Talk:Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Quarter/Perl

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At this rate you're gonna finish writing the first quarter before I even finish reviewing the first week (not that I mind). Once more you managed to grasp and execute something that I only had a rough idea and turn it into a consistent and polished result, so thanks for all the work you've done in this story, it wouldn't be the same without you (specially since you've written well over half of it). --Tod Naturlich (talk) 09:17, 3 January 2018 (CET)

Thanks, I actually wanted to go with a different format that would unfold her repeat visits to the disciplinary office a little more linearly, but I ultimately went with this because it would wind up crowding the main board a little too much with just stuff related to Perl. This way it's a lot neater organization wise. Jemini (talk) 09:50, 3 January 2018 (CET)

I think four visits is a little much for John to figure it out. By the time you get two visits knowing what she wants it's christmas break. I doubt they'd have an away soccer game so late in the year, and that's the proposed event to nail the rest of the cheerleaders. Should the away game be put off to spring, or should he figure things out earlier? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:13, 3 January 2018 (CET)

Even though Perl will go to the soccer game, she smart enough not to do something bad there. At most she would agree to take on a light punishment to show her commitment to the team and try to reduce the burden in the rest of the girls. But it's unlikely John would have anything on her during that trip. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 17:29, 3 January 2018 (CET)

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