instead of Bastian) and Billie for a SFW AI Dungeon scenario where Xander just wants to be a Good Samaritan and help out his fellow lifies? [[User:Jeershbastard|Jeershbastard]] ([[User talk:Jeershbastard|talk]]) 05:38, 4 January 2023 (CET)
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Hey Elerneron, could you delete the [[Life Hacks/Herm Lexi Brittany interrupts]] page I created, since I didn’t read the title once I made the page and would prefer to just start over? -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 22:07, 19 April 2020 (CET)
== The Mark of Fate ==
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== Pass It Along ==
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== Profiles in Power ==
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== Romp ==
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Is there an assumed age of the protagonist or is it up to the reader?  -- [[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 6:51, 4 May 2020 (EDT)
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Just sorta wondering, is there an issue with per se putting an age on the options or did I over step my boundaries by doing that when I added the "Its not my family but a friends family" then defining the age of the younger minors? Cause the reason I did that was due to their being so close in age. I couldn't exactly per se just put toddler when there is one that's 2, 3, & 5 all female it just didn't make sense to me. Just let me know if I go to far or off in left field somewheres I shouldn't be.
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== The Shiar’elestrian Mythology ==
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Hello, I see the format of this new story in some ways resembles the one on [[Disciplinary Action]]. I can't wait to see how you amaze us with the use of these Nexus points. After reading the part where Tay is taken to the Overseer's office, I remembered I had to deal with something similar when I started with [[Disciplinary Action]]. You have three pages almost exactly equal: [[Vault 69/Nexus-Intro/Go|Go]], [[Vault 69/Nexus-Intro/Run|Run]] and [[Vault 69/Nexus-Intro/Shut the Door|Shut the Door]]. I'm pretty sure you did this on purpose because the other option was to put the different intros into a very small page with a single link to the parts that are equal, and such segue page can seem too short. The problem arrises in the future, because each of those pages has 3 links to continue the story, and right now there are no problems, but in the future someone might want to add a fourth option, and most people are not going to be careful enough to add the fourth option on all three pages, so it will come to you to check and add the fourth option on all of them. Right now that might seem like a very little concern, but from experience I can tell you it can become very unhandy quickly. I strongly urge you to use segue pages for differences and join them into a small nexus so that there is no duplicated options that will haunt you in the future. --[[User:Tod Naturlich|Tod Naturlich]] ([[User talk:Tod Naturlich|talk]]) 03:23, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
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You're as bad as me playing an rpg. 500 hours of game time and a dozen different chatacters, and i still haven't completed the main plot of Skyrim. I just love making new characters like you seem to love starting new stories. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 20:47, 19 December 2017 (CET)
Is it ok to have multiple possible characters have the same origin? Such as from [[Villainy/I gained my powers in the 50's to the 70's in Project: Prometheus|the 50's to the 70's Project: Prometheus]]? I’m kinda worried this is an obvious question but I feel I should ask anyway. --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)
What would the paragraph for the black market page look like? Would it be a list or would it just b some random thug asking you what kind of power you want or something? --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)
Are you allowing contributors for the story? I wanted to ask before I went and added my own character. --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)
What is the limit of attributes/traits/whatever they’re called? Ex) Dex x-y. Also, can a character have multiple '''Motivations'''?--[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 10:58, 23 May 2020 (EDT)
Do superpowers occur naturally? They seemed to for the Patriot, has anyone else in the last couple hundred years just had superpowers? If so, how do they occur? --[[User:Dein0clies|Dein0clies]] ([[User talk:Dein0clies|talk]]) 8:08, 31 May 2020 (EDT)
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Same with this one. Love the concept, and anxious for more story. I'd love to see one (or both) of the stripper moms start going naked at home and letting her kids use her for a fuck toy lol ~~[[Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]]
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I have created profiles for the twins, the mother, the uncle and the two best friends. If you are still happy for me to go ahead with writing a different character(s) I think I'm good to go. I have uploaded the pictures of each of them (I have noted in one its flagged to be deleted); can you double check there's no issues there? Otherwise I'll get the profiles uploaded soon, with some story about the antics of the Morse twins :|P --[[User:Jackmaster|Jackmaster]] ([[User talk:Jackmaster|talk]]) 16:16, 23 January 2017 (CET)
Awesome. I can try and get the character sheets up tomorrow! Feel free to contribute, edit or write anything for the twins as well :)
Which picture did you think was a little small? I will see what the character sheets look like when I copy them over; I just copied the coding for the ones you made, and then edited the information on them. If anything doesn't work out as expected I'm sure I'll come calling soon! :P --[[User:Jackmaster|Jackmaster]] ([[User talk:Jackmaster|talk]]) 00:03, 24 January 2017 (CET) 'Edit:' Mariel's picture and Marcel's picture are both likeness drawings of characters from a game (as I mentioned in the description. I know Marciel is created by the game's illustrator, and I have included the link to their page, copyright etc. I can't find the other picture again to check for any copyright. Will they be ok, or will we need to find oath images for them?
Yeah I think stick to third person! As much as I love second person as a tool, trying to write in second person for two constantly interchanging characters, although fun, would me too much chaos! First part if just about to go up (or may already be up by the time you read this :P). I'm thinking the second part can introduce the idea of swapping the ring between them. Hopefully there will be readers who want to contribute to the choices; it makes it so much easier when writing interactive stories, as I have no idea which of the three to go for! --[[User:Jackmaster|Jackmaster]] ([[User talk:Jackmaster|talk]]) 16:35, 24 January 2017 (CET)
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[[User:Trag|Trag]] ([[User talk:Trag|talk]]) 05:18, 12 December 2022 (CET) I'm wondering how I can post a story. I just recently got the contributor status, but I don't know how to post a story here. I need some help on that front. I can probably figure out the rest from there.
Hmm... didn't actually see where the option to do that was located. I guess I should look a little more carefully next time I'm editing something. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:14, 12 December 2022 (CET)
Ok, found it. Not exactly in the most intuitive place as to let me find it even not knowing I had the option, but it was in just good enough of a place that I found it quickly when I was actually looking for it. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:17, 12 December 2022 (CET)
idk how to make links to continue story, and such. & how 2 DM sum1.. [[User:God, Feast.|God, Feast.]] ([[User talk:God, Feast.|talk]]) 12:02, 17 December 2022 (CET)
If you're looking for recommendations on how to nail the format rules home for the new users, I would personally recommend linking to the specific subsection within the format rules when someone misses something critical. Like, a missing category? Or a scuffed link? Just link directly to [[Format Rules/Categories|Categories]] or [[Format Rules/Links|Links]] respectively, instead of only linking the full format rules again. Linking to [[Format Rules/Full Format|Full Format]] might also be helpful since it gives the user a good full picture of what the code for the page is supposed to look like. Or maybe link to a simple, existing story page like [[TSPR/Go trolling at the mall|this]] so the user can get a more practical example of how stuff works correctly. Might be worth creating an example page for that so people don't accidentally mess up other people's work! (On that note, the "full format" is linked to on the front page but not under the [[Format Rules]] page, so it could also be helpful to add it there.)
Some of this might seem redundant since it's literally just one or two extra clicks for the user, but it COULD just make a difference since someone who has zero experience with html or editing pages will likely feel different. Like, I still remember when I was starting and had zero knowledge on the subject, just wondering, "wait, how the frick", and I'd imagine that most people are in a similar boat since this stuff hasn't probably been taught in school's IT classes in years. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 13:15, 17 December 2022 (CET)
Okay, I added categories to all of my media as requested. Thank you. --[[User:MikePeterson2468|MikePeterson2468]] ([[User talk:MikePeterson2468|talk]]) 02:13, 27 December 2022 (CET)
Well... I don't necessarily want to become an admin, but I'm not completely opposed to the idea if nobody else bites the bullet. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 07:18, 4 January 2023 (CET)
Alright, that sounds good. I’m happy to help out. I was actually going to ask, would it be helpful to go add categories to all the old uncategorized pages so that the uncategorized list is actually useful? --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 16:44, 5 January 2023 (CET)
Quick question: If I accidentally hit the block button, is there an easy way to undo that? I'm afraid I might do that sometime. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 05:25, 8 January 2023 (CET)
Thank you for the guidance, I really appreciate it as I get used to this. Hopefully, I get some feedback from other users on here and on the forum. Not having those is a real drain on motivation. --[[User:Authorinshadows|Authorinshadows]] ([[User talk:Authorinshadows|talk]]) 01:37, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for the tip on chapters of my story Kids. The chapters got a little less self-contained than I thought. So yes, it should be one story in the meta category. I appreciate your offer to help, but maybe I should try to figure this out myself. --[[User:Benny Blanco|Benny Blanco]] ([[User talk:Benny Blanco|talk]]) 22:45, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for the contrib status, I'm working on adding my first story in, I reviewed the format rules.  Let me know if there is anything I need to do differently wiki is completely new to me. --[[User:Chad.miller|Chad.miller]] ([[User talk:Chad.miller|talk]]) 17:26, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
==Emily==
Thanks for the trusted contributor status.  I will keep an eye out for any vandals or people making a mess.  I’ve also been able to upload a lot of AI art and managed to hack a template to get it working today.  [[User:Emily|Emily]] ([[User talk:Emily|talk]]) 22:58, 24 January 2023 (CET)
==HG Collins==
Great news, there are no longer any pages without categories. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 07:00, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Also, I've been working on the possibility of adding a "Featured Stories" section that I don't mind curating every month or so. I was a little excited about it and basically rolled it out, but I felt like it needed a little work and its own dedicated page instead of linking straight to the stories from the main page. I'll work on it over the course of the week and see where I get with it. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 07:27, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Well, this time I actually rolled it out. I hope you like it. The feature page itself will take some work. but with a little effort, it will look really great. And don't worry, I won't be leaving any other surprises. This is the only one. Please don't kill me. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 07:51, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Sounds good, I don’t mind maintaining it and seeing where it goes. I could see doing it in a way that would allow it to be a little more static, too. But we’ll see.  --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 17:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Hey, a user just left a suggestion on my talk page about the idea of being able to find stories by specific interests: consensual, rape etc. That got me thinking we could add these to category pages and have perhaps a select few story categories that we link to from the homepage. Of course, I’d probably go back and add appropriate categories to current story categories. But the biggest challenge is getting users to adpot it correctly. Damn. That might be the issue… --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 18:21, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
Yeah, I agree. It’s just too complicated. At any rate, I‘m going to focus on making a nice “featured” section for now and see where it goes. I’m confident I can update it on a regular basis and eventually make an archive of featured stories. I think an author spotlight might be nice, but that gets a little more complicated since I don’t want to accidentally skip over an author and piss someone off. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 01:32, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
Any opinion on whether or not the new Featured Writers page should be open or an admin edit only? I keep going back and forth on it.--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 17:11, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
==MrPib==
There are ways for admins to reset commands, although I think that the ones that allow an admin to directly change the password, require Sys-Admin permissions.
[https://mediawiki.org/wiki/Manual:Resetting_passwords MediaWiki/Manual:Resetting_passwords]
--[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 17:47, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
==Mosethos==
I'm not interested in the moderator position because I'm incapable of policing, but I have a thought. The formatting is fairly complicated when you just want to write. Assuming that it's out of the question to abandon the wikimedia format for a dedicated website with features like tag filters, automatic organization, etc., you could share a third party tool that formats everything for users so that they just have to copy and paste. 
I already threw together a windows forum app for myself that achieves this while waiting for contributor status. I was hesitant to mention it because it's very unpolished, but it is fully functional. A user just has to write their content into the appropriate text fields and it's all processed into a formatted output window. I think a more experienced developer could make something way better, especially if they could make it a web app, but if you're interested it would motivate me to improve it. I want, for example, to make a decision tree so that the user could move between pages all in app and finish their entire story before starting the process of uploading to ATF. Also the ability to save/load stories.
--[[User:Mosethos17|Mosethos17]] ([[User talk:Mosethos17|talk]]) 20:59, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
==Durzan==
Hey Elerneron, a couple questions:
1. Is there a way to tell how popular or how much traffic my stories generate on here?
2. How do I go about applying for a position as a moderator for the story wiki?
3. Up for collaborating a bit regarding 7DI?
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] ([[User talk:Durzan|talk]]) 12:16, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Hey Elerneron, I got a few wiki pages I wanted to import for reference from another wiki site, but don't seem to have permission to do so. Could you help me with this? I think trusted users can import wiki pages...
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] ([[User talk:Durzan|talk]]) 00:13, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
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Hey Elerneron, There's a wiki extension that allows you to get all pages in a category added to your watchlist when you have the category in your watch list. In addition, new pages added to said category will automatically be added as well. Its the CategoryWatch extension. It might be a good idea to consider adding it here to help with ease of use when editing or following a story. --Durzan (talk) 07:27, 24 December 2023 (UTC)


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I'm having and issue where content I copy and paste from Scrivener has all the line breaks and tabs removed. If I delete the ones from Scrivener within the media wiki editor and retype the line endings, then 4 spaces for tabs, everything looks correct but then my content is parsed with a <Pre> tag, which places everything in a strange box and I'm not sure how to fix it. Other user's stories don't seem to be parsed with that tag. I did read the rules carefully but maybe I'm making a mistake in the formatting?

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2 Taboo 4 You

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Oh, and if/when the Jack shower scene in 2T4U is up I'm thinking about continuing "send Missy away, have Aaron stay". Well, the one where Jack remember's that Melony's old clothes are still in the attic anyway. I have a weakness for traps and sissies.

Also! Tell me if any off my additions seem off in regards to how the characters behave. That's my biggest worry when adding to someone else's story. --BakaG (talk) 07:09, 12 October 2015 (CEST)

Well, here it is: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee Hope it reads as well as it sounded in my head. --BakaG (talk) 13:22, 13 October 2015 (CEST)


I just edited Aaron's profile to include his sexual knowledge. I am going to also be doing the same thing with every human character under the age of 12. That is another thing we are going to be needing to keep on the same page about, especially now that there is more than one person who is really editing this thing. --Jemini (talk)

I was also thinking, it might be a good idea to include an equivalent "sexual history" section for characters over age 12, especially with the highschool aged kids. I have already got my specific ideas for Brittany witch have already been talked about, but I was hoping to hear if you had anything specific in that area in mind when you created the character of Jack. I do not have any strong ideas about him myself in that area, so if you don't add something then I think that his sexual history bio may wind up being on hold until something is decided in-story by one of the writers (same for all the other 12+ characters not including Brittany.) --Jemini (talk)

Just gave Jack his sexual background. I had to re-write a few post entries that didn't fit it, but since his character has generally been a little on the jerkish side when me or others have written him and also more on the side of sexually competent and entitled, even with the curse that behavior suggests someone who has been around on the subject, so I made him a little bit of a man-whore. I am currently debating whether or not all this sleeping around should have resulted in him being a teen father though. Of course, if he is, then the maternal grand-parents are raising the child(ren). This would also explain more why Maria would be attracted to this family. Anyway, just sharing my thought process with the other large contributor to the story. I know you have sort of given me the lead, but since you started the story I think you ought to still be involved to at least the extent of being kept up to date about major things like decisions about character back-story. Jemini (talk) 04:38, 24 November 2015 (CET)

All Hell Breaks Loose

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Hey. I created a character sheet for a character in All Hell and I need help finding an image for her. --Dein0clies (talk) 16:40, December 20, 2022 (MDT)

As You Wish

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The Cum Fairy

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Fairly Oddparents: Timmy's Awakening

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I have got to say, I am admiring your Fairly Oddparents story. I don't find it much of a turn-on, but it is perfectly in the style and mood of the source material, and that shows some excellent writing. Just thought I would pay you the compliment. Jemini (talk) 04:24, 6 January 2016 (CET)

I'm not a huge fan of the show, but this looks like a fun tale. (Still want to see updates for TWAWKI and Generations) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:19, 6 January 2016 (CET)

Let her go mad, then free her after everyone knows she's preggers. You can tell everyone that she's crazy, molested Timmy, and got herself pregnant. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:01, 7 January 2016 (CET)

OMFG, that arena scene! It is exactly like watching an episode of Fairly Odd Parents! This stuff is great! Once again, I do not find this to be much of a turn-on, but that's Ok. Don't change a thing. About the only reason I don't write for this is because I do not feel qualified to keep it to this standard, and the only reason I do not suggest something is because I am enjoying it a lot more just seeing where you go with it. This is grade A fan-fiction here. Jemini (talk) 16:21, 9 January 2016 (CET)

Generations

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Fascinating concept. I look forward to seeing more options available. ~~Notsooldpervert


Hello Elerneron. I recently joined the site, almost for the sole reason of writing on Generations. I followed the initial writing on it, and read up on the lore which you had created. I was quickly smitten, and wanted desperately to contribute to the world, with all it's interesting races and societies. I thought out some ideas for Jaedyn Farmer, and have already begun to write a few pages on him. However, if you already had plans for him - feel free to remove what I have written thus far.

I also know you're not accepting non-canon contributions (which I understand completely! Wanting other writers to contribute to your world is just fine, but it can definitely get messy if everyone is allowed to change the foundations of the lore and environments.), but if you're up for it I would gladly like to discuss some potential expansions on the canon (but they are neither requests nor demands. You've already written a whole bunch, and I am more than thrilled to work with what has been provided!). But starting with the subject of Realms; so far you have written the ranks and titles for Western Rulership - which I assume is based off on medieval European feudal systems. Based on the title, I assume you've also had plans for Eastern or even Mid-Eastern Rulership? Sort of like a Sultanate/Caliphate or an oriental Empire? If you have, I would love to hear any such ideas! Second, is the human level of technology based off on any particular time period in the world (14th century, 12th century etc.)? Lastly, would you consider adding harpies to the creature races? Because harpies are hot. I love me some harpies.

And also, thank you for having left the story open to other writer's contributions! --ArthurKung (talk) 03:16, 26 March 2016 (CET)


Thank you for answering my questions, Elerneron. And I also want to thank you for expanding the realms sections and adding a map; it will be of great help when planning the stories to come! I look forward to writing and having Jaedyn explore the world and all its inhabitants. --ArthurKung (talk) 10:29, 30 March 2016 (EDT)


Hello Elerneron, I was working on a character sheet for Gru’Thrak and was wondering if you might be able to help out? -- Dein0clies (talk) 11:51, 21 April 2020 (EDT)


Hello Elerneron, when you say “If you would like another race defined...” do you mean adding a race that isn’t listed, or creating a page for one of the listed races? -- Dein0clies (talk) 18:47, 22 April 2020 (EDT)


Hello Elerneron, I know I’m been asking a lot of questions today, but is it okay for other contributors to create pages for races? Also is it the same for regions? -- Dein0clies (talk) 18:47, 22 April 2020 (EDT)


Thank you for answering my questions. I completely understand making modifications, as the story is your creation. As for if I was referring to the Garian Orclands, yes I was. If I may ask, is Garia based on any real world country/kingdom? -- Dein0clies (talk) 6:12, 23 April 2020 (EDT)


Hey Elerneron, could you possibly ad succubi/inccubi to the list of races? I figured that they’d fit along side the other demonkin. -- Dein0clies (talk) 7:44, 25 April 2020 (EDT)


Is it possible for an attribute to change overtime? Such as a character's Body improving through training, or their Mind decreasing by not studying for example. Also, if I may, what does Spirit entail? And how much nuance is their in the attributes? Like would a Sumo wrestler have a high or a low Body? -- Dein0clies (talk) 13:21, 26 April 2020 (EDT)


Out of curiosity, is it possible for the “spirit,” god, or whatever you are to transfer into the siblings of your host, in the event of their death? Perhaps if they had previously possessed the parent of the host? -- Dein0clies (talk) 23:16, 26 April 2020 (EDT)


In the vein of the previous question, what happens to your Divine Abilities once you posses a child you produce while in the host? Does your Divine Spark become more powerful, for example, or do you gain a new ability on top of it, or both? -- Dein0clies (talk) 13:21, 26 April 2020 (EDT)


Do the races all speak a single, racial language (common for humans, elvish for elves, etc.) or do they have different languages, depending on culture and location? -- Dein0clies (talk) 9:37, 4 May 2020 (EDT)


Hey Elerneron, I know I gave you an quite the undertaking already with the Demons race page and all, but could you possibly create a page for goblins once you’re done with that and find time? -- Dein0clies (talk) 12:13, 6 May 2020 (EDT)


How long after the God War does the story take place? Also is there a limit on how old the offspring you produce can be before you take control of them? And what happens to your previous host? I assume they die, but I want to ask for sure. -- Dein0clies (talk) 3:33, 8 May 2020 (EDT)


I’m sure you have a lot on your plate right now, but could you add outlining the page for Eudresian Empire to. The to-do list? -- Dein0clies (talk) 8:09, 18 May 2020 (EDT)

Here’s a hypothetical question for you: what do I do for character sheets of the offspring you produce? —-Dein0clies (talk) 8:33 22 May 2020 (EDT)


Could you work on a page for the troglodytes or imps when you have time available? —-Dein0clies (talk) 13:17 27 May 2020 (EDT)


I know we won’t see the Eudresian Empire anytime soon, but perhaps you could work on Noxsylvania? Or if you’re busy, you could give me an idea for what you had in mind and I could create a page for it? —-Dein0clies (talk) 16:21 2 June, 2020 (EDT)

How do I calculate cross racial pregnancy, such as between a human and an elf? —-Dein0clies (talk) 8:41 4 June, 2020 (EDT)

Thanks for responding, but I don’t think my question was very clear. I meant to ask how I calculate the length of a cross species pregnancy? -- Dein0clies (talk) 14:32 4 June, 2020 (EDT)

I know I’ve been asking for race pages a lot lately, but is it possible we could see a page a Stone Giants, Fomorians, or Ogres? Which ever one is more likely to produce a half giant. Alternatively, like Noxsylvania you could give me an idea of what you had in mind for them and I could start creating pages. I didn’t want to create something that goes against what you had in mind so I held off. -- Dein0clies (talk) 7:04 5 June, 2020 (EDT)

Hi Elernon, I’m sorry to bother you but I have two questions about the orcs: 1) do they have a swifter recovery than human males? 2) do women have any role in society other than sex and children? Also, I figured I would leave the government and population sections of Noxsylvania to you.-- Dein0clies (talk) 6:18 5 July, 2020 (EDT)

What is your policy on magic items in Generations? How do magic items work and how rare are they? What are the limitations of magic items? -- Dein0clies (talk) 6:52 27 December, 2020 (EDT)

Hey Elerneron! I saw on Dein0clies' talk page that you already have an idea in mind for the regions in the setting. I've had my sight set on the "Jungle Tribes"-area for a while, and would love to try and write a page for that region. With your blessing and final say, of course. Could I ask what you might have had in mind for that environment? Any particular politics or points of interest that you think would be vital? I've envisioned an extremely loose bundle of tribes and societies that other 'actual' empires just decided to name "The Jungle Tribes" for convenience's sake. A region that's wild and dangerous, and where some might go their whole lives without ever seeing the world outside of their village. If you'd prefer to write that region on your own, then I completely understand of course! --ArthurKung (talk) 10:42, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey. I know that you can transfer into you into your children as early as the womb, but hypothetically if that were to happen, how much influence would you have over their development? -- Dein0clies (talk) 17:58 30 March, 2021 (EDT)

Does Garia have any holidays of note? I imagine religious holidays aren't too significant anymore, but what about national holidays like an Independence Day or founding day or such?-- Dein0clies (talk) 22:48 June, 2022 (EDT)

Hey. If you do have some time, could you write up the pages for some of the giant races? I imagine you don't have much time, but I wanted to ask since I have a character who is half-giant.-- Dein0clies (talk) 5:30 12 October, 2022 (EDT) al Hey Elerneron. I was wondering if you would permit me to write a character sheet for Crown Prince Aldwin Gar, or if you had a very specific idea with him in mind?-- Dein0clies (talk) 21:40 24 March, 2023 (EDT)

When I make a page for a character who already has children prior to possession, do I include those children/mates in the template? --Dein0clies (talk) 21:51 March 28, 2023 (EDT)

Did you have a timeline for whenever you were going to write up the character sheet for some of the Abilities (namely the simple ones like Sharp Teeth, Low-Light Vision, etc) or if those are something that other people are also free to write up like character sheets?--Dein0clies (talk) 5:13 October 13, 2023 (EDT)

Are there any considerations you had in mind for kobolds and their traits/origins?--Dein0clies (talk) 6:33 October 19, 2023 (EDT)

First question: what size ranges do you consider appropriate for each of the giants (or at the very least an upper limit) other than colossi? Second question: what exactlyy are troglodytes compared to other humans? --Dein0clies (talk) 6:56 October 22, 2023 (EDT)

What is your stance on people drawing art for Generations races? I've got a knack for drawing but don't want to just do it unless you're okay with it--Dein0clies (talk) 10:44 November 4, 2023 (GMT)

I added stuff to Noxsylvania but it occurred to me that I should ask you what your thoughts were on the political/legal aspects of the nation. —-Dein0clies (talk) 7:52 24 March, 2024 (EDT)

Invasion!

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First of all, thanks for your help with the categories. I was reviewing the description for the alien races and tried to see how their home planets would be like, and I have to argue against the extreme surface gravities that some of the alien's planets have. The Varselavesh are fine, their gravity and pressure fits into a gas giant. I also have no issue with the Winterkin. But the Grelis, and specially the Markovik have way too much surface gravity and way too little atmosphere. In the biggest terrestrial planet we can conceive (10 times the mass of the earth, twice its radius), the surface gravity would only be 2.5 G, and such planet would already have a much bigger atmosphere than earth, even being closer to a star and subject to solar tides. I can't imagine how a planet could have a surface gravity of 5.51 G, and an atmosphere of only 0.216 atm. I don't think such planet can exist. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:59, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

Actually, surface gravity (which is what I think we're talking about) is directly proportional to the mass, but also inversely proportional to the square of the radius of the planet. Indeed the theoretical limit for terrestrial planets is about 10 times the mass of the earth, but that requires an increase in the radius, again the accepted ratio is that a planet 10 times as massive as the earth would have twice the radius, if you do the calculations for it's surface gravity, you'll find that it's only about 2.5 times greater than earth's surface gravity. I mean, even Jupiter, a gas giant only has a surface gravity 2.52 times greater than earth, since it's radius is so much bigger than earth's. In order for a celestial body to have a higher surface gravity, it's inner density would have to be much higher, which it's not possible under our current understanding of atomic forces.

Also, with respect to a gas giant losing it's atmosphere, you would end up with a pretty standard terrestrial planet in both size and mass, for example, it's hypothesised that Jupiter's solid core is only 5% of it's mass, which would put it well within the limit of terrestrial planets. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 19:46, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

I've been searching a lot about this, since I haven't had to make gravity calculations for bodies since college, and never for fantasy planets. So far the only place I've found planets with a surface gravity greater than 30 m/s² is in soft science fiction. All the science documents I've found limit the surface gravity of "planets" to around 28 m/s², regardless of them being terrestrial or gas giants. I also found a very interesting document about extraterrestrial zoology (hxxps://www.bibliotecapleyades.net/vida_alien/xenology/papers_xeno/et_zoology.htm), that states: "terrestrial rocky worlds with atmospheres suitable for life should have surface gravities between about 0.2 and 2.0 Earth-gees." The rest of the article is also very interesting and might help inspire other species, so I'm proposing you make an exception to external links so other prospective authors might also read it.--Tod Naturlich (talk) 04:40, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

All this stuff with that shape-shifting race that was being talked about made me think about the Kitsune from Japanese folk lore, so I decided to make it as a race and blend it in with the "Lizard People" conspiracy theory. Basically, it is a shape-shifting race that was already on earth and already in high positions of power before the Invasion ever even began. They landed on earth as colonists before the planet had any sentient life, and then blended in with human society due to their shape-shifting powers as human society developed. Basically, they are starting off in what all the other races would consider the "victory position." However, since they have no actual contact off planet and their technology is only as advanced as the cutting edge of human technology, the most they can do with this power position is defend it. Technically, they are the "defenders of earth" against the invasion, thus they are technically the "good guys" although no human would really consider them as such considering they are controlling earth politics from the shadows. Jemini (talk) 18:59, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

Are you sure jeminis Yokai race is conform to the rules ?--Foalpoots (talk) 23:49, 13 July 2017 (UTC)

Would you call cloning if done on earth a legitimate form of birth ? --Foalpoots (talk) 22:59, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

would it be against the rules if the Chromarans in the guise of human government officials subjected the female population to slavery and holocaust ? --Foalpoots (talk) 03:29, 8 August 2017 (UTC)

so slavery right away, but the genocide will have to wait. or does it count as the humans doing it if the chromarans responsible used to be humans ? --Foalpoots (talk) 03:10, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

So, profile is finaly finished, how do i actually start the storyline in my branch? i already have the first sex scene layed put but i don't know how to get my characters there. --Foalpoots (talk) 06:36, 14 August 2017 (CEST)


Would you be okay with contributors creating their own artwork for the races they create? I’m an artist with a specific idea in my head for what the Hraktogala look like so that’s why I ask. --Dein0clies (talk) 24:01, 20 May 2020 (CEST)

The Last Boy on Earth

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Hey, how would sex work in the story? How detailed do you want it? How old is the main character? Can he strip nude first? What's his privates like? Sorry... just so many questions.--BinaryHedgehog (talk) 02:53, 28 February 2016 (CET)

Okay then, I'll let you handle it for now, I'll get on board soon, though.--BinaryHedgehog (talk) 03:54, 28 February 2016 (CET)

Okay, maybe the mother's okay with it and the father isn't? Also, and this is important since it's something you establishd, but what happens to arousal after orgasm?--BinaryHedgehog (talk) 04:14, 28 February 2016 (CET)

Life Hacks

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Is there a real Alexander in the real world?--No-one (talk) 19:38, 2 January 2017 (CET

Got another picture for you to modify to your format specifications so it can be used in the character profiles. It's a gender-swap picture for Bastian. https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=File:Life_Hacks_Bethany.png Jemini (talk) 08:13, 27 March 2018 (CEST)

Actually I already modify it to work. I crop it to the required size and changed it to PNG before uploading. The only thing I didn't do was to remove the background, but it should work as I uploaded it. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:19, 27 March 2018 (CEST)

Oh, Ok. Yeah, just confirmed that, it works. Sorry to bother you Elerneron, looks like Tod's on top of this. Jemini (talk) 09:10, 27 March 2018 (CEST)

Yeah, It's been a busy week. I'm glad Tod could help out. I'll see about getting a replacement with the background removed; but I can't say that I will for sure, or when I will have the time to do so if I do. I have the week off, but I still haven't had a moment to myself. --Elerneron (talk) 13:43, 29 March 2018 (CEST)

Don't stress about it, you can consider this low priority. It's perfectly functional as is. In fact, I wasn't even thinking of asking you to remove the background, although now that it's offered I guess that it would make sense to have it fit in with the overall aesthetic of the rest of the story. Again though, low priority. Just do it whenever it's something that won't cause you undue stress. Jemini (talk) 19:03, 29 March 2018 (CEST)

Didn't really know how to go about contacting Elerneron, but I just wanted to say what an amazing piece of work you've made. I wish I could financially compensate you to work on this more, there just aren't enough large stories that have such great content. Anyway, keep up the great work! --Playb0y (talk) 23:48, 29 October 2018 (CEST)

Hey Elerneron, is there a way to have the Life Hacks UI collapsible, yet span the whole page? I originally wanted only the "active Perks" section to collapse, but then it evolved into the entire UI element being auto hidden for mobile users -- MrPib (talk) 22:07, 14 February 2019 (CET)

Hey Elerneron, i hope i'm not in the wrong place, i'm new here and i want to contribute to Life Hacks, specifically to Wsintai's requested option on this page: https://stories.allthefallen.moe/index.php?title=Life_Hacks/Hallomod(tod-pre)/Take_some_hacks_and_apply_them_to_the_Holidays_and_all_of_your_family I just have a few questions about the Guidelines and Reward System. Is there a definitive replacement for the old calculations of consent stats (friend/trust/love ...)? And how is the point reward for PIV sex calculated? I saw 20 in an example somewhere but i just don't understand the docs page on this. Also i wonder, is it considered sex if the the penetration goes no deeper than the hymen, without damaging it, but Xander ejaculates into the girl? And finally does that also give the "break her cherry" bonus then? DiaperDollies (talk) 23:55, 5 January 2021 (UTC)

Can I use the main characters (Beth instead of Bastian) and Billie for a SFW AI Dungeon scenario where Xander just wants to be a Good Samaritan and help out his fellow lifies? Jeershbastard (talk) 05:38, 4 January 2023 (CET)

Hey Elerneron, could you delete the Life Hacks/Herm Lexi Brittany interrupts page I created, since I didn’t read the title once I made the page and would prefer to just start over? -- Dein0clies (talk) 22:07, 19 April 2020 (CET)

The Mark of Fate

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Pass It Along

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Profiles in Power

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Romp

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Is there an assumed age of the protagonist or is it up to the reader? -- Dein0clies (talk) 6:51, 4 May 2020 (EDT)


Just sorta wondering, is there an issue with per se putting an age on the options or did I over step my boundaries by doing that when I added the "Its not my family but a friends family" then defining the age of the younger minors? Cause the reason I did that was due to their being so close in age. I couldn't exactly per se just put toddler when there is one that's 2, 3, & 5 all female it just didn't make sense to me. Just let me know if I go to far or off in left field somewheres I shouldn't be. --Icy.horse (talk) 12:05, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

The Shiar’elestrian Mythology

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Universe Remote

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Vault 69

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Hello, I see the format of this new story in some ways resembles the one on Disciplinary Action. I can't wait to see how you amaze us with the use of these Nexus points. After reading the part where Tay is taken to the Overseer's office, I remembered I had to deal with something similar when I started with Disciplinary Action. You have three pages almost exactly equal: Go, Run and Shut the Door. I'm pretty sure you did this on purpose because the other option was to put the different intros into a very small page with a single link to the parts that are equal, and such segue page can seem too short. The problem arrises in the future, because each of those pages has 3 links to continue the story, and right now there are no problems, but in the future someone might want to add a fourth option, and most people are not going to be careful enough to add the fourth option on all three pages, so it will come to you to check and add the fourth option on all of them. Right now that might seem like a very little concern, but from experience I can tell you it can become very unhandy quickly. I strongly urge you to use segue pages for differences and join them into a small nexus so that there is no duplicated options that will haunt you in the future. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 03:23, 23 September 2019 (UTC)

Villainy

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You're as bad as me playing an rpg. 500 hours of game time and a dozen different chatacters, and i still haven't completed the main plot of Skyrim. I just love making new characters like you seem to love starting new stories. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:47, 19 December 2017 (CET)

Is it ok to have multiple possible characters have the same origin? Such as from the 50's to the 70's Project: Prometheus? I’m kinda worried this is an obvious question but I feel I should ask anyway. --Dein0clies (talk) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

What would the paragraph for the black market page look like? Would it be a list or would it just b some random thug asking you what kind of power you want or something? --Dein0clies (talk) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

Are you allowing contributors for the story? I wanted to ask before I went and added my own character. --Dein0clies (talk) 7:26, 4 May 2020 (EDT)

What is the limit of attributes/traits/whatever they’re called? Ex) Dex x-y. Also, can a character have multiple Motivations?--Dein0clies (talk) 10:58, 23 May 2020 (EDT)

Do superpowers occur naturally? They seemed to for the Patriot, has anyone else in the last couple hundred years just had superpowers? If so, how do they occur? --Dein0clies (talk) 8:08, 31 May 2020 (EDT)

The World as We Know It

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Same with this one. Love the concept, and anxious for more story. I'd love to see one (or both) of the stripper moms start going naked at home and letting her kids use her for a fuck toy lol ~~Notsooldpervert

Yes

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I have created profiles for the twins, the mother, the uncle and the two best friends. If you are still happy for me to go ahead with writing a different character(s) I think I'm good to go. I have uploaded the pictures of each of them (I have noted in one its flagged to be deleted); can you double check there's no issues there? Otherwise I'll get the profiles uploaded soon, with some story about the antics of the Morse twins :|P --Jackmaster (talk) 16:16, 23 January 2017 (CET)

Awesome. I can try and get the character sheets up tomorrow! Feel free to contribute, edit or write anything for the twins as well :)

Which picture did you think was a little small? I will see what the character sheets look like when I copy them over; I just copied the coding for the ones you made, and then edited the information on them. If anything doesn't work out as expected I'm sure I'll come calling soon! :P --Jackmaster (talk) 00:03, 24 January 2017 (CET) 'Edit:' Mariel's picture and Marcel's picture are both likeness drawings of characters from a game (as I mentioned in the description. I know Marciel is created by the game's illustrator, and I have included the link to their page, copyright etc. I can't find the other picture again to check for any copyright. Will they be ok, or will we need to find oath images for them?

Yeah I think stick to third person! As much as I love second person as a tool, trying to write in second person for two constantly interchanging characters, although fun, would me too much chaos! First part if just about to go up (or may already be up by the time you read this :P). I'm thinking the second part can introduce the idea of swapping the ring between them. Hopefully there will be readers who want to contribute to the choices; it makes it so much easier when writing interactive stories, as I have no idea which of the three to go for! --Jackmaster (talk) 16:35, 24 January 2017 (CET)

Chit-Chat

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Trag (talk) 05:18, 12 December 2022 (CET) I'm wondering how I can post a story. I just recently got the contributor status, but I don't know how to post a story here. I need some help on that front. I can probably figure out the rest from there.

Hmm... didn't actually see where the option to do that was located. I guess I should look a little more carefully next time I'm editing something. Jemini (talk) 12:14, 12 December 2022 (CET)

Ok, found it. Not exactly in the most intuitive place as to let me find it even not knowing I had the option, but it was in just good enough of a place that I found it quickly when I was actually looking for it. Jemini (talk) 12:17, 12 December 2022 (CET)

idk how to make links to continue story, and such. & how 2 DM sum1.. God, Feast. (talk) 12:02, 17 December 2022 (CET)

If you're looking for recommendations on how to nail the format rules home for the new users, I would personally recommend linking to the specific subsection within the format rules when someone misses something critical. Like, a missing category? Or a scuffed link? Just link directly to Categories or Links respectively, instead of only linking the full format rules again. Linking to Full Format might also be helpful since it gives the user a good full picture of what the code for the page is supposed to look like. Or maybe link to a simple, existing story page like this so the user can get a more practical example of how stuff works correctly. Might be worth creating an example page for that so people don't accidentally mess up other people's work! (On that note, the "full format" is linked to on the front page but not under the Format Rules page, so it could also be helpful to add it there.)

Some of this might seem redundant since it's literally just one or two extra clicks for the user, but it COULD just make a difference since someone who has zero experience with html or editing pages will likely feel different. Like, I still remember when I was starting and had zero knowledge on the subject, just wondering, "wait, how the frick", and I'd imagine that most people are in a similar boat since this stuff hasn't probably been taught in school's IT classes in years. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 13:15, 17 December 2022 (CET)

Okay, I added categories to all of my media as requested. Thank you. --MikePeterson2468 (talk) 02:13, 27 December 2022 (CET)

Well... I don't necessarily want to become an admin, but I'm not completely opposed to the idea if nobody else bites the bullet. --Hgcollins (talk) 07:18, 4 January 2023 (CET)

Alright, that sounds good. I’m happy to help out. I was actually going to ask, would it be helpful to go add categories to all the old uncategorized pages so that the uncategorized list is actually useful? --Hgcollins (talk) 16:44, 5 January 2023 (CET)

Quick question: If I accidentally hit the block button, is there an easy way to undo that? I'm afraid I might do that sometime. --Hgcollins (talk) 05:25, 8 January 2023 (CET)

Thank you for the guidance, I really appreciate it as I get used to this. Hopefully, I get some feedback from other users on here and on the forum. Not having those is a real drain on motivation. --Authorinshadows (talk) 01:37, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the tip on chapters of my story Kids. The chapters got a little less self-contained than I thought. So yes, it should be one story in the meta category. I appreciate your offer to help, but maybe I should try to figure this out myself. --Benny Blanco (talk) 22:45, 4 July 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the contrib status, I'm working on adding my first story in, I reviewed the format rules. Let me know if there is anything I need to do differently wiki is completely new to me. --Chad.miller (talk) 17:26, 5 February 2024 (UTC)

Emily

Thanks for the trusted contributor status. I will keep an eye out for any vandals or people making a mess. I’ve also been able to upload a lot of AI art and managed to hack a template to get it working today. Emily (talk) 22:58, 24 January 2023 (CET)

HG Collins

Great news, there are no longer any pages without categories. --Hgcollins (talk) 07:00, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Also, I've been working on the possibility of adding a "Featured Stories" section that I don't mind curating every month or so. I was a little excited about it and basically rolled it out, but I felt like it needed a little work and its own dedicated page instead of linking straight to the stories from the main page. I'll work on it over the course of the week and see where I get with it. --Hgcollins (talk) 07:27, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Well, this time I actually rolled it out. I hope you like it. The feature page itself will take some work. but with a little effort, it will look really great. And don't worry, I won't be leaving any other surprises. This is the only one. Please don't kill me. --Hgcollins (talk) 07:51, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Sounds good, I don’t mind maintaining it and seeing where it goes. I could see doing it in a way that would allow it to be a little more static, too. But we’ll see. --Hgcollins (talk) 17:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Hey, a user just left a suggestion on my talk page about the idea of being able to find stories by specific interests: consensual, rape etc. That got me thinking we could add these to category pages and have perhaps a select few story categories that we link to from the homepage. Of course, I’d probably go back and add appropriate categories to current story categories. But the biggest challenge is getting users to adpot it correctly. Damn. That might be the issue… --Hgcollins (talk) 18:21, 28 June 2023 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. It’s just too complicated. At any rate, I‘m going to focus on making a nice “featured” section for now and see where it goes. I’m confident I can update it on a regular basis and eventually make an archive of featured stories. I think an author spotlight might be nice, but that gets a little more complicated since I don’t want to accidentally skip over an author and piss someone off. --Hgcollins (talk) 01:32, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

Any opinion on whether or not the new Featured Writers page should be open or an admin edit only? I keep going back and forth on it.--Hgcollins (talk) 17:11, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

MrPib

There are ways for admins to reset commands, although I think that the ones that allow an admin to directly change the password, require Sys-Admin permissions. MediaWiki/Manual:Resetting_passwords --MrPib (talk) 17:47, 1 July 2023 (UTC)

Mosethos

I'm not interested in the moderator position because I'm incapable of policing, but I have a thought. The formatting is fairly complicated when you just want to write. Assuming that it's out of the question to abandon the wikimedia format for a dedicated website with features like tag filters, automatic organization, etc., you could share a third party tool that formats everything for users so that they just have to copy and paste.

I already threw together a windows forum app for myself that achieves this while waiting for contributor status. I was hesitant to mention it because it's very unpolished, but it is fully functional. A user just has to write their content into the appropriate text fields and it's all processed into a formatted output window. I think a more experienced developer could make something way better, especially if they could make it a web app, but if you're interested it would motivate me to improve it. I want, for example, to make a decision tree so that the user could move between pages all in app and finish their entire story before starting the process of uploading to ATF. Also the ability to save/load stories. --Mosethos17 (talk) 20:59, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

Durzan

Hey Elerneron, a couple questions: 1. Is there a way to tell how popular or how much traffic my stories generate on here? 2. How do I go about applying for a position as a moderator for the story wiki? 3. Up for collaborating a bit regarding 7DI? --Durzan (talk) 12:16, 10 March 2024 (UTC)

Hey Elerneron, I got a few wiki pages I wanted to import for reference from another wiki site, but don't seem to have permission to do so. Could you help me with this? I think trusted users can import wiki pages... --Durzan (talk) 00:13, 10 September 2024 (UTC)

Date and Time preferences

Would it be possible for a date and time section added to the user preferences? I'm in a significantly different time zone from the host server, making it very confusing when looking at the recent changes page. --Durzan (talk) 22:55, 15 September 2024 (UTC)